Disclaimer: I don't own Jurassic Park or Jurassic Park 3 but seeing as it is one of the biggest movie franchises in history I wish I did at times. I only own Julia and Tory.
Authors note: This is kind of a rewrite of the movie with two characters of my own creation because I felt like it. Yes they are kids, yes there is a reasonable (although kinda strange) explanation for them being on the island but it comes in later chapters. Most of it follows the movie rather precisely but there are some things that came out of my own head. Again if there is something confusing you about the made up characters it is probobly explained in a later chapter. Another thing I am kinda unhappy with how I introduce Julia so if you are too I completely understand.
Chapter 1
Amanda Kirby let out a terrified and shrill scream as the skeleton of Ben Hildebrand fell from its resting place in the trees high above where the once lively Ben and Amanda's son Eric had crashed eight weeks earlier. Her now decesed boyfriends remains were to much for her after the deaths of Nash and Cooper and the hysterical woman ran into the jungle, leaving Dr. Alan Grant, his assistant, Billy, Mr. Udesky and her husband Paul whom she had seperated from a year earlier.
When she finally stopped the woman was alone in a clearing. She let out a cry of anguish at the thought of what Ben's remains told her: her thirteen year old son, Eric was alone. She had seen enough of Isla Sorna to know that the reality of it was that there was probobly more left of Ben (which wasn't much) then of her son! This last thought another, louder cry to escape the woman.
"Not so loud!" A voice behind Mrs Kirby hissed. The voice sounded strange like it was accented or it was rarely used.
Mrs Kirby turned to see a girl who couldn't have been a year older then her son appraoching slowly. The girls hair was dark golden brown, although it was difficult to tell she was so dirty, her eyes were dark and almost black. She was wearing boots that looked a bit to big for her, InGen work pants, a green tank tank top, and an InGen jacket over it.
Before the girl could say more to Mrs. Kirby Pau Kirby's strong but awkward figure crashed through the bushes. He immediatly ran to his wife, ignoring the girl, and showing his clear concern and love for her with his actions. His reassurances over-shadowed warnings that the girl tried to give them. Suddenly Amanda stopped her husband and pointed timidly to a series of nests that surrounded them. Paul looked the nests and then to his wife fearfully.
"They're raptor eggs." The girl said in a flat voice. "I have been trying to warn you for a while now."
Paul stared at the girl and then remembered the other members of his party. "Dr. Grant! You might want to have a look at his!"
The sound sent the girl shooting up one of the nearest trees. She flashed an angry glance at Paul but her face became like a statue within seconds and he couldn't be certain he actually saw an emotion cross her face.
Dr. Grant, Mr. Udesky and Billy, who was just finishing stuffing Eric and Ben's parasail into its bag, entered the clearing within seconds. Alan was pointed towards the eggs and his eyes narrowed and muscles tensed.
"Raptor... We have to leave now." He said in a low commanding voice. His fear was apparent and so was the energy he was using to keep his fear in check.
"There is something else..." Mrs. Kirby said and then nodded tworads the tree the girl now sat in.
"He's right. You should go." The girl said coldly.
"Could you come with us? Wants we're out of the nest I want to ask you something." Amanda replied.
The girl was about to just leave when she remembered how she'd heard the woman crying to her husband that their baby was alone. And a slightly more distant memory came to her. It had been night and she had heard a boys desperate screams. Screaming "I am here!" repeatedly in hopes of rescue.
Amanda sighed in dissapointment and the party moved out. The girl followed them through the trees and barely noticed Billy stay behind a moment longer and take out his camera.
Suddenly Alan realised Billy wasn't with them and turned slightly panicked and started back down the trail they had been following. He nearly ran into Billy as his assistant crashed around a tree.
"What were you doing back there?" Alan asked.
"I was shooting pictures of the nest. It proves raptors nested in groups and-"
Alan chuckled and interupted his assistant. "You can write a paper on it if you survive this place. Now come on."
They were a good ways away when the girl jumped from trees and terrified the entire party. She still had an emotionless air around her and her arms were crossed in front of her.
"You should keep walking." The girl pointed out. "You said you had a question..." She reminded the speechless Amanda.
"Well... For starters could you tell us your name?"
"Julia.... Is that all?"
"No." Mr. Kirby cut in. "Our son's on the island. Have you seen him?"
'"I am here!"' the memory flashed through Julia's mind. "I saw him. That was a long time ago."
"Do you know where he is? Is he safe?" Mrs. Kirby asked frantically.
"I don't keep tabs on him and the last I saw him he had practically just gotten here. He is probobly dead by now." She said simply.
The Kirby's took those words hard and as the party continued to walk they seemed to seperate themselves from Julia and Udesky walked between Alan and Billy. Billy was walking next to Julia and couldn't believe she had said something that would be so crushing to the Kirbys.
"Don't you think you were a bit harsh with them?" He asked finally.
"Dinosaurs accept things like this," Julia said not noticing the strange look Billy gave her, "I have spent more time with dinosaurs then humans. How was I to know they couldn't face facts?" She asked. Her voice was still calm and the slightly apologetic taint to it almost slipped Billy's ears.
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Another authors note: Well please reveiw and be kind. Critisism fine. Flame no. And if ,when this is done, it turns out people liked this I will write a fic about after the island. I really want to have more Ellie in there... You have to respect a woman who went through dino-crap when it wasn't necessary for her own survival like it was for Alan an the Kirbys. And I might even slip Ian and his girlfriend Sara in... I have a wild imagination. Anyways r&r please!
