This is my first story so please R and R

The Death of Beat. or is it?

Chapter 1: death and Revival

Beat slowly made his way out of the garage then as he stepped into the bright lights of Shibuya-Cho. He skated off enjoying the new day. When he reached Center street he stopped. Some kids were playing around, people were basically enjoying the summer day. Then Chaos erupted a group of rudies the likes of which Beat had never seen. They wore skates but did their tagging with guns. "Oh Sh." before Beat could finish his sentence the gun toting rudies spotted him and shot at him. The bullet connected with his left leg. Blood spattered the ground. He tried to skate off but his leg wouldn't work. He got him self half way to the garage bring with him a trail a deep blood all the way from center street. He got the door opened a bit and dragged him self inside. One of the new rudies burst through the door and shot in the chest. Beat was dead. And the new rudie was gone.

Hearing a gun shot The GGs ran from there place in the kitchen to find Beat dead in the living room. Gum kneeled over and cried her eyes out as Beat someone she loved laid there on the floor dead. Combo and Garam picked her up. Tab comforted her while Yoyo and Slate cleaned Beat up. And put him back on his bead.

The next day Beat was brought out to the local grave yard in a casket which was graffitid up in true rudie style. Tab made a speech. When suddenly a graffiti soul came out of no where and went to Beat's casket. Beat flew out of the casket glowing bright white and landed on the ground. All amazed stood back as he yeled "I'm back And here to stay!! Now where are those guys that killed me they are gonna fell the full rath of Beat"

Beat was back with a crazy vengeance.

It for now gonna add to it tomorrow Please R and R. !