i do not own naruto just to let you know, but still read and review

i recieved a review telling me to use the enter key more often so heres the improved story. P.S. - thanks for the review

"Ah it sure feels great to be alive!" Naruto says as he is taking a drink of some Hawaiian punch in a pair of orange swimming suits on a luxurious cruise. Naruto and the rookie nine along with Kakashi and team Gai have received a trip on a cruise for a week. Kiba came walking up to Naruto with some cool new shades and a white swimsuit with a black pawprint on it and asked him how Naruto talked Tsunade the fifth hokage into giving them this vacation. "Oh I have my ways." as he gave an enormous grin on his face remembering how he did it.

Flashback

Naruto Jiraiya and Tsunade are in Narutos apartment playing a little game of . . . strip poker. Naruto and Jiraiya were both completely covered in clothing including some of tsunades garments. However tsunade was about two hands away from being a part of jiraiyas new book. "Can we please stop." tsunade said while shivering from the lack of clothing.

"Why should we? Youre the one thats losing." jiraiya replied as he slowly snuck an ace into narutos hand without tsunade noticing. Tsunade yelled in desperation

"ill give you anything you want just name it!" after hearing this jiraiya gave a huge perverted smile tsunade saw this and said "except for that you sicko." jiraiya then started pouting while naruto was pondering what he could get.

"I got it! You can give me and my friends a cruise for a week absolutely free!" naruto exclaimed as if he were a genius. After tsunade also rejected that idea naruto said "its either that or what jiraiya wants." as he said that jiraiya got his pervy smile back but not for long as tsunade used a super punch to send him flying through the wall.

"Fine you can have your cruise." as tsunade said finally giving into the deal.

End Flashback

Narutos smile grew even bigger after going through the flashback about ten more times when suddenly he felt an extremely cold feeling all over his body. When he opened his eyes in front of him was sakura in a red one piece swim suit holding an empty pail of water. "Ill get you for that sakura!" yelled naruto as he shivers.

"Oh will you?" sakura asks as she is getting ready for a super punch into narutos gut.

"Um, on second thought, ill just let it slide for now." naruto said seeing the fist.

"Thats what I thought." sakura says knowing that she always wins against naruto "anyways everyone is deciding to play some volleyball in the pool, want to join?" naruto nods his head yes and eagerly runs towards the pool "no shadow clones this time ok naruto!".

"alright alright sheesh." naruto said as he went to the pool now disappointed.

The teams for the game were: naruto, kiba, shikamaru, shino, sakura, and tenten against chouji, neji, rock lee, hinata, ino, and kakashi with a handicap of course. After a while the score was narutos team 4 and kakashis team19. The reason for narutos team losing so badly was that rock lee kept on jumping up into the air and spike the ball straight down and if anyone got in the way they would end up unconscious. "Thats it rock lee now needs a handicap!" naruto complains about since hes not winning.

"Fine well make it that he can no longer jump unless it is necessary, but it probably wont because we only have two more points left." neji said knowing that they would win with their kind of team.

"Well in that case" kakashi said noticing what the score was "ill be heading off then to do some other business." and with that kakashi left the pool to go and read his book while also leaving his team one man down and also a handicap.

"No matter well still win." neji said with great confidence. Little did he know that with the disadvantage that they now had it was easier said than done. Finally after 5 hours of playing the score was naruto 19 and nejis 21 nejis team won but with all their players exhausted after the long fight to victory.

"Well im going to hit the hay now. How bout you hinata?" kiba asked as he yawned. "Im going to bed too." hinata replied "Good job on the come back guys." and with that statement everyone went in to their rooms and went to sleep.

(In the control room of the ship)

"Captain." a sailor said to the captain who was followed by kakashi. "What is it sailor?" asked the captain. "We have picked up a small vessel on the long-range radar sir, it could be a life boat from a wreckage sir." replied the sailor. "How far away is it?" "It will take us about till midday tomorrow to reach it." the captain glanced at the radar at bit more. "Very well then. Prepare a rescue team to go out to it tomorrow then." "Yes sir." afterwards the captain left the control leaving kakashi still staring at the radar. Kakashi thought "could it possibly be him? No it cant be he wouldnt still be using that old trick would he?"

The next day

BEEP BEEP BEEP BEEP BE-ZZT the alarm clock went off in narutos room and he snoozed it with one of his shuriken. "Yawn. Well time to get back at sakura today." naruto got out of bed and got dressed in an orange t-shirt and shorts with white outlining and took a bucket of water and went over to sakuras door.

KNOCK KNOCK sakura woke up and said "who is it?"

naruto replied in a feminine voice "cleaning maid. Open up please." he snickered.

"Ok one moment please." sakura got out of her bed in her pink night gown and opened up the door and once she did naruto tossed the bucket of water into her face.

"WO sakura um . . . nice gown you got there." naruto said as sakura looked down to see that her night gown was also a bit wet and revealing a bit too much.

"NARUTO!!!" sakura gave naruto her most powerful super punch she had ever delivered but to no good use because the naruto she punched was just one of his shadow clones. "He really thought this prank out didn't he." sakura was almost impressed "time to find the real one now and kill him." it looks like naruto didn't really think it through because there isn't really anyplace to hide from an extremely angry girl who has a super powered punch on a cruise ship.

In the afternoon, everyone was sitting down in the dining hall eating lunch except naruto and sakura. "Where on earth could sakura be?" ino asked tenten.

"Probably sleeping with naruto." tenten replied sarcastically but just after she said naruto came flying through the door screaming in mid-air and landing straight into ino and tentens table.

"I don't think they could sleep in the same house." ino whispered to tenten. Naruto was lying down on the now destroyed lunch table with an enormous black eye.

"I've learned a valuable lesson: never prank sakura unless you can get about 10 miles away from her when she gets pranked." after the place was cleaned up and naruto can somewhat see in his black eye akamaru came running in barking like crazy.

"What is it boy?" kiba asked his dog akamaru who lead them out to the front of the ship "what is it akamaru?" akamaru pointed out to the ocean in the direction of what appeared to be a man walking on the water carrying with him a knapsack on a stick.

"Hey whats that guy doing out in the middle of the ocean." naruto asked to anyone who could possibly know the answer. Kakashi comes walking up to the group of young shinobi to see what they are looking at

"hey guys whats with the big group wa . . ." kakashi stops his statement when he also sees the man on the water. He looks closer at the man and he sees an evil smile crawl across the mans face which makes kakashi wide-eyed in fear. "Everyone get away from the sides of the ship! Prepare for a fight!"

this is my first fanfic so please review so i can improve on my story telling skills