Ok this is my very first fanfic so give me a little slack

Ok this is my very first fanfic so give me a little slack. However, I am open to all suggestions that could help me make this better. I know that the characters might be a little off but I'm trying to do my best. Hope that you enjoy.

Ok so the story starts when Edward is bribing Alice to take Bella hostage and have her spend the weekend with the Cullen girls while the men go hunting. Of course Alice is happy to and really wants that porch but she doesn't know if she will be able to keep it a secret from Bella like Edward wants.

Disclaimer—sadly I do not own any of these amazing characters. 

" But Edward why can't I just tell her that she has to spent the night at our house because you want to keep her safe? I really don't think that she would mind." I asked even though I already knew what the answer would be.

And as always Edward wanted to make things difficult to protect Bella because he felt insecure (no matter how much he tries to cover it up) that he left and now she has befriended a werewolf. I hate werewolves just as much as the next vampire but I liked bell like a sister and if she could trust a thing like that than so could I but obviously, Edward couldn't stand the competition.

Now he was pissed. He had read my mind and now was mad. Of course he was mad! Everything I had just thought was true and he knew it. Good I wanted that porch and I was going to get it even if that meant getting Edward incredibly pissed off at me because I brought up a blemish in his recent past.

He clenched and unclenched his hands and his jaw.

"Do not bring up that four legged beast and Bella in the same thought again" he spat at me.

I did a little happy dance in my head because I knew that Edward was going to give me those lovely keys. He had already decided to last night no matter what I did so I was gonna have a little bit of fun in tormenting my favorite sibling on the way. Yes I had been taking lessons from Emmet.

"Do you or do you want these keys to this porch?" he asked he was breathing deep and trying to keep his cool.

"Well of course I do it's just I don't see why we have to go through all of the trouble to get those keys." I replied with a sweet and innocent face. Then I had an amazing idea!

"No" Edward said even before I had asked him if I could give Bella a makeover

"Why not, don't you want your love to look all pretty when you come back from hunting?"

Oh Emmet would be so proud if he could see this right now.

" She looks beautiful on her own thanks and I'm sure she wouldn't want you to give her a make over. You can take her shopping and a few other little things and that is it." I could see a smile starting to creep up on his face and we both knew that he had gotten me as soon as he said shopping.

" So if I hold Bella hostage, I get the porch and I get to take Bella shopping!" I asked practically jumping up and down. Bella was like a sister to me and it was just so much fun to be able to dress her up and make her all pretty.

"Yes, but you have to promise to keep her safe, and don't let her get anywhere close to that dog."

Wow he really hated Jacob.

"I promise! I promise! I promise!" I shrieked while jumping for my sparkling keys that I had just won. Edward was dangling them just out of my reach. He must have been taking lessons from Emmet too.

To Be Continued ……….

(I hope. If I get enough good reviews then I might write more but obviously I wont if my story is hated. )