w00t, first fanfic
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Falcon the dark spirit
Chapter 1: At the movies
"Are you sure this is going to work?" whispered Kirby.
Jigglypuff, Yoshi, Kirby and Ness were trying to sneak into an MA 15 rated movie.
"Jigglypuff!" said an excited Jigglypuff.
Jigglypuff climbed onto Yoshi, and then Kirby climbed on to Jigglypuff, and Ness jumped on top. Yoshi gave a big, black cloak to Jigglyppuff, who gave it to Ness, who put the cloak over all of them.
"Jiggly, Jiggly!!!!"
Yoshi slowly walked up to the counter. They approached a young looking man.
Ness talked to the counterboy.
"I'd like four, uh... I mean one ticket to 'Machine Gun Zombies II, the rise of the dead', please." said Ness.
The counterboy examined Ness, and then said, "You don't look over 15."
Ness replied, "Uh... I have..."
"Jigglypuff!!"
Ness quickly responded, "...disease. Yeah, Jigglypuff disease."
The counterboy, now confused, said, "Okay, that will be 5 dollars and 80 cents".
Ness replied, "Money???!? Er..."
Kirby spat out a 10 dollar note, and it shuttled at a high speed onto the desk.
"Erm, you can keep the change." Told Ness.
"Okay," replied the counterboy, "You can take your ticket."
Ness slowly looked down at Kirby, and Kirby looked down at Jigglypuff. Jigglypuff reached and grabbed the note, just. Yoshi slowly walked away into the bathroom, and they all got out of the cloak.
Meanwhile, across the room, Captain Falcon was trying to go into a little kiddie's movie... alone... without a kid... without becoming the laughing stock of the town.
Captain Falcon slowly walked up to a worker that validates the tickets...
"Going to a movie, Falcon?"
"Samus?" Replied a stunned Falcon.
"Don't you want some company?" answered Samus.
"But don't you have work to do?" replied Falcon.
"Yes," Samus told Falcon, "My shift ends in 43 seconds."
"Uh... but I want to see this... alone." Falcon nervously replied.
"But you've been waiting to go to the movies with me FOR MONTHS!" replied Samus in a very suggesting tone. "Okay, now to check your ticket."
"You don't uh... need to check my ticket. You know I always pay for these things."
"Let me see the ticket." replied Samus, in a suggestive tone, striking a pose.
"No!" replied falcon argumentatively.
Samus did some mind controlling moves she read about in a lifestyle magazine. It didn't work. So she punched him in the stomach. Falcon gave her the ticket.
"Happy bunny movie, eh?" laughed Samus. "HEY EVERYBODY! FALCON IS SEEING A HAPPY BUNNY MOVIE!!!"
Everyone laughed.
"WHOOPS! WRONG TICKET! I'LL BE GOING NOW!" replied Falcon.
Falcon bought a ticket for Paradise Isle, a romantic movie.
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Falcon the dark spirit
Chapter 1: At the movies
"Are you sure this is going to work?" whispered Kirby.
Jigglypuff, Yoshi, Kirby and Ness were trying to sneak into an MA 15 rated movie.
"Jigglypuff!" said an excited Jigglypuff.
Jigglypuff climbed onto Yoshi, and then Kirby climbed on to Jigglypuff, and Ness jumped on top. Yoshi gave a big, black cloak to Jigglyppuff, who gave it to Ness, who put the cloak over all of them.
"Jiggly, Jiggly!!!!"
Yoshi slowly walked up to the counter. They approached a young looking man.
Ness talked to the counterboy.
"I'd like four, uh... I mean one ticket to 'Machine Gun Zombies II, the rise of the dead', please." said Ness.
The counterboy examined Ness, and then said, "You don't look over 15."
Ness replied, "Uh... I have..."
"Jigglypuff!!"
Ness quickly responded, "...disease. Yeah, Jigglypuff disease."
The counterboy, now confused, said, "Okay, that will be 5 dollars and 80 cents".
Ness replied, "Money???!? Er..."
Kirby spat out a 10 dollar note, and it shuttled at a high speed onto the desk.
"Erm, you can keep the change." Told Ness.
"Okay," replied the counterboy, "You can take your ticket."
Ness slowly looked down at Kirby, and Kirby looked down at Jigglypuff. Jigglypuff reached and grabbed the note, just. Yoshi slowly walked away into the bathroom, and they all got out of the cloak.
Meanwhile, across the room, Captain Falcon was trying to go into a little kiddie's movie... alone... without a kid... without becoming the laughing stock of the town.
Captain Falcon slowly walked up to a worker that validates the tickets...
"Going to a movie, Falcon?"
"Samus?" Replied a stunned Falcon.
"Don't you want some company?" answered Samus.
"But don't you have work to do?" replied Falcon.
"Yes," Samus told Falcon, "My shift ends in 43 seconds."
"Uh... but I want to see this... alone." Falcon nervously replied.
"But you've been waiting to go to the movies with me FOR MONTHS!" replied Samus in a very suggesting tone. "Okay, now to check your ticket."
"You don't uh... need to check my ticket. You know I always pay for these things."
"Let me see the ticket." replied Samus, in a suggestive tone, striking a pose.
"No!" replied falcon argumentatively.
Samus did some mind controlling moves she read about in a lifestyle magazine. It didn't work. So she punched him in the stomach. Falcon gave her the ticket.
"Happy bunny movie, eh?" laughed Samus. "HEY EVERYBODY! FALCON IS SEEING A HAPPY BUNNY MOVIE!!!"
Everyone laughed.
"WHOOPS! WRONG TICKET! I'LL BE GOING NOW!" replied Falcon.
Falcon bought a ticket for Paradise Isle, a romantic movie.