Disclaimer: I only owned them in my dreams, but the new guys are and one's Japanese history. WARNING: later in the story it wil get extremely bloody and there are concepts and characters taken from other things including,

Samurai warriors

.//hack games GU and the first series

Bleach

Dragon ball Z

Kingdom hearts 2

Naruto glanced around the room nervously. Hinata just offered him to copy off her paper but the Jonin on the other side was watching closely. Only thing he could do was sit there and wait for the final question. If he got the final question right he passed. Sasuke and Sakura seemed to be answering the questions with slight difficulty but he was having the hardest time of all. He couldn't say a word or the entire team would be disqualified and he would have to wait another year to take the test.

Naruto noticed Sakura writing like this wasn't a problem. He also saw Sasuke staring at someone's back but writing without looking. Naruto's anxiety was building up at an increasing rate. He heard teams being called out almost every second and each time the member that was caught apoligized to his team. Naruto couldn't imagine how much Sakura would hate him if he got caught with something.

Another team was called and the guy that was caught started screaming and had to be dragged out. Naruto smashed his head against the table constantly trying to think. He was stuck on the first question that asked him to name the affinities that could be used to improve Jutsus. Naruto wasn't sure what an affinity was and there was no chance he was going to no what they were.

"EVERYONE READY FOR THE LAST QUESTION"? Ibiki enjoyed torturing the students and making them more anxious than they should be. He considers striking fear into the hearts of kids a sport, you couldn't blame him though his job was an interrogation specialist. He turned around and started marking on the board. The mix of screams, sighs complaints and voices could be heard throughout the class.

The last question wasn't a question but a surprise. The "question" revealed that the entire point of the quiz was to cheat from the specific Chunin across the area or students with answers and not get caught. It said that the Jonin were removing people and were watching for people that had exceptional tactics on gaining information and marked them down. The requirements to pass were to be written down or to not be caught. Naruto thought to himself that because he wasn't caught he could move on even if he didn't answer a single question.

Ibiki laughed loudly and turned towards the group of Genin that was left. He announced that out of all the students that were here we were the only ones to pass. But he ruined the joyfull moment by mentioning the second exam staing that it could cost us our lives if we screw up there. After that one of the chunin opened the doors and let out all the students that passed. Naruto met up with the rest of his team including the teacher at the bell test area.

"Kakashi, we all passed all of us isn't that great". Both Sakura and Naruto jumped in front of their Sensei screaming. Sasuke rolled his eyes while sitting on the pole to the left. Kakashi was happy they made it but he knew that in a week they would have other people wanting to take their lives, not a few answers. "Kakashi, Sasuke was so cool he got all the answers right and none of the Chunins suspected him". Sasuke sighed as Sakura bragged about what he did.

"Well, I didn't even answer any of the questions and I still passed". Naruto added in hoping Sakura would notice how cool he was instead of Sasuke. Sakura started yelling at Naruto for being a Sasuke wannabe and Naruto was saying he's better than Sasuke. "I'm sorry to ruin the moment but if any of you didn't pass you all failed remember". Kakashi honestly wanted to ruin the moment, their argument over someone else was plain stupid to him.

Kakashi told his team to meet him at the village gates. None of the students understood why, all he said was it was important. Sakura decided to follow Sasuke and watch him train, Naruto went off to Ichirakus to eat. When he arrived he saw that Kurenai has took her team of Shino, Kiba, and Hinata for all you can eat. Kiba was eating like an animal obviously entertaining Hinata and Shino ate quietly while Kurenai wondered if she could pay for this.

Naruto sat down next to Hinata and decided to thank her for the offer she gave him during the exam. "Hinata thanks for the help but if I accepted we would have been caught". Hinata looked at Naruto with a shade of red spreading across her face. Naruto never understood why she did this though, but he decided not to end the conversation. "If I got caught Sakura would have gotten mad and then there would be no chance of me getting her attention".

Hinata's blush faded, she wondered why Naruto would want Sakura's attention. It was obvious to the world that Hinata liked or even loved Naruto but he just didn't notice. "N..Naruto why do you like S..Sakura"? Naruto heard this and turned towards Hinata. Most would pick up the upset tone in her normally shy voice but once again Naruto didn't catch on. He began spitting out reasons like his life depended on it.

