A/N: Well I've decided to do the preview as the start of chapter 1. So please read this again, and
Chapter 1
"God there is never anything to do in the house!" the Red chipmunk said in a depressive voice.
He was home alone, he had nothing to do. His brothers and Dave were out at the park, and Alvin decided to stay behind because he hated the park. Soon afterwards, he regretted that descision, but the park was too far away to walk to.
His stomach started to rumble so he stood up and went to the kitchen to make popcorn. As he reached to get the popcorn over the stove, his sweater snagged one of the dials turning it on, without him realizing it, on high. Then, as he went to go put the popcorn in the microwave, he started to smell gas. But he ignored it, and hit the popcorn button on the microwave.
A mere few seconds of the microwave on, it cause a spark and the room exploded with fire. In a matter of minutes the whole house was caught on fire. As Alvin tried to escape the inflamed kitchen, the stove exploded, sending shrapnel cascading through the air, striking Alvin in the back, sending him stumbling to the floor.
As Alvin lay there, his bloodied back, filled with searing metal, as the flamed engulfed his ravaged body, he lay their in endless agony, as his soul was lost in endless time, he cried out in pain as he soul was to ascend into heaven, the Devil himself commanded he soul be dragged to hell. As his body was destroyed by fire, his soul would be scarred by the fires of hell. And as his life left him, he had one thought run through his head. What did I do to deserve this insufferable torment?
As heaven had prepared to take the chipmunk's now forsaken soul, no soul was to come, for his soul was chained and dragged down to the grasps of hell. When finally he reached hell, he pulled his head from the ground, and spoke aloud into the endless abyss that surrounded him.
"What is the reason for my insufferable torment to continue in this devastated abyss?" his voice echoed through the surroundings. Suddenly the room light as thousands of fires instantly burst out to reveal a demonic figure before the fallen chipmunk at his knees. The demon had large horns that curved back behind his devilish head. Upon his head, he bore the crown of unholy fire.
"Who... are you?" The chipmunk said with no emotion in his voice.
"Who am I? I am the satanic being know as Lucifer, ruler of Hell, dimished to rot in this god forsaken place. But, enough about me. This is about you, Alvin Seville"
the demonic figure said in a possessed voice as by the devil who acclaimed to be.
"Why me? What did I do for this punishment?" he said lowly.
"Because your death shouldn't be today. So i will make it so. But... I offer you a deal."
"If you truely want to live on earth, the price... is your soul. And as a bonus, i will give you all of my satanic powers as well. So... Alvin Seville, will you take this deal and life as an immortal over the world, or should i throw your soul into the endless abyys of hell? Your choice."
Alvin was drowned in thoughts, he thought everything through. If he didn't, he would break Brittany's heart, but if he did, could he deal with being shunned by the world for selling his own SOUL to the devil? Or did he have to? Maybe he could just never use the powers. He told him he would get the powers, but he didn't say he had to use them. Or use all of them at least. Finally he came to a descision he knew he wouldn't regret.
"I will give you my soul for my Earth bound life and the powers you may grant me.
"Well, you have made a wise choice Alvin Seville."
The devil pulled out an old parchment. Upon the top of the paper it read, Contract of Evil Souls Binding Agreement. The devil cut the tip of Alvin's thumb, making it bleed, and told him to sign with blood on the line at the bottom of the contract. When he did this, his hand instantly healed itself. Alvin was shocked at this for a moment. Just then, a bolt of tainted energy struck Alvin, as his soul left his new body, and his soul was dragged down, down to the abyys where it would stay for eternety.
"Oh I almost forgot, your house has been fixed, just like that. As you signed your life to me, I repaired your home. Now remember, you cannot die, but you will never go to heaven. Think of it somewhat of a living hell if you will. A hell, you can control.
The devil grinned as he sent Alvin back to his home. He awoke to a familiar voice.
"Alvin? Are you ok?" Simon said to him from the door.
Alvin sat up and grinned respoding to his little brother.
"Yes, I'm fine." with a smirk smeared across his face.
Wow. Was that a good chapter 1 or what? I'm suprised i wrote all of that for chapter 1. Oh well, I'll work on chapter 2 after i get some good response from this, So review if you want some more of this story, thats the only way. I love reviews, and i need to know people are reading this.
