Greatest mistake Final Hope Chapter 1 Storm Before The Calm
A/NOK so I have writers block for all my other storys and this idea keeps festering in my mind so i have to wright it i will hopefully finish this story but i cant promise routine updates with school and work i wont get much time to wright but without further ado on with the story!
All of the rookie 12 stood in the charred remains of there once glorious home. 1 on 11 Sasuke Uchiah stood proud the same arrogant smirk that he had before he sent his army of shadow shinobie to decimate the village and all those who called it home, standing ahead of the other 10 was the leafs number one knuckle head ninja Naruto Namikaze, the toad sage, nine tails jinchuriki, son of the yellow flash and now the Fainaru hokage.
A small chuckle escaped Sasuke's lips. "What do you think you can do against me? You are weak all of you pathetic wannabe ninja, you couldn't even protect one village and now its remains shall be a reminder to the 4 other kage, none can stand against the hidden shadow village or the shinohkage!"
At this point Naruto had heard enough he shot forward and gave Sasuke a right hook to the face sending him flying, kicking up dirt as he went. Naruto then proceeded to activate his tailed beast mode, first he started to glow then his signature trench coat formed making him seem like a bright yellow version of his father. "Iv had enough of you Sasuke! I tried to treat you like a brother! I tried to save you from this darkness that has engulfed you! But no you had to destroy the village! You had to kill every one! And you had to tarnish your brothers memory with this damned crusade!" Naruto had tears running down his face as he thought of the man he once considered a friend, he was finally realising the boy he considered a brother died that day in the forest of death, he died the minute Orochimaru pierced his skin with his fangs.
Sasuke staggered to his feat a shadow over his eyes as he spoke the words "Don't you dare speak of my brother like you knew him, you are the leader of the village that caused his death, that ordered the destruction of my clan. Now enough words lets end this!" he charged at Naruto a chidori engulfing his hand as Naruto charged a miniature beast bomb.
"Runt remember you can only control half of my current power, if you go berserk not even I could get you back under control until you exhaust our chakra." The grouchy voice of Kurama echoed in Naruto's head as he started taking power from the almost infinite pool that was the great nine tails. "I know fox face I got it, if I don't get angry I wont kill every one." the only reply he got was a grunt from the mighty fox. The chidori and beat bomb connected as Naruto dashed towards Sasuke using chakra to boost his speed.
The two continued to clash and the remaining members of the rookie nine stood in a of the 2 strongest ninja to of ever walked the earth clashing in front of them, they all remembered a time when the two where rivals but at the same time friends and it made them relies how much they had changed Sakura was no longer a fan-girl instead she was a powerful medical ninja, Chogi although he retained his chubby appearance had grown to be one of the strongest ninjas the knew, Shikamaru had stepped it up after the 4th great shinobi war he no longer complained about things being to bothersome or tiring, Ino had become there greatest infiltrator thanks to her family jitsu and had helped to bring the akuski to there knees towards the end of the war, rock lee had... well he was still the same just a little stronger, Neji was no longer arrogant and appreciated the strength people gain through training and will power, ten ten was no longer stuck to long range or weapon based combat she was now extremely proficient with Lee's style of fighting, Shino.. OK Shino had not changed at all, Kiba had perfected the art of fighting side by side with animals and had even taught Naruto how to do the same with fox's, and Hinata well Hinata had finally become more confident after Naruto had proposed to her, she was now one of the strongest konoichi in all the elemental nations.
There attention was returned to the fight as both men once more charged there strongest attacks and began to charge at each other, the rasenshurikan vs the amaterasu chidori (fusing the powers of both into a powerful attack) the light show released by the collision blinded all within the vicinity, by the time Naruto recovered Sasuke was already charging at him with another chidori, Naruto knew in this form he could survive a hit like that but it would cause an injury he would be stuck with forever and he realised he didn't have enough time to get out of the way that was when he realised Susuke wasn't aiming at him. Naruto's eyes expanded as he saw who Sasuke's intended target was, none of the others had recovered from the blinding light so Hinata didn't see she was in danger until Sasuke's hand pierced her heart and everything started to dim, she could hear Naruto's yelling but couldn't reply, It hurt to stay awake and the last of her breath left her as she felt Naruto embrace her for one final time.
Naruto doped to is knees cradling Hinata's cold body in his arms a tears ran down his face nothing mattered any more she was gone, his light in the dark the fist to notice him and his beacon of hope all extinguished along with there unborn child, he could hear Sasuke gloating behind him but he didn't care the others tried to stop Suzuki from attacking Naruto and as Naruto heard the chirping of thousands of birds he let into his anger letting into his hatred he didn't care any more as long as that bastard suffered. He got up leaving Hinatas body on the ground and slowly turned to face Sasuke, the others getting away from what they where sure was going to be a devastating battle, Sasuke looked into Naruto's eyes and saw that they where pitch black but he didn't care this was Naruto the pathetic loser who he would now kill.
"now do you see who it feels to have what you love mu-" he was cut of as nine blood red tails erupted from Naruto as his skin started to peal of leaving behind the red and black demon the boy had become, Naruto shot forward garbing Sasuke by the face and shoving him into the ground the miles surrounding Naruto became a crater as he continued to smash the last Uchiah into the ground again and again not caring for anything else not even noticing that his loved ones where getting caught in the cross fire, with each pound into the ground another of the rookie 12 was killed and the whole time the real Naruto was trapped in his mind with the fox forced to watch what his anger was doing unable to stop it and he wept for those he had lost.
"brat we can use that jitsu. We can go back and stop all of this, once you have control we can leave and prevent this future!" Naruto understood he could go back and change everything, the Uchiah massacrer, the death of Nejis father, Garas mistreatment, the formation of the acutski, Haku and Zabuzas deaths, Sasukes betrayal and Jiraiya's death. But he also realised he could never be with Hinata, he had gone over it with Kurama and only he could go back and he would be in his current body, he could watch her grow up and become a fine konoichi but he could never be with her the way he was before this battle.
Naruto awoke in the middle of the giant crater what remained of his friends where littered around him, he couldn't bring himself to look, he had caused this, he had killed his friends and he was going to change everything. He started making the hand signs Kurama did the rest. A bright light engulfed him and he was gone.
A/N Thanks for reading and please Review they will encourage me to not only improve but wright more as well. And thanks to adango714 for catching all those miss spells... how could i miss spell Sasukes name every time!