This is my first serious fan fiction. i dont think im good to be quite frank i would be shocked if people begged me to delete this because it is that rubbish but hay ho. this is a taster of the story i am writing if you like it (please dooo) i will upload some more and finish writing it. it is meant to be doctor who fan fic but i kinda mixed a couple alice in wonderland references into it. thought it might sound jazzy although the main references will be in later chapters the only one in here is really subtle but yh review it pweese and stuff. oh also I DO NOT own alice in wonderland or doctor who at all. they are genius im a nerdy little kid who sits in my room admiring them XD.
"BOOM!" something violently yanked me to the left "RUN" it hollered, without a second thought I followed the order ,this thing holding my hand dragging me along it seemed safe I'm not sure why. It just did.
We ran for what felt like forever but I was so ... Alive. So very alive. My sense, my everything where on high alert like nothing could touch me. It slowed we dived round a corner "I think we are safe here for now." Then I saw him the man to change my life. He was tall and mysterious he looked so young so new to everything but his eye's they deceived him they spoke the real truth of him. The horrors, heartbreaks and heroicness of ... wait what was his name? Who was he? Where are we? Why were we running?
"Give me a second I'm a bit busy saving you here" "huh?" oh crap I must have said that aloud. He fiddled with some wires I couldn't see properly I just stood there dumbfounded "stupid sonic work damn you "he hit something on his hand like you would to get a remote working when the batteries die. This light green shone and a noise like... like nothing I have ever heard before it didn't sound right, but I think it worked him hitting it that is he was no longer agitated. "Right your questions umm I'm the doctor" he flew his arms out as if to present himself but lost his composure when he hit the wall "you humans and your concrete just can't get enough of it can you I have been to planets where they lived from ..." he babbled away and I lost concentration. "Ughhum" I coughed to gain 'the doctors' attention "oh umm sorry so yes I'm the doctor "doctor who?" "Precisely he seemed so excited and thrilled "wait what? Oh forget it so doctor what are we doing?" 'Doctor' it sounded so right.
"Well ..." he signalled towards me "I never got your name, it is? "Alice my name is Alice" I spluttered it had taken me too long to remember my own name he probably thought I was so very dumb but my mind was racing, no, running my mind was running with the doctor. He is so very curious. "Well Alice I'm am saving you from "he stopped and that panicked look it came back he was looking just past me "well from that" his hand signalled to where he had been looking.
I turned momentarily this thing it had a head like a dogs with bladed teeth saliva flowing from its mouth. Its body was like a human but bigger and stronger. I felt sick. I turned back and the doctor grabbed my hand it was warm and so comforting when I could have been ripped to shreds at any point. He went to pull away but stopped; the doctor raised his hand to my chin and pulled it up so we were staring into each other's eyes. "Run with me Alice?" all I could do was nod and we ran we didn't stop I hoped we never would it felt like I was one with the doctor and we were flying.
