I'm rewriting this shit. It plain sucks, especially the language so I'm rewriting it

Prologue

Komushi was dead. It was all his fault, his carelessness led him to his death. It was his fault that he killed Komushi, whether indirectly or not. But, to think that he forgives him. Unbelievable. How can he forgive his killer so easily? Just because he was his friend?

Sasori clenched the letter addressed to him by Komushi, brought to him by his grandmother who came in and expressed her apologies for not being able to help him. She had had to kill him to prevent him from suffering much more. He looked at the floor, only to zoom in on something. He forgot that he was holding the scroll Komushi had given him along with the letter. He brought the scroll towards his face before letting his hand drop once more, leaving towards his workshop with the scroll clutched tightly in his hands.

But he never noticed nor cared in his haste to go to the workshop, that he dropped the crumpled letter from Komushi. In there started off with a messy handwriting, before it got a lot neater.

Sasori! It's me! Komushi

Stop blaming yourself for my death. It was not your fault! Stop beating yourself over it. It wasn't your fault in any ways. I knew that I was going to die... Did you have to make a painful one? But nice job! Anyways, you know what my dream is right? To be a great shinobi like you, where everyone will praise my skills in puppeteer. So, I gave you this scroll especially. It was written by a cousin thrice removed….or was it more? I don't remember.

He experimented on a new jutsu and he made an alive puppet! The soul is of course, not from this world! Isn't that amazing? The other world soul had even gave us an idea! That's why we have electricity! But they all forgot their own names so you have to give them one!

The other world soul was an engineer! They have a lot of occupations over there! No shinobi, but instead, they have the navy force (Which is for the seas), the air force and the military! Their tactics are soooooo cool! Especially when they have millions of thousand years of history! We only can recored our history up to only the Rikudo Sennin's time.

So I'm giving you this scroll so you won't be lonely

From your friend,

Komushi

END!

I'm hoping this has a better grammar. But Komushi? I feel like his personality and grammar would be like that. No...It's not an excuse