Golden Sun: An Age Older Than Kraden

NOTE: (blah, blah)= Thoughts, [blah, blah]= Author's Note, {blah, blah}= If needed a character descripiton, *blah, blah*= an action/ a sound

Characters:

Isaac: Isaac's ancestor Felix: Felix' ancestor Jenna: Felix's sister, and Jenna's ancestor... Basically, it's the cast of Golden Sun and Golden Sun: The Lost Age's ancestors... So yeah...=

~~~~~~~~~~Intro~~~~~~~~~~

Narrator: This takes place a long time ago. A time where Alchemy was used commonly. A time way before Alchemy's seal. A time of Isaac and all his friends' ancestor. A time wh--

???: Okay! Okay! Already. The readers already understand it's a long time ago. A time older than Kraden. Heck, it could be older than Piers. By the way, how old is he?

Narrator: We're looking into that. Uh... Anyway...

???: ...

Narrator: Who are you anyway?!?

???: You can call me GA.

Narrator: ... Okay...

GA: Get on with the story.

Narrator: Right...

~~~~~~~~~~A Birthday in Vale~~~~~~~~~~

Narrator: We start in Isaac's [not the star of GS, but his great, great, great, great... great, grandfather] birthday.

Everyone: HAPPY BIRTHDAY, ISAAC!!

Isaac: Thank you!

Garet: Yo, Isaac, we got a present for you!

Isaac: Cool! Where?

Jenna: Here, Isaac!

Isaac: Oh my..!

Felix: How do you like it, buddy?

Isaac: It's a sword!

Dora {Isaac's Mom}: Yes, honey. It's your first sword.

Isaac: Cool!

Kyle {Isaac's Dad}: I knew you'd like it. :)

Isaac: I love it!

~~~~~~~~~~Vault~~~~~~~~~~

Narrator: Here's the future Ivan's past ancestors.

Ivan: Master Hammet...

Hammet: Yes, Ivan?

Ivan: I was reading this book about turning mere crud to gold. Is this true?

Hammet: Yes, it is. It is called Alchemy. A powerful magic.

Ivan: Wow! There's such thing?!?!

Hammet: Why, yes.

Ivan: Wow! Hey, what's this? What is Psy-ner-gy?

Hammet: Oh, Psynergy? It's supposed to a magic force. A magic force powered by the Elements: Earth, Fire, Wind, and Water.

Ivan: Really?

Hammet: Yeah. Adepts can use it.

Ivan: Can I use it? Am I an adept?

Hammet: You sure ask a lot of questions! :)

Ivan: Is that bad?

Hammet: No.

Ivan: So answer my question.

Hammet: You will soon find out...

Ivan: Okay...

~~~~~~~~~~In Imil~~~~~~~~~~

Narrator: Here's about Mia and Alex in the northern city, Imil...

Mia: Great Healer, can you teach me how to use Ply?

Great Healer: I will. Eventually.

Alex: Great Healer, can you please teach us?!?

Great Healer: Don't worry. You will learn healing powers soon.

~~~~~~~~~~Intermission~~~~~~~~~~

GA: I thought this was going to be a comedy.

Narrator: It will.

GA: Okay...

Narrator: ... It was just the Intro. It shows the characters.

GA: Oh...

Narrator: Anyways...

~~~~~~~~~~4 Years Later~~~~~~~~~~

Isaac: Garet!!! Hurry up!!

Garet: OKAY, OKAY, OK-- *gets hit by a tree branch while running*--OOF!!!

Jenna: Oi...

Felix: Oi... Garet that's like that 10th tree you hit.

Isaac: Well, no one ever said he was graceful...

Jenna: I'm tellin' you... Garet needs a helmet.

Felix: To protect what?!? I bet he has nothing up there.

Jenna: Bro, be nice.

Garet: Oww...

Isaac: Garet, we'll be late for the ceremony.

Garet: Why do we need to go anyways?

Jenna: They are finished building the Sol Sanctum.

Felix: Yeah, they are finishing the Sol and the Luna rooms.

Garet: So... Why do need to go?

Felix: Garet...

Garet: What?

Felix: Shut up...

Garet: Uh... okay...

Isaac: C'mon already.

Jenna: Yeah...

Narrator: Then they run towards the Sanctum.

~~~~~~~~~~Ivan's New Power~~~~~~~~~~

Ivan: HAMMET! HAMMET!

Hammet: What is it, Ivan?

Ivan: I just learned Psynergy!!

Hammet: It's about time-- I mean, that's great!

Ivan: What did you mean by, "It's about time?"

Hammet: I meant nothing...

Ivan: Did you know I was an adept?

Hammet: Well...

Ivan: So you did know?

Hammet: Uh...

Ivan: C'mon, answer my question.

Hammet: Yes! I knew.

Ivan: Why didn't you tell me then?

Hammet: 'Cause I wanted you to find out yourself. So that you won't be anticipating everyday when you would get your powers, and not focus on some other stuff.

Ivan: Oh... I see...

~~~~~~~~~~Mia and Alex's "Ply"~~~~~~~~~~

Great Healer: Mia, Alex, it's time...

