The Worlds Abomination
Thats what i like to call myself, i mean i cant get much worse can i? Ive never been a bad person, i cant, i hate hurting people. It would make me like my dad. Its not that i hate fighting no, i trained my brother for dauntless 2 years ago. It also helped me i was weak and spineless. But would't you be if you were the little blind stiff? Now i am just waiting to get up at a respectable hour and away from my dad. As you can probably tell i don't like him, well i have all the right as he beat me and my brother, Tomb Stone. Thats not his real name just what i call him he calls me scar its our little thing. Todays my aptitude test and i don't know what ill get but i guess no one really dose. I slowly rise from my bed to only trip and fall over something i could't smell. Theres no real problem being blind you can hear and smell perfectly fine but if it doesn't have a sent or sound your stumped. And since abnegation ( where i live) all smells the same its pretty hard.
As i navigate my way to my wardrobe i put on something i think is a shirt and jeans but could just as easily be a dress and leggings. Then i try to get down the stairs but fall right at the end and as i sniff i smell leather shoes and know i've made a mistake. "What do you think your doing scarlet?" He sneers. "N..n..nothing Mar" I don't get to finish my sentence as he slaps me. Ten minutes a few cuts and bruises later I'm out the door and none the happier for it. As i make my way to the bus all i see is the same and i can't take it. The way to be selfless is not to hide but to share in my opinion. if we have the stuff we do why not share? Why don't we have bright houses? I would be nicer and people who visit would think of use as stiff. If we give our happiness to others in colour and gesture then our we not being selfless? I'll never see it but I've always like the idea and you can tell colour sometimes its just a sense you get.
I don't think ill ever know as I'm not staying, i don't know where I'm going thought. I just hope the aptitude test will tell me. I get on the bus and sit down next to a boy he smells like pine and brunt marshmallow. Its nice so i don't mind but the he just had to talk (mental huff) " Oi stiff sit somewhere else" He grubbed at me,
" Umm mate I'm blind it was hard enough for me to get here so if you don't want to be around me you move" i replied.
" Well stiff you got guts but id stay away from me I'm not known for being nice" he answered
" And I'm not known for rainbows and sunshine todays already quite shitty so id fuck off mate" I could tell id shocked him with my language but i did't give a fuck. Then once again he had to speak " Hmm some mouth you got there stiff Peter." He spoke
"Scarlet now its my stop so" I responded
" So your a dependent to its my aptitude test today" he mused, i just nodded my head in acknowledge meant and walked off the bus.
I walked along a hall towards the room that would decide my fate it smelled of hand sanitiser and bleach. The door opened on its hinges squeaking telling me to enter. " Hi i'm Tori take a seat " She spoke i just tried to work out where the chair was I must have looked like i dropped my glass trying to find it. " You ok kid " She asked
"Well Im blind so telling me theres a chair dose no good Im like a sitting duck when it comes to inanimate objects," I replied
"Oh sorry" then she just came over led me to a chair and gave me a liquid. I downed it it one gulp and was out.
I opened my eyes to find i could see! I could see! It was awesome! I looked in a mirror across the room and saw a girl with fiery red hair and deep blue almost black eyes. I memorised her so i knew what i looked like. "Choose" said a voice i just replied "Nah i'm done here" and just closed my eyes and willed my self back into the room. When i woke up i could't see anything i suddenly wished id spent more time in there but then i remembered what i looked like and was fine. " how did you do that?" she asked with her voice quivering.
"What? I took the test what was my result?" I questioned dread evident in my voice.
"Nothing you did't get a result you need to go home and tell no one ok?" I just nodded got up and left.
That night i got home ran up stairs and locked my door. I hid in blankets and when Marcus tried to beat the door down i just slid further in. The next morning i woke up on the floor with a ache in my back. I rose fast and ran out of the house every luckily avoiding Marcus. There was not Peter on the bus today luckily i just wanted to mull in my head for a while till i had to choose.
As i took my spot in the circle after climbing the long tedious stairs i smell the room it was pure anticipation and dread. I did't listen to the speech i was still deciding. I wasn't candour id have to tell them about my dad, i wasn't erudite i was curious but the wrong kind i would read something and test it so if they let me in a lab i would destroy Chicago! And I defiantly wasn't abnegation so amity or dauntless? " Scarlet Eaton" my father called. There was no time left. I walked up and smelt the bowls amity or dauntless? I cut my palm and thrust it where i know i had someone. I thrust it and my self into dauntless. Tori was wrong i did't get nothing i got everything. And i could't wait to smell it.
So first chapter of first story not bad right? I like feed back but i wont be one of those authors who need 10 reviews to continue i would just appreciate your opinion this is my first story and i'm 12 so i don't think its to bad. Do you like my twist of her being blind because i've never read a divergent fan fiction where 4 has a little blind sister . I their our can you tell me id love to read them.
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The panda.