"She's really pretty and she has a great smile. Sakura also has a good personality and the perfect figure". Once Hinata heard about her figure she decided to leave. Once she left Kurenai thanked the man that took the orders and left. Naruto waved at Hinata and ordered a bowl of ramen. He got the ramen free because it was for students during the chunin exams. Naruto ate ramen until Iruka walked in and sat next to him.

"Hey Naruto, you passed the first exam that's great but be careful. The other two exams are a lot harder and you guys have students that aren't from konoha too so good luck". Naruto was about to go on about how hard the test was but stopped when Iruka started to leave.

"Iruka, where are you going"? Naruto was finished with the ramen and followed behind Iruka. The chunin turned around and saw that Naruto was behind him.

"Naruto, there's going to be new students and the Hokage wants me to finish some papers, and don't you have something to do". Iruka reminded Naruto about Kakashi and the rest of his team. Naruto paniced and ran to the gates after saying bye to his old teacher. He arrived to realize that he showed up after Kakashi for once.

"Your late idiot, you're holding me and Sasuke up". Naruto ran over panting just to hear Sakura start yelling again. Every time Sasuke's late she gets worried saying he has a perfectly good reason. Minutes later Kakashi finished explaining how dangerous the exams are going to get. Sasuke seemed excited by the idea of having a challenge, Sakura was worried and Naruto thought he's finally going to get some real action.

"What about the new students Iruka told me about Kakashi". Kakashi answered Naruto even though he thought it was best if he didn't know. Naruto was quick to pick fights but the new students have criminal records but were recommended by the other villages. Kakashi didn't want Naruto getting into a bigger mess than he could handle.

"The new students, oh yes, they will be skipping the first exam. They will be here some time this week and will take the second test Monday". Kakashi spun around a bored with two drawings and one photo on it. The first drawing to the left displayed a tanned boy with his black hair spiked back into red tips. The middle picture was also a tanned boy that had silver hair slightly above his shoulders. The third boy was the only photo, he had black hair that hung down to the lower part of his neck and unreasonable red eyes.

"Why are two drawings but the other a picture"? Sasuke asked curiously, Naruto wondered what Sakura saw in the guy. But he was right two were only colored sketches while the other came from a camera.

"Well, you see Sasuke we have yet to see the students so we had to go by the description of them. The hokage refused to answer who told him this but, he came back with the description and this is what we got". It was apparent that only thing the teachers know was their looks and nothing else. If something is kept secret from the Jonin that means they will have their own teacher.

Once Naruto focused on the two drawings he felt a pain as if his stomach was burning. He felt chakra flowing threw him rapidly and tried to surpess it. Naruto tried to play off that he was fine but in his head he heard the bone chilling roars of something deep inside him. Sasuke also felt the effects but they were different and were originated from different sources.

Sasuke swore he saw the black haired boy before. He knew it wasn't true but he just had that unusual feeling. He thought he felt the curse mark on his neck just activate but then shut off immediately. Both Sakura and Kakashi saw how they were acting, Kakashi put away the pictures while sakura woke them up.

"I guess I'll leave you guys to celebrate. If you need me I'll be by the monument reading". It was obvious to tell he had a perverted grin on his face as he slipped out the Make-out paradise book. He turned away and walked off waving with his left while holding the book in his right. The team decided to split up and celebrate by relaxing. Sasuke went to the Uchiha graveyard and Sakura went home, she knew the look Sasuke had before he went there and decided to leave him alone.

Naruto went to his room and decided to have a ramen fiesta in his room. He grabbed all the instant ramen he could find and made all of it. He devoured all the ramen and fell asleep. Naruto dropped on his bed and relaxed, he slowly drifted off to sleep satisfied and full of pride.

Naruto opened his eyes but he wasn't in his room. He knew it was a dream but no matter how much he tried to wake up, he couldn't. He heard growls and roars coming from in front of him. It seemed as if he was inside a sewer, behind him was a wall and there were nine doors lined along the grey brick wall. Each door was on the left side of him and he decided to open the first one. It was locked along with the second door.

