Hello, this is my first story I've been writing for two months, Please read and review!
Itaiacs "talking"
Underlines 'thinking'
Itaics Underlines (Author's comments)
Chapter 1
It had been two years since they fell in love and kept it a secret from everyone even Hyuugas and Akatsuki. One day in spring, Hinata was in her room after a harsh (very harsh, mind you) training with her father, Hisashi, bandaging her wounds when she heard knocking on her bedroom door, she asked "who's knocking" in fear it might be Hiashi, her father, she was relived when she heard her sister's reply "Hannabi", she sighed as she spoke "Come in, sis" Hannabi did as told.
Hinata asked "What do you want, Hana?" Her sister replied "I was worried…. no, cross that, I got worried when I see you wounded from your training with Father so I just had to come and see you" Hinata hugged her sister "Thank you…. Again?" she spoke last word when she heard knocking, Hannabi fell onto floor laughing, and she spoke "who's knocking?" Neji" Hinata fell onto floor sweatdropping "Come in…" Hannabi got back on bed along with Hinata.
Neji shook his head at scene and asked "Hinata, are you okay? You got me worried" the girls sweatdropped and the Hyuuga heiress murmured "you two are same…." Then her phone rang, she picked it up "Hullo? Hinata here…oh, hi, sweetie!……?!…Oh sure!….meet me at West Gate tonight at midnight!…..oh, she's doing well" she spoke 'she's doing well' while looking at Hannabi "…Okay, bye!" as she hung up, Neji and Hannabi asked "who was that?" "My boyfriend" was the reply, which earned odd stares from two Hyuugas in the room, Hinata asked "What?" "Nothing" was only reply Hinata shrugged and asked "What's for dinner?" Neji replied sadly "Hiashi said none for you, Hinata-sama" the girls gasped. (hehehe)
The heiress was outraged "Why?" other Hyuugas sadly replied "We don't know why" and Neji spoke "When we found our, we knew we had to treat you to dinner tonight instantly!" Hinata smiled and spoke "Let's go!" so they all left the mansion to eat out. Just as they entered marketplace, they spotted a pink-haired and blond-haired girls, they all knew it was Sakura and Ino. Hinata called "Ino-chan! Sakura-chan!" both girls heard and ran over to three Hyuugas and greeted "Hinata-chan! Neji-chan! Hannabi-chan!" Ino then noticed Hinata's wounds and asked "Hinata, what happened to you?!" Hinata didn't reply because she was shocked.
To-Be-Continued
Now, wasn't that good chapter? I apologize if it was too short for your likings. please review! Sasori makes an appearing in next chapter. Tell me if any of chractors are...OOC. lol Ta-ta!
Lxylia