Kyur 4 The Itch


Trip Like I Do: Debbie McIlvane


I hear your voice over the phone,

it's different than before, almost gravely in a way

I come outside as you request wearing nothing but my undergarments

I smile apprehensively when you call me by name

When you come out the shadows I grow cold within

Shocked at the sight of the ghastly beast standing across from me

This isn't my Ben Grimm

He claims this is a result of the accident Ben the and others had in space

I don't believe the orange golem

I take a step back when he approaches me

I flee from possible danger as he continues to claim he's my husband-to-be. . .


In the raging crowd of jeers and cheers I find myself

I had been home when I saw the news covering the Brooklyn Bridge accident

Things around me were burning when I arrive

People were screaming, running back and forth from one place to another

Somewhere down the bridge where the most damage was done people were cheering

I break through the crowd to see what was going on

The Fantastic Four standing together, confused

I recongize Reed Richards and wonder where my Ben has gone too . . . .

The orange Golem stands before all the others

Our eyes meet for a moment

He advances forward, elated to see me

I edged back in fear shaking my head

My fingers clutched my diamond engagement ring

It slipped off so easily

Like our vow had from my mind

Eyes blurred my tears as I leave the ring

Ben Grimm no longer exits

In his place resides a Golem

A Thing

I flee once more from the beast

I am thankful it persues me no longer


(FIN)

Authors note: Thank you Tricia for informing me that Debbie and Ben were Engaged and a significant other for explaining to me the rules of "marriage and engagement" proceedings. ----- Sakura123