Mia: To learn Ply?

Great Healer: ...

Alex: Well is it?

Great Healer: Yes it is.

Alex & Mia: Yay!

Alex: (It's about time!)

Mia: (Finally I can be a healer)

GH: I will now pass down the healing powers of Ply. *Does something to pass down Ply to Mia and Alex*

~~~~~~~~~~The Boom~~~~~~~~~~

Narrator: While the GH does the ceremony, and when Ivan was practicing his Psynergy, and when Isaac, Felix, Jenna, and Garet was running to the ceremony...

*BOOM!!!*

Isaac & Felix: What was that?!?

Ivan: Huh?!

Mia: Great Healer...

Alex: What was that?

GH: Oh no...

Mia: What the...

Narrator: They look outside to see a big spirit hovering all over Weyward.

Garet: What is that...

Ivan: Hammet, what is that creature...

Hammet: ?

~~~~~~~~~~The Spirit~~~~~~~~~~

Isaac: Oh no...

Mia: AHHH!!!

Jenna: It's aiming something at us...

Alex: It seems to be a cannon.

Narrator: The spirit creature then launches a luminous light all throughout Weyward... It sends everyone flying... Now, everyone: Isaac, Felix, Jenna, Garet, Ivan, and Mia; were all somehow sent flying together. What I mean is that when they were in the air, they somehow landed together.

~~~~~~~~~~Intermision... Again~~~~~~~~~~

GA: Once again, I ask: Where are the funny?

Narrator: C'mon Garet got hit by a tree branch! Isn't that funny...

GA: Well... That's the only funny part I have seen...

Narrator: You know what, if you keep on complaining about the funny, then why don't you narrate this story?

GA: Fine, I will... I'll be the director also.

Narrate: Ha! This will be a laugh.

~~~~~~~~~~After the big boom~~~~~~~~~~

Jenna: Where am I?

Felix: Sis?

Isaac: Felix?

Mia: Uh...

Garet: Huh? Who was that?

Ivan: Who are--

Mia: Who are you people? Where's Alex? Where am I? Why does my head hurt? What was that boom? Why am I asking too many useless questions? Where's the Great Healer? What was that creature? When will I stop asking questions? When will the director make me stop asking these questions? Am I--

Everyone: SHUT UP!!

Mia: It ain't my fault! It's the person who is typing this.

Everyone: WHO CARES!

Mia: I do. My mouth hurts!

Everyone: GA! STOP MAKING MIA TALK!

GA: Fine! I'll make her mute!

Mia: Wait n-- ...

Everyone: THANK YOU!

GA: On with the story...

Isaac: Felix, Jenna, Garet, are you all right?

Felix: I think so, but who are you two?

Ivan: I am Ivan of Vault.

Mia: ...

Jenna: What?

Isaac: ?

Felix: ?

Ivan: ?

Garet: ... I like cheese...

Isaac: Oi...

Mia: ...

Ivan: I have an idea. I just learned Mind Read! I'll read her mind!

Isaac & Felix & Jenna: Mind Read?

Garet: ... Where's my cheese?

Felix: GA? Can I have a word with you...?

GA: Um... Okay...

Felix: Can't you make Garet a little bit smarter?

GA: But he his the "stupid character in a story to make the story funnier."

Felix: So?

GA: Iono.

Felix: Just make him smarter. Please!

GA: Fine!

Ivan: Um... anyway... 'Mind Read'

Mia: (I'm going to kill you GA for making me mute!)

Ivan: Uh.. GA, I suggest you run! *Mia starts chasing GA*

GA: Fine! I'll make you unmute!

Mia: Thank you!

~~~~~~~~~~The Smart Garet and the "Unmute" Mia~~~~~~~~~~

Mia: I'm Mia from Imil.

Jenna: Oh, I'm Jenna from Vale. And this is my brother, Felix, and my friend, Isaac.

Garet: What about me? Anyways... I'm Garet of Vale.

Felix: *whispers to Isaac* I don't think Garet is not any smarter.

Isaac: *whispers back* At least he is not talking about cheese.

Felix: Good point.

Jenna: So how did we get here?

Ivan: I just remembered a creature.

Mia: Yeah, a spirit.

Isaac: Hmm... Where are we?

Garet: Gimme a map.

Jenna: We don't have one.

Garet: Well, judging by the rising sun, I say that is east.

Felix: *whispers to Isaac* Yup, he is smarter.

Isaac: Uh-huh.

~~~~~~~~~~Intermission...~~~~~~~~~~

GA: Ha! You see, when I'm the director, the whole story is funnier.

Narrator: Right... Sure it is...

~~~~~~~~~~Where to Go?~~~~~~~~~~

Felix: So where are we off to?

Garet: Hmm... I don't see a town anywhere.

Ivan: The real question is, where are we?

~~~~~~~~~~Jenna, Isaac, and Mia~~~~~~~~~~

Jenna: Isaac...

Isaac: Yeah...

Jenna: Um... never mind.

Isaac: C'mon you can tell me.

Jenna: No, not yet.

Isaac: Um, okay.

