Disclaimer: I don't own naruto or any IP concerned with it. They belong to kishimoto-sama.
I came back to this site after 2 years, and reading some of the fan fics here, I can't find one I like. So I decided to make one. One where they don't use Kami as a substitute for god, which is a huge pet peeve of mine. Or when they toss in the occasional japanese word for flavor. Something I can read. If you're still interested, keep reading.
Upon Silver Wings
Chapter 1
"Damn it!" he shouted. He vigorously messed up his spiky blonde hair in frustration. He took a deep breath, and started running again. Gathering natural energy while moving was becoming infinitely more difficult than being still.
After a while he stopped. He walked over and grabbed a canteen. He drank a bit from it. "Has anyone else been able to do this while moving?" he asked the toad that had come over to him.
"Nope. Well, no human any way." The toad responded. "We toads can do it with enough practice. But we already have a leg up on humans, since we're one with nature to begin with. Ready to call it a day yet Naruto?" the old toad asked him.
The blonde looked at him agape." What?! No way! Let's go again!" he shouted. He jumped to his feet and started up again. Fukasaku smiled to himself. That was exactly what he had expected.
As they were training, a figure descended from the sky and landed on a toad statue with no noise, and no warning. The old toad saw him, and his face took on a mixture of surprise, and unease. He jumped up on to he statue the figure was on. He eyed him with suspicion. "Why are you here?" Fukasaku asked him.
The man smiled. He had shaggy black hair, glasses, green eyes, and a very charming smile. He wore a black cloak that showed nothing of what was underneath. He looked like he was in his early twenties. But his eyes betrayed that he wasn't. They were the eyes of someone who had seen and done enough for many lifetimes, and not all of it pleasant.
"Oh, just visiting. I'm surprised you recognized me. For you it's been 70 years!" He said. "I've been observing young Naruto for a while. He shows quite a bit of promise. Mastering senjutsu in such a short amount of time? And not only that, the rasengan, kage bunshin, and with such dedication too. Very promising." He said, watching Naruto. He had stopped running, and was looking at them.
"You haven't answered me." The old toad said. The man smiled.
"Sharp as ever. I am here to help." He said.
The toad snorted. "When you help, cataclysms occur." The toad commented.
The man laughed. "Only to prevent even greater cataclysms." A bird fluttered down to his shoulder. He tapped it on the head with his finger. "Hm…I believe bad new is coming here. Very bad news." He said. A toad was coming to them. "Best go deal with it then eh? I'll just stay here." He said.
The old toad eyed him, and jumped down to Naruto, who was panting profusely. The man smiled again. "Great things are coming to you child. Great and terrible things."
To be continued…