At this point Naruto began to panic. He was trapped in a dream he couldn't control and the growling noises grew louder. Naruto walked next to the ninth door, he instatly new the source of the noise was inside. There was also a feeling inside him that said he couldn't leave until he new what was inside. Naruto touched the door and the growling became silent, he opened it expecting a huge monster but only saw a row of bars cutting the room in half.

Naruto stepped in and saw a seal floating at least fifteen feet in the air in front of the bars. "Kyubi chakra limiter", Naruto said understanding what it was. Naruto heard the growls again and looked behind the bars to see two red eyes looking directly at him. Each tooth in it's mouth were at least half the size of Naruto.

"Damn you boy, you can't free me and you'll die horribly using my power. The Orochi is gaining power and all you can think of is becoming Hokage, he won't hesistate to destroy everything unlike me". Naruto was unsure on what Kyubi just told him and he was even more confused on what the Orochi was. The seal that kept in Kyubi began to flash, the seal flashed three times and on the fourth time it woke Naruto up. It was the middle of the night when he woke up. After a few minutes of thinking he considered it a bad dream and went back to sleep.

A man dressed in black stepped forward to a giant window purple tinted window. The window was divided into four sections, the bottom section showed seven circles each with a different beast in it. The left piece was the purple tinted side with the eight-tailed snake, Orochi facing the right side. The right piece was red and depicted the nine tailed fox, Kyubi facing the left. The window was at the end of the room and seemed to be the only decorated thing. It was to dark to see anything else but the two beasts seemed to glow in the dark room.

The man looked at the top of the window noticing the eight circles that held different monsters known as death gods. The hooded man pulled off the hood revealing grey skin, yellow eyes with fang markings under them and red dreads. He raised one hand and the sleeve of his robe sled back showing a gold gauntlet on his left arm with the darkness symbol on it. He placed his hand on the orochi and sled it across all eight heads and eight tales. He knew soon that he would become the Jinchuriki of this magnificent power.

He began to turn around and walk out of the dark room until an enormous hiss from a snake was heard. He closed his snake like eyes and looked up as if he was worshipping the source of the noise. He took in a deep breath knowing that because he killed the entire clan that would control the seal it would be days before he could obtain it's power. A shinobi dressed in a dark purple appeared in front of him. The eight slashes that are on his crowned shaped headband informed him it was a servant of his. The servant kneeled before him and delivered the worst news that would cost him his life.

"Lord Fuma, the seal was broken but it seems that the power of our god was drained before we arrived. It will take at least six years for it's abilities to return to full power, if we made you Jinchuriki now it would devour your chakra, life and then your soul and you will be enslaved by it". The poor servant new this was the end of him. He wanted this to end, he couldn't continue living after being a part of countless massacres. All of Lord Fuma's army was forbidden to show emotion. There code was that emotions weakened you and this certain person couldn't continue living like this.

Kotaro was enraged by this failure, he cursed then proceeded to take his anger out on the messenger. Fuma pulled up his left hand and stabbed it directly through the neck of the messenger. The messenger coughed blood onto his former leaders arm and smiled slightly. He was finally out of this hell and he knew that thought it was over. Fuma also smiled, twisted his hand and pulled it out splashing blood across the floor. He knew that this failure would live for at least two minutes. He snapped his fingers on his right hand and two other shinobi appeared. He pointed at the dying body and they knew he wanted it fed to Orochi.

Feeding a living thing to Orochi could be compared to burning off its skin with acid then damning its soul to slavery as a warrior to be summoned when needed. Once the dying servant heard this he began cough up more blood attempting to scream and tears flowed down his face in horror. He has heard that the cursed blade tortures your soul, Kusanagi and it keeps you from finding peace if you're defeated in battle by pulling you back to the Orochi to be devoured once again. This fact was proven with the time it roars, the roars are replaced by the screams of the souls inside.

The two shinobi grabbed the dying one and were gone with a puff of smoke. The only thing left was the blood that was sprayed across the floor, Kotaro Fuma tasting the blood on his gauntlet, and the window of the demons and gods.

This is the improved chapter 1. Please read and review, the other chapters will be improved later.