Ok first things first I suck in writing so I'd appreciate any pointers you have.
Disclaimer: Wake up and smell the coffee people if I was J. K. Rowling do you think I'd be writing here.
Anyway onto our future presentation:
She sat down by the lake and looked into the horizon. She then closed her eyes and felt the wind brushing trough her hair, it felt so good to be here. As the bell rung she was snapped back to reality, it was dinner time, she had barely begun school and already she wanted to be home. She got up with very much in her mind telling her not to get inside. She was walking up the castle when BAMMMMM she turned around to find a large snake slithering out of the forbidden forest. Just then Dumbledore came rushing to her.
"Miss Evans"- he began- "get all the students into the great hall".
"Wha"- Lily was interrupted
"Now Miss. Evans" Dumbledore stated plainly
Just then James Potter came by.
"Mr. Potter" Dumbledore looked at him a twinkle in his eyes "were ready."
Lily looked at them dumfounded while she shoved a group of first years into the castle.
She looked back to see James and Dumbledore with wands out soon enough she heard
"Advra Kedrava" but she couldn't make out who said it. She looked back to see James on the floor.
"No" She rushed to Dumbledore.
"No need to worry Ms. Evans he's just petrified.
"Just petrified look at him" Lily began but never finished as Madam Pomfrey came rushing by.
"Oh my lets get him inside" she cried
"I think it is best if you go to your dormitory Ms. Evans" Dumbledore stated
Lily obligated immediately. As she sat down in her bed she thought
How could things go from a perfect day to this? She sighted I best be getting to sleep.
When out of nowhere. Slam!
UUUU a hang cliff well not going to continue unless I get at least 5 reviews.
Lots of love and more,
Lilyfan