Alright everyone, I have gotten plenty of criticism about this chapter. Well I've have quite enough. Due to popular demand, I have decided to revise all of the "Shit" chapters so they match. Maybe now, people will stop hating on me. I was young when I wrote this. I didn't get my true knack for writing until the first "play" formatted chapter. So with further ado...the new "A Place To Crash"

It was just one of those normal days in Konoha. Everything was peaceful and serene. It was a place where everbody was nice to everyone else. Hinata Hyuga was hanging out with her friends, Sakura, Temari, Tenten, and Ino. They were just a bunch of 16 year-old girls looking for a good time. They had stopped into a teahouse for something to drink. Ino decided to spice things up alittle bit.

Ino-- Hey guys, let's have a drinking contest.

Temari-- Ino, I don't think we're old enough to drinking just yet. Don't you think?

Ino had gotten alittle irritated at this comment.

Ino-- What's the matter, are you scared or something?

Temari had gotten pretty steamed when she said that.

Temari-- Fine then, but I'll only do it if everyone joins in.

Ino-- You heard the girl.

Sakura-- Fine.

Tenten-- What's the worst that can happen?

Hinata-- Oh, okay.

A few hours later, they left the tea house, all of them totally tanked. Sakura had offered to walk Hinata home but Hinata said to her she would be fine. So, Hinata stumbled her way back home. A few blocks away was somebody Hinata had a crush on for a long time. As Naruto passed through the park, he saw somebody stumbling around. Naruto walked over to help her up.

Naruto-- Uh...excuse me but...Hinata? Is that you? What happened to you?

Hinata-- Naruto...how come you don't ask me on a date? Aren't I as pretty as any other girl? Don't I offer the same as they do?

Naruto-- Hinata, have you been drinking?

Hinata-- Woops...guilty as charged...hehehehehe

Naruto picked her up slowly.

Naruto-- Come on, I'll take you someplace where you can sleep it off.

Naruto jumped onto a roof and made his way to his place. He would've taken her to her house but he knew how her father would react if a boy brought her daughter home stone cold drunk. Naruto opened the door and carried her inside. He placed her in his bed and pulled the covers over her.

Naruto-- Sleep it off okay?

The next morning, Hinata woke up because the sun was shining in her face. She covered her eyes and pulled the blinds shut. Hinata heard someone talking to her.

Naruto-- It's about time you woke up. You've been out for almost 15 hours.

Hinata had figured out where she was and nearly passed out. She was in Naruto's home. She opened her eyes and Naruto handed her a cup of coffee.

Naruto-- Here, that will wake you up.

Hinata-- Thank you...

Naruto-- Hmm...

Hinata-- Naruto, how did I get here?

Naruto-- You don't remember?

Hinata-- Remember what?

Naruto-- I found you in the park about to puke your guts out on a swingset.

Hinata-- Oh...sorry for inconveniencing you.

Naruto-- No inconvenience at all.

Hinata drank the rest of her hot coffee. Naruto took her mug and stood up.

Naruto-- Hey, I bet you're hungry right?

Hinata just looked at him with a blank stare.

Naruto-- Ahh...I know that look, come with me, I'll fix you up.

Naruto held out his hand. Hinata reluctantly took his hand and he pulled her up from the bed. He led her to his kitchen and she sat down at his table. He laid a plate down in front of her. Hinata thought someone like Naruto would have pushed a bowl of ramen in front of her but she saw a delicious looking omelet with cooked ham. Hinata was starving so she pigged out on it.

Naruto-- I suppose you were hungry?

Hinata-- Oh...sorry...Naruto...

Naruto-- It's fine...go ahead...have at it.

Hinata shoved the rest of it down and had a second portion since Naruto was offering. After she was done eating Naruto and Hinata had walked outside.

Hinata-- Naruto, thanks for breakfast...and taking care of me...and well...everything...

Naruto-- It was perfectly alright. You were a fun houseguest.

Hinata-- Well...uh...

Naruto-- Hinata?

Hinata-- Yes?

Naruto opened her hand and dropped a key in it.

