This is my first FanFic ever. So just tell me what I can do better or what you like.
I'm going for mysterious.
Chapter one; prologue
A dark room, a cell and a vague shadow of a person in it. With a lot of noise a heavy door opened. The shadow moved and as the door opened you could just see the face of a man. A person walked inside of the room and closed the door behind him, he stood in front of the cell. Because of the dark you could not see his face anymore but he smiled.
''Why am I here?'' said a broken voice, the voice of the man sitting in the cell. He moved a little bit and moaned, then he sat still again.
''You know why you're here. Just as you know what you've done.'' Said a voice of a man, a heavy voice.
''Well, enlighten me.'' Said the broken voice but there was more courage in his voice. The man in front of the cell started walking back. He laughed and his hand was already on the heck of the heavy door.
''No, I'm not going to do the thinking for you. You have to do that yourself. Think your way out of this like you do in your books.'' The man opened the door a bit. ''Think fast, the clock is ticking.'' And the door was now fully open.
''Wait.'' Said the broken voice. The man sighed and turned back to the voice. ''Is she safe?'' he said and his voice sounded weak.
''I don't know. Remember, clock's ticking.'' Said the man and walked out of the door. Closing it with a loud bang. There was just enough light to see the face of the man now. The only thing to be seen are his blue eyes, staring into the darkness. Silence fell again and you only heard the heavy breathing of the man in the cell.
Well it may not be long. But more is coming. Please let me know what you think. ;)
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