Authors note: This is kind of a rewrite of the movie with two characters of my own creation because I felt like it. Yes they are kids, yes there is a reasonable (although kinda strange) explanation for them being on the island but it comes in later chapters. Most of it follows the movie rather precisely but there are some things that came out of my own head. Again if there is something confusing you about the made up characters it is probobly explained in a later chapter. Another thing I am kinda unhappy with how I introduce Julia so if you are too I completely understand.
Chapter 1
Amanda Kirby let out a terrified and shrill scream as the skeleton of Ben Hildebrand fell from its resting place in the trees high above where the once lively Ben and Amanda's son Eric had crashed eight weeks earlier. Her now decesed boyfriends remains were to much for her after the deaths of Nash and Cooper and the hysterical woman ran into the jungle, leaving Dr. Alan Grant, his assistant, Billy, Mr. Udesky and her husband Paul whom she had seperated from a year earlier.
When she finally stopped the woman was alone in a clearing. She let out a cry of anguish at the thought of what Ben's remains told her: her thirteen year old son, Eric was alone. She had seen enough of Isla Sorna to know that the reality of it was that there was probobly more left of Ben (which wasn't much) then of her son! This last thought another, louder cry to escape the woman.
"Not so loud!" A voice behind Mrs Kirby hissed. The voice sounded strange like it was accented or it was rarely used.
Mrs Kirby turned to see a girl who couldn't have been a year older then her son appraoching slowly. The girls hair was dark golden brown, although it was difficult to tell she was so dirty, her eyes were dark and almost black. She was wearing boots that looked a bit to big for her, InGen work pants, a green tank tank top, and an InGen jacket over it.
Before the girl could say more to Mrs. Kirby Pau Kirby's strong but awkward figure crashed through the bushes. He immediatly ran to his wife, ignoring the girl, and showing his clear concern and love for her with his actions. His reassurances over-shadowed warnings that the girl tried to give them. Suddenly Amanda stopped her husband and pointed timidly to a series of nests that surrounded them. Paul looked the nests and then to his wife fearfully.
"They're raptor eggs." The girl said in a flat voice. "I have been trying to warn you for a while now."
Paul stared at the girl and then remembered the other members of his party. "Dr. Grant! You might want to have a look at his!"
The sound sent the girl shooting up one of the nearest trees. She flashed an angry glance at Paul but her face became like a statue within seconds and he couldn't be certain he actually saw an emotion cross her face.
Dr. Grant, Mr. Udesky and Billy, who was just finishing stuffing Eric and Ben's parasail into its bag, entered the clearing within seconds. Alan was pointed towards the eggs and his eyes narrowed and muscles tensed.
"Raptor... We have to leave now." He said in a low commanding voice. His fear was apparent and so was the energy he was using to keep his fear in check.
"There is something else..." Mrs. Kirby said and then nodded tworads the tree the girl now sat in.
"He's right. You should go." The girl said coldly.
"Could you come with us? Wants we're out of the nest I want to ask you something." Amanda replied.
The girl was about to just leave when she remembered how she'd heard the woman crying to her husband that their baby was alone. And a slightly more distant memory came to her. It had been night and she had heard a boys desperate screams. Screaming "I am here!" repeatedly in hopes of rescue.
Amanda sighed in dissapointment and the party moved out. The girl followed them through the trees and barely noticed Billy stay behind a moment longer and take out his camera.
Suddenly Alan realised Billy wasn't with them and turned slightly panicked and started back down the trail they had been following. He nearly ran into Billy as his assistant crashed around a tree.
"What were you doing back there?" Alan asked.
"I was shooting pictures of the nest. It proves raptors nested in groups and-"
Alan chuckled and interupted his assistant. "You can write a paper on it if you survive this place. Now come on."
They were a good ways away when the girl jumped from trees and terrified the entire party. She still had an emotionless air around her and her arms were crossed in front of her.
"You should keep walking." The girl pointed out. "You said you had a question..." She reminded the speechless Amanda.
"Well... For starters could you tell us your name?"
"Julia.... Is that all?"
"No." Mr. Kirby cut in. "Our son's on the island. Have you seen him?"
'"I am here!"' the memory flashed through Julia's mind. "I saw him. That was a long time ago."
"Do you know where he is? Is he safe?" Mrs. Kirby asked frantically.
"I don't keep tabs on him and the last I saw him he had practically just gotten here. He is probobly dead by now." She said simply.
The Kirby's took those words hard and as the party continued to walk they seemed to seperate themselves from Julia and Udesky walked between Alan and Billy. Billy was walking next to Julia and couldn't believe she had said something that would be so crushing to the Kirbys.
"Don't you think you were a bit harsh with them?" He asked finally.
"Dinosaurs accept things like this," Julia said not noticing the strange look Billy gave her, "I have spent more time with dinosaurs then humans. How was I to know they couldn't face facts?" She asked. Her voice was still calm and the slightly apologetic taint to it almost slipped Billy's ears.
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Another authors note: Well please reveiw and be kind. Critisism fine. Flame no. And if ,when this is done, it turns out people liked this I will write a fic about after the island. I really want to have more Ellie in there... You have to respect a woman who went through dino-crap when it wasn't necessary for her own survival like it was for Alan an the Kirbys. And I might even slip Ian and his girlfriend Sara in... I have a wild imagination. Anyways r&r please!