Naruto-- I know you're dad is kinda high maintenance so if you ever need a place to crash or pass out...

Hinata blushed when he said that.

Naruto-- You can just...let yourself in okay?

Hinata-- I can keep this?

Naruto-- Of course you can. Well see ya okay?

Naruto jumped off the ledge of the apartment building.

Hinata-- Wow...

Hinata just stared at the key all the way home.

Elsewhere...

Naruto-- What a way to start the day.

Elsewhere...

Naruto was in Tsunade's office, talking to Sakura about some miscellaneous thing when an ANBU walked in.

ANBU-- Lord Hokage, there is a matter I must discuss with you...

Tsunade-- I see.

After they finished talking, Tsunade caught Naruto and Sakura's attention.

Tsunade-- There is a prince from the hidden Star village that just arrived. There has been some tension between Star and Waterfall and I need you two, escort him to the Waterfall village so some political negotiation can take place. Can you do it?

Naruto-- Sure thing.

Sakura-- No problem.

Tsunade-- One last thing...Neji Hyuga is on assignment, therefore you need someone who can be your scout so I want you to take Hinata Hyuga with you.

Naruto-- Umm...alright.

Naruto and Sakura left her office.

Naruto and Sakura made their way to the Hyuga mansion.

Sakura-- Some people have all the luck...

Naruto-- Yep.

Sakura-- Come on.

Sakura and Naruto walked into the building. They went to see Hinata, who was still nursing a hangover in the garden.

Sakura-- How are ya feeling?

Hinata-- I'd be better if I was a medical ninja to just make my hangover go away.

Sakura-- Yeah...

Sakura gave her some special medicine so she could feel better.

Hinata-- Wow, that works fast.

Naruto-- Hinata, we came to ask you for a favor...

Hinata-- What is it?

Sakura-- We were just assigned a mission and we were told by the Hokage to enlist you.

Hinata-- I see...well...give me 5 minutes to put a bag together.

Sakura-- Alright.

Hinata left to go upstairs.

Naruto-- When do we leave?

Sakura-- Tonight.

Naruto-- I hope this kid isn't some brat.

Sakura-- He probably is. All those noble types are.

Naruto-- Just my luck.

Hinata came back down and they left to go meet the prince.

Hinata-- I'll tell Naruto how I feel before this trip is over...

The team walked to the gate where they met the prince.

Sakura-- Hello.

The prince was kinda shy so he hid behind a pillar.

Sakura-- What's wrong?

Naruto-- Hey Sakura, I think he has a crush on you...

Sakura-- Who could blame him? Look at me.

Hinata felt alittle down at this comment because she was scared Naruto liked Sakura over her.

Tsunade-- Alright, off you go.

The prince followed Sakura, Naruto, and Hinata through the gate.

Sakura-- So, your highness, what are these negotiations about?

Prince-- Oh...just some army talk...

Sakura-- I see...

Naruto-- At least he'll be quite.

Unknown to them, they were being watched. 3 masked figures watched them through binoculars.

Mask 1-- Alright you 2, remember the plan, you 2 take out his escorts and I'll take the prince.

Mask 2-- Yes sir.

Mask 3-- Alright.

They all poofed into smoke.

As the group progressed, a barrage of kunai with exploding tags were shot at them. They dodged the explosions and leapt into the trees. The first masked ninja appeared before them. He pulled off his mask.

??-- My name is Hoshiyomi of the village hidden behind the sun. Just give up and hand over that brat.

Naruto-- Fuck off.

Hoshiyomi-- Really?

Hoshiyomi rushed at Naruto when he said that. The other 2 had ambushed them from behind. Hinata and Sakura and knocked into a tree but they used substitution.

Hinata-- Crap. Byakugan!

Hinata saw them in the canopy above them. She threw kunai at them and Sakura and her went to attack them. The prince had hid under a tree trunk. Naruto faught Hoshiyomi himself. Naruto was hammered through some trees by Hoshiyomi's super strength.

Naruto-- Hehe...

Hoshiyomi-- What's so...?

He had hit a shadow clone. The real Naruto appeared behind him.

