Note: Hi! Thanks for being here even after all this time. I know some people are disappointed in the story and so am I. Frankly, I think it could be a hell lot better and that's what I'm set out to do; make it better.

So, I'm kinda starting it over, rewriting. Please, please let me know what you think of it. If you guys like the new version I will proceed with it, if not, I will make it better anyways to the best of my ability.

Please review and tell me if this storyline is better. I am going to post two chapters so you may get a hang of where this will lead. The first part of the first chapter is altered to fit in with the new plot, the rest is the same as before. My plot doesn't really follow the original twilight series timeline and the characters ages may vary as well.

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Enjoy!

Chapter 1

Darcy hugged her grandmother and aunt. She could feel herself tearing up but she had school in two days and she had to leave. It had been a good distraction coming to visit them in Bellevue but it was time to go home.

She had been distraught after what had happened and her parents thought she needed a break and had sent her to visit their family. It helped but only a little. She had to go back and face him again.

He was older to her by two years and she had been the typical teenage girl in love/having an intense crush on the hot bad older guy. And he noticed.

He started talking to her and he literally 'had her at hello' and things got pretty heated really soon. Before she knew what she was getting into she had already lost her virginity to the town player, Paul Lahote. They had been going pretty steady and she really believed he had changed in spite of the warnings of her friends, especially Lexi. She was in love! She wasn't going to listen to the haters just because she had found love so early in life and that too in the form of the hottest guy every girl wanted to herself. She was over the moon and she decided to make him feel the same. So when his birthday approached, she decided to surprise him.

She really was into it, getting herself new lingerie, new dress, new everything. She was very pleased with herself that night as she had looked in the mirror. She looked sexy and attractive. She was ready to blow his mind and all things that could be blown!

She headed over to his house, knowing fully well that he would be alone that night since his parents had to go to Tacoma to attend someone's funeral.

Nobody really locked doors in La Push and Paul certainly didn't. She walked inside his house, her heart pounding. He had brought her here but only twice. She looked about the house making sure no one was home. When she was sure, she went up to his room and waited. While waiting, she had the brilliant idea to give him an even better surprise and she decided to shed her clothes and greet him only in her underwear. So she headed to the washroom and took her clothes off while admiring herself and reapplied a bit of makeup.

While getting ready she thought she heard the door open and then someone walked into the room and put on some loud music. Darcy was excited. Her heart was pounding so loud she could hear it. She was extremely excited. This was something she had never done. She talked herself into feeling confident and bringing out her inner vixen. When she felt her sexy, confident self take over, she took a deep breath and opened the door.

She gasped as she took in the sight of a very naked Paul in the bed with an equally naked girl bouncing on him. Darcy felt as if someone punched her in the stomach, she could not breathe.

Paul noticed her first since he was facing the bathroom. He looked shocked and unable to react as he took her in. But then he quickly shoved the girl on top of him on the bed and tried to get up. But Darcy was shocked and ashamed and heartbroken.

She quickly shut the door and got dressed. Paul kept pounding on the door but she couldn't open it. Her body was trembling. She managed to put on her clothes and then looked around. There was no way she was going out that door.

She found the bathroom window. One problem, it was on the first story. Darcy didn't hesitate though, she left her heels behind as she jumped out the window.

Paul had managed to pull on some shorts and had pushed the door hard enough for it to come off the hinges and he was staring at the girl lying in his backyard. He had not expected Darcy to be there. She was a nice girl who was very pretty. Prettier than the girls he had been with and he had been very very satisfied in bed with her. But he really wasn't a one woman man and so when Cathy from his class had shamelessly offered herself to him as a birthday present, he didn't even try to resist. He knew that Darcy had feelings for him and he liked her but that was the only feeling he was capable of. That's all he had to offer her. Because he liked her, he slept with her on a regular basis and did not boast about it to the guys.

But this was bad. He was sure someone would have warned her of his player status. But here was the sweet girl looking hot and sexy in her lacy panty and bra, most probably newly bought because he had learned that she loved her cotton hipsters, standing in his house, in his room, ready for him and he was allowing a slutty girl to ride him and enjoying it too.

But looking down at her now, he realized what an ass he was and that he had probably ruined a girl forever.

Darcy felt two kinds of pain for the first time in her life; the pain of a broken ankle and that of a broken heart. And she had no idea when either of it would heal.