CalmAsWater- This is a rewrite of my first fanfiction ever. Yes, my first fanfiction was a Twilight fanfiction. Sad isn't it? Some of you may disagree. Say it's awesome and stuff. But I'm just rewriting it to get it out of the way. I wrote it way back at the beginning of sixth grade, in…2009? 2010? I can't remember, but I was in sixth grade and I'm going to be a freshman in August. It's been about 3-4 years. I have it somewhere in my room at my mom's house. I'll post a spork of that later. I made Elizabeth a lot more tolerable. I made Jasper and her wizards(in her case, a witch) from Harry Potter because I had just gotten into the books. She was also half werewolf and a vegetarian vampire. Now, she's still Jasper's sister and a vampire, just not vegetarian. Big Mary-Sue right? Hey, first fanfiction. Okay, I'll stop rambling and start writing.

Currently listening to: Unforgiven (Acoustic version) by Blood on the Dance Floor

Black Rose(the story of Elizabeth Whitlock) chapter one-

What did I deserve to earn this cruel punishment? You took my brother from me. He was my only friend and only person who put up with me. I was a good girl. I wanted to see him again, but I never knew that my human life was the cost I had to pay to see him. I'd rather burn in hell than live forever in this immortal state. I was only sixteen. Too young to lose my life. She agreed to let me live if I had the power he did. What does that mean? Power he had? I don't have any power. I'm not some supernatural freak.. Oh, wait. I am.

This burn in my throat killed me. What is this pain? Kill me, please. All I wanted was my brother back. Not spend eternity with him. I hope you realize we live in a cruel world.

"Is she waking up?"

"I think so. She's in pain." Someone laughed.

"Of course she's in pain! It's not an easy process becoming one of us." One of us? What did she mean?

"No it's not, Maria. When will she wake?"

"An hour or so. I think she can hear us. Her eyes will open later." As she spoke, my eyes opened and I saw millions of dust particles. I heard Maria walk away.

"Elizabeth? Can you hear me?" Is he talking to me? Is there anyone else in the room who's asleep? "You probably can. You Idiot." He chuckled. "I love you, too. But to go this far just to see your brother? You are crazier than I thought." He said, I wanted to slap him then. No one calls me an idiot and crazy.

"Jasper," I could hear Maria's feet walking in the room. "Let's go on a little hunting trip before she wakes up." I hated this bitch already. She was talking to him as if she was his.. Wife or something.

"Yes, Maria." Jasper said, he was leaving? I tried to open my mouth to stop him, but it wouldn't open. I heard them walk off and knew I was alone.

When Jasper came back, he tried talking to me again.

"Elizabeth. I hope you wake soon. Your emotions are killing me." Did he just say 'my emotions are killing him?'

"Yes- Elizabeth! Your awake!" He exclaimed.

"I've been awake. I just couldn't move." I said sitting up.

"I know that." He smiled and I realized his features frightened me. His teeth were pure white. Instead of light blonde, his hair was a beautiful honey color. His bright red eyes replaced that blue that was my favorite color in the world.

"What are you? What am I?" I asked, he frowned.

"Vampires"

CalmAsWater- YAY! I finally finished chapter one! One day, I WILL write more than one page. This almost made it. Hit that review button if you want me to continue. I'll be waitingJ

Currently listening to: Unforgiven by Blood on the Dance Floor (The version that isn't acoustic)