Naruto-- Odama Rasengan!

Naruto dug the giant Rasengan into his back and he was drilled into a large boulder. Hoshiyomi was injured pretty badly but he was not dead.

Hoshiyomi-- Sun Style: Saruhashigan!

Hoshiyomi used a jutsu that released a burst of incredibly hot steam that burned Naruto, Hoshiyomi then kicked him up into the air and focused chakra into his hand and punched Naruto into the ground with great force. Naruto had been knocked out. Hoshiyomi had left him there to get the prince. He found him under the tree and started to reach for him.

Hoshiyomi-- Come here you...

Hoshiyomi didn't see what was coming behind him. He was punched in the face by a red assailant. Naruto was covered with the fox chakra. Naruto then kicked him in the chest with an incredible force so great, not even Tsunade could stand up to it. Naruto enclosed him in a giant chakra hand and crushed him, and then he threw into a tree where his blood splashed all over the tree. Sakura and Hinata and finished off their opponents and returned. Naruto had reverted back to his regular form.

Naruto-- Come on...let's go.

Sakura pulled the prince out of the tree. They had gotten to the village the next day. As Naruto was sleeping, Hinata came and woke him up.

Naruto-- Hinata, what is it?

Hinata-- I have to talk to you. Could you come with me?

Naruto-- Alright.

Sakura had one eye open. Hinata had led Naruto with her to an abandoned warehouse.

Naruto-- What are we doing here?

Hinata-- There's something I want to ask you.

Naruto-- What is it?

Hinata-- Well...Naruto, I've felt this way for a long time and wondered if maybe you'd feel the same way...

Naruto--...

Hinata-- What I wanted to ask you was...do...you...do you...what I mean to say is...do you...love me?

Naruto-- What?

Hinata-- I'm so stupid!

Hinata turned to run away but Naruto grabbed her.

Naruto-- Hinata, what do you mean by that?

Hinata-- I mean...do you have romantic emotions toward me?

Naruto-- I didn't think someone would ask me something like that.

Hinata-- Hmmm...

Naruto-- Hinata?

Hinata-- Yes?

Naruto-- You know, I've always had kind of a soft spot for you. I always thought you were so cute when you'd get embarrassed over the smallest thing.

Hinata-- Yeah?

Naruto-- Yeah. And when...you mess up, you do everything you can to make it better.

Hinata-- Really?

Naruto-- But I suppose the thing I liked the most was when you smiled.

Hinata-- Really?

Naruto-- Yes.

Hinata-- Yes?

Naruto-- Yes.

Hinata-- Yes?

Naruto-- Yes, already, yes.

Hinata felt a humoungous burst of happiness and hugged Naruto, he hugged her back. Sakura was watching through the broken down roof.

Sakura-- Wow Hinata, I never thought you would do it.

The next day, they left back to the village. They had reported back to Tsunade. Hinata just couldn't stop looking at Naruto as he couldn't stop looking at her.

Tsunade-- I knew it would happen eventually.

Naruto and Hinata walked out of the building. Good news traveled fast as everyone in the village had looked at him. Some were happy for them and some...were not so happy because of what Naruto had inside him. A while had passed until Hinata came to Naruto.

Hinata-- Naruto?

Naruto-- Yes dear?

Hinata blushed when he called her that.

Hinata-- Naruto, we have to meet my father.

Naruto-- He knows about us?

Hinata-- The whole village already does so...

Naruto-- Gotcha...

Hinata-- Well?

Naruto-- Let me put my sandals on.

Hinata-- Thanks honey.

Naruto-- No problem.

Naruto leaned over and gave her a kiss. Hinata still wasn't used to the concept of showing affection, let alone with somebody she has had a crush on for so long. She kissed him back nonetheless.

Naruto-- Come on.

Hinata and Naruto left his apartment to go to her mansion.

Hiashi--What is it Hinata?

Hinata-- Father...

Hiashi-- He's here now isn't he?

Hinata-- Yes.

Hiashi-- Bring him in.

Naruto was brought in and he sat down. He saw Neji was sitting in on their meeting.

