Hey guys! I'm Alex
So, I'm pretty new to this whole thing, I'm not even sure if should continue or not. It's the very first time i write a multi-chapter story...or even an actual story for that matter...It's just that, the idea came to me all of a sudden and I just couldn't live in peace again 'till i posted it. So i'm sorry if it's not good, keep in mind that i've never done this before. I appreciate cunstructive critizism but no flames please.
So please, tell me if i should continue or just stop and pretend that such a thing never happened. Lol, no seriously, even if you say that this sucks, sure i'll be a bit disappointed, but it's nothing that a couple of hours at the skatepark can't cure.
Well, here goes nothing. Hope you enjoy and please review!
Desclaimer: I don't own Kickin'it, but a girl can dream right?
Chapter 1
31st of October. Halloween. That particular festival all kids in Seaford, included teenagers, awaited the whole year.
Walking down the streets of Seaford on the night of Halloween you could see groups of hyper kids crusing down the neighborhood eager to get more candy, the occasional sound of music blasting from a house alerting you of a party going on full blast and on the very streets, see various posters on the poles and railings of different monsters. But you only fully got the Halloween vibe once you reached the center of it all. The park.
A huge banner adorned the entrance of the park with "Halloween Bash" written in big bold letters.
"I was working in the cab late one night when my eyes beheld and eerie sight for my monster from his slab began to rise and suddenly to my surprise..."
Screams of delight and fright filled the air along with laughter but among all this the lyrics of the songs still maneged to make themselves hear loud and clear. Everybody was screaming out the lyrics of 'Monster Mash' regardless of what they were currently doing. You would see people singing along while stuffing their faces with the bright orange colored sweets or even the little kids blurting out that least of the words they knew while chasing eachother.
You could clearly tell that Seaford, ableit being a small town, planned it's Halloween very thoughly.
Everybody was enjoying themselves on this night, it has been like this for a whole centuary now. After a long period of time filled with utter terror, darkness and bad luck. They thought their ancestors had taken care of everything and they had nothing to worry about. I mean, all was fine so why would it just change all of a sudden?
They thought that they would forever live in peace and go crazy on this night just for the fun of it, all like they always did and always will. But they seemed to forget that they were not the only ones who knew how to go crazy.
You see, no matter how beautiful and friendly Seaford seemed, the whole town was closed down with brick walls around it and a huge whirlwind just outside, waiting for the damned walls to break down so it could finally sweep into the town. After so long,
But they didn't know it. They thought they had no more boundries. None of them knew that everything was finally going to burst. None of them was aware of all the hell that was about to break lose. Everything they thought they had thrown in the air, never to see it ever again, was actually just there bottled up with everything else and waiting to come out at the right moment.
That night was the right moment. Just one more move, the right move, and the whirlwind begins.
There it is! So once again, please review and tell me if i should go on.