Millimerick

Good evening, terribly sorry to see

That you, miss, are in great need of me

I've assessed the scene

Did Daddy play mean?

We can't let him go, miss, now can we? ♥

No mourning for I'm your new salvation

I'll bring him home with your co-operation

Just call out his name

(Each time it's the same

So desperate, and my fun's begun) ♥

No crying, your dear one is simply improved

You can hold him, your lives are renewed

(Now it's his turn to cry

And you'll soon see why

You turned love into both of your dooms) ♥

Now a final good eve, I bid you adieu

I find this skin quite fetching, how about you?

You're my new machine

Show Daddy who's mean

To follow my hand's all you can do. ♥


Good evening, terribly sorry to see

That you, sir, are in great need of me

Each time the same scene

Dad will always be mean

We can't let you go, sir, now can we?♥


I'm half pleased with this... clearly not a fabulous poet, the rhyme weighed me down (not to mention meter, which flew away with a teeze), and it isn't as profound as I was going for but hopefully it's not a dreadful read. The hearts are my favorite, relo! Also... in case you didn't pick up on this, the single line is to add a longer than usual pause before the last stanza (basically a repetition of the first) which exists to add a sense of repetition and endlessness to this process of creating Akuma. The miss and sir are no one in particular, just nameless victims of the Earl.

Also, I must credit the genius title combination of Millenium and Limerick to a reader here at ground zero who typed it for me and left his/her title of choice. Would that I'd thought it up first.