Naruto-- Hi, Neji...

Hiashi-- Naruto, the matter at hand.

Naruto-- Oh, sorry sir.

Hiashi-- So what are you here for?

Hinata-- Well, father, I wanted to ask if you would be okay with me to keep seeing Naruto.

Hiashi-- I see...do both of you feel this way?

Naruto-- Of course.

Hiashi-- Well, Uzumaki...I must say this...to come before the Hyuga leader and ask to continue seeing his daughter takes alot of courage. I suppose there would be no harm in it. And plus, she's so much happier now. Her mission statistics show it. Alright then, you 2 may keep your relationship.

Hinata-- Really?

Hiashi-- Yes.

Hinata-- Thank you, father.

Naruto-- Yeah.

Hiashi-- Now get out of here.

Naruto-- Alright.

Hinata left with Naruto out the door.

Neji-- You sure about this?

Hiashi-- She has had feelings for that boy for the longest time. Just let them enjoy it while they can.

Neji-- Alright.

Hiashi-- But I'll say one thing, if he tries something with her, I'll fix so that he'll never be able to use "that" again.

Neji-- What do you mean by...oh, I see...

Hiashi-- Hmphh...

A few days later...

Hinata was hanging out with Ino and Sakura.

Ino-- So...when was your first time?

Hinata choked on her drink.

Hinata-- You gotta be joking.

Ino-- Aww...come on, don't be embarassed. How about you, Sakura?

Sakura-- I'm not at liberty to discuss that.

Ino-- Oh, come on, don't be some little priss. Tell us. We won't tell anyone.

Sakura-- Alright...

Hinata-- I gotta hear this.

Sakura-- Well...before Sasuke left to go to Orochimaru I snuck into his room and...

Ino-- Okay, shut the fuck up right there. I refuse to hear about this.

Sakura-- You wanted to know.

Ino-- Well, how about you Hinata? Naruto shown you his special tool?

Hinata-- No, of course not.

Ino-- What do you mean?

Hinata-- It hasn't happened yet okay? I'm still a virgin.

Ino-- Don't be ashamed. That is a perfectly valid decision to make. It does not make a lesser person if you choose to wait.

Hinata-- Okay, we get it. Shut up.

Ino-- Alright.

Sakura-- Hinata, have you ever, you know, thought about it?

Hinata-- Thought about what?

Sakura-- You and Naruto? You know...

Sakura raised her eyebrows.

Hinata-- Oh, well, I have thought about once or twice but...

Sakura-- How often do you want to?

Hinata-- What kind of girl do you think I am?

Sakura-- I'm not pointing fingers. Just wait until your positively sure.

Hinata-- Yeah, okay.

They left from their little girl day and Hinata went to go see Hinata at his house.

Hinata-- Naruto, you home?

Hinata saw Naruto in the kitchen. Naruto walked over and kissed Hinata.

Naruto-- How was your day?

Hinata-- Uhh...productive...You?

Naruto-- Just hung out with Kakashi all day.

Hinata-- That's it?

Naruto-- Then I came around and waited to see your beautiful face.

Hinata-- Naruto...

Hinata blushed.

Naruto-- I love that cute blush of yours.

Hinata-- Relax, tiger. I brought some dinner to make for you. Prime rib and mashed potatoes.

Naruto-- Yummy.

Hinata-- Alright, go wait and I'll bring it to you.

Naruto-- Alright.

Naruto sat down and looked at Hinata. She was wearing a apron but Naruto thought she was beautiful no matter what she was wearing. Naruto thought about what she looked like underneath that apron. Naruto envisioned a pair of perky Ds with a thin frame and a nice heart-shaped rear-end. Naruto shook these images from his head. Hinata would be pretty mad if he stood and had a boner. But still, it was a nice thought. Hinata knew that Naruto was undressing her with his eyes. She paid no mind, that was his nature for a boy that age.

Hinata-- Okay, here.

Hinata placed the plate in front of him. Naruto began to eat it with delight.

Hinata-- Naruto, I wanted to talk to you about something.

Naruto-- Sure, what is it?

Hinata-- Do you ever imagine having sex with me?

Naruto choked on his fork. He spit it out.

Naruto-- Hinata...

Hinata-- It's okay, I know boys your age think about that alot.

Naruto-- Umm...

Hinata--...

Naruto-- Do you ever think about it?

Hinata-- Sometimes but not like you.

Naruto-- Hinata...do you want to...

Hinata-- No, nothing like that yet okay?

Naruto-- Yet? Hello!

Hinata-- But, I wanted to tell you that I don't want us to do something we'll regret okay? So, I wanna wait for the right time.

Naruto-- I understand.

Hinata-- You're not upset?

Naruto-- No, of course not.

Naruto finished his food and picked up the plate. He washed it.

Hinata-- I think I'll go home now okay?

Hinata walked over and kissed him and walked toward the door. As she was opening the door, Naruto called out to her.

Hinata-- Yes, Naruto?

Naruto-- Hinata, I love you.

Hinata nearly passed out when he said that. She slowly slunk out of the apartment. Naruto sighed discontently.

Naruto-- I thought she would say it back...

The next day...

Hinata walked to Naruto's house. She was still feeling the tension from what Naruto said to her.

Hinata-- He loves me? I can't believe it.

Hinata walked into his house. There was nobody around except there was a note on the table.

"Went to the store for some groceries. Just hang around if you want or I'll see you later or something.

-Naruto"

Hinata placed the note down. She walked down the hall and saw a picture of her and Naruto. It was the time everybody went to the beach. Hinata couldn't help but notice, Naruto had taken alot of pictures of her in her bikini.

Hinata-- Guess I know where he wants to go for vacation.

Naruto had opened the door and slunk in. Hinata hadn't even heard the door, she in such deep thought. Naruto snuck up behind her and picked her up.

Hinata-- Awwwwwww!

Naruto-- Hinata, It's only me.

Hinata-- Don't scare me like that Naruto!

Naruto-- Sorry.

Hinata-- You'll have to make up for it of course.

Naruto-- Really?

Hinata-- I've had a long day, I need a good foot rub.

Naruto-- Slavedriver.

Naruto got the lotion.

The next week...

Sakura and Hinata were shopping around for clothes.

Sakura-- So, you Naruto fucked yet?

Hinata-- Of course not.

Unbeknownst to them, Hiashi Hyuga was listening in on their conversation.

Sakura-- Probably has blue balls by now.

Hinata-- Don't talk like that.

Sakura-- Well, have you done anything?

Hinata-- Well...no...

Sakura-- Nothing!?

Hinata-- Quite down.

Sakura-- Are you waiting 'till you're married?

Hinata-- Maybe. What's wrong with that?

Sakura-- Nothing at all.

Hinata-- Me and Naruto had talked about this and he's okay with it.

Sakura-- I see...

Hinata-- What?

Sakura-- Just...don't expect him to wait forever. He loves you now but eventually his eye will catch someone else.

Hinata-- Was that a threat?

Sakura-- Me and Naruto? Get real. I'm just talking sense. At least keep things fresh, don't bore him.

Hinata-- That's kinda of a good idea.

Sakura-- See? I know what I'm talking about.

Hinata-- Alright, come on, let's go.

Above them, where Hiashi was spying...

Hiashi-- He better...or I'll tear his lungs out.

Six months later...

Naruto-- Hinata?

Hinata-- Yes, Naruto?

Naruto-- I want to ask you something...

Hinata-- What is it?

Naruto-- Well...Hinata...you've become my best friend you know?...you've been with me for a lot of bad times and good times...

Hinata-- Yeah...

Naruto-- And I've grown to love you so much, I can't live without...

Hinata-- Naruto, you're making me nervous.

Naruto-- Don't be...

Naruto walked over and got on one knee. Hinata was having a coronary.

Naruto-- Hinata...will you marry me?

Hinata--...Y...Y...Y...Yes...

Naruto-- Really?

Hinata-- Mhmm...

Naruto got and hugged her.

Naruto-- You realize what we have to do next right?

Hinata-- What?

Naruto-- We have to tell your father...