Mia: *stares at Jenna talking to Isaac* (I wonder if Jenna and Isaac are an item)

Ivan: *Mind Reading Mia* Ooh... *sing-song voice* Mia likes Isaac, Mia likes Isaac.

Mia: Ivan!

Ivan: Aww, crap. AAAHHH!

Mia: I oughta freeze you.

GA: Anyway... while Mia is hurling ice balls at Ivan...

Jenna: Isaac... How do you feel about me? Am I just a friend?

Isaac: Well..

Jenna: Well, what?

Isaac: Um.. Well we know each other practically all our lives and--

Felix: Hey, guys! C'mon we are leaving.

Isaac: Um... Let's continue this talk later...

Jenna: I guess I can wait....

~~~~~~~~~~Their First Journey~~~~~~~~~~

Ivan: How long have we been walking?

Garet: Judging by the postion of the sun now, and it's position when we left, I'd say... about 6 hours.

Ivan: That was a RHETORICAL question!

Garet: Oh... What's rhetorical?

Felix: *whispers to Isaac* I think Garet just got stupid.

Isaac: Well, at least he's a little bit smarter. Just not as smart as Ivan I guess.

Mia: Hey, Isaac!

Isaac: What?

Mia: Do you have water?

Isaac: No.

Jenna: (I have a feeling Mia likes Isaac more than just a friend.)

Felix: Wait a minute... Ivan do you see what I see?

Ivan: Um... Yeah! A lake!

Mia: A lake!

Jenna: Finally. I'm getting dehydrated.

Garet: Me, too.

Ivan: Let's go!

~~~~~~~~~~Rendezvous at the Lake~~~~~~~~~~

Felix: C'mon, sis. The water's great!

Jenna: Well...*blushes*

GA: Isaac then...

Isaac: *pushes Jenna in the lake*

Jenna: Oh, you son-of-a-...

Isaac: C'mon, catch me if you can.

GA: Jenna then chases Isaac around the lake. Then pounces on him.

Isaac: *smiles* You caught me!

Jenna: You're not as fast as I thought! *smiles*

Mia: (Look at them... Playing around like that... Dang, I wish I was her)

Ivan: *Mind Reading Mia* Don't feel too bad.

Mia: Ivan! Were you reading my mind again?

Ivan: Yeah, sorry. But you shouldn't feel so bad. You can find someone else.

Mia: Yeah, I guess but--

Garet: *splashes water at Mia* Ha! Ha!

Mia: Why you lil rat! Don't you know I'm a water adept? Me gonna...

GA: Well you get the picture...

~~~~~~~~~~Isaac and Jenna alone... or so you thought~~~~~~~~~~

Jenna: Do you remember our talk? The one before we had to go?

Isaac: Yeah...

Jenna: So what were you going to say?

Isaac: It's just that... I did have a lil crush on you.

Jenna: *blushes* You did?

Isaac: Yeah... *blushes*

Jenna: You're blushing!

Isaac: ...

Isaac & Jenna: I just wanna say--

Isaac & Jenna: Oh, you go first.

Jenna: No, I'll go first. I just wanna say... That I love you.

Isaac: Oh. my gosh... I wanted to say the same.

Jenna: Really...?

GA: Meanwhile...

Mia: *a tear drops*

Ivan: Poor you...

Mia: Huh? Oh, I wasn't crying.

Ivan: I feel your pain.

Mia: No you don't.

Ivan: Okay... I don't, but you shouldn't feel too bad.

Mia: I know... But just look at Isaac. He is sooo cute!

Ivan: Um...

Mia: Okay, I know you don't feel that he is--

Ivan: Yeah I don't. Otherwise I would be...

Mia: Yeah, I get it...

~~~~~~~~~~Intermission... You knew this was coming~~~~~~~~~~

Narrator: *sobbing* That was so sad! How could you put Mia in that kind of pain!

GA: What?! It was the kind of romantic jealousy kind of thing this story needs.

Narrator: Yah... I guess.

GA: By the way, do you have any donuts or coffee here? Storywriting makes me hungry.

Narrator: I think there are some on that table.

GA: Doughnuts!

Narrator: Okay...

GA: Mmm... That was good. Oh, sorry. On with the story...

~~~~~~~~~~Back on Track~~~~~~~~~~

Isaac: Where do we go now?

Jenna: Hon, I think I see a town!

Isaac: Where?!

Ivan: Yes, I see it.

Garet: If my memory serves me right, that's Amora!

Mia: *sigh* Amora, the "City of Love."

Felix: Yup, sure is.

Jenna: Isaac... *wink, wink*

Isaac: *smiles*

Ivan: The City of Love. C'mon! (I wonder if anyone for me is there)

Mia: *Mind Reading Ivan*

GA: Mia! You can't Mind Read!

Mia: What!? I'm not the one typing this.

GA: Oh... right...

~~~~~~~~~~Amora, The City of Love~~~~~~~~~~

Garet: We should go to an Inn.

~~~~~~~~~~In the Inn~~~~~~~~~~

Innkeeper: How may I serve you?

Felix: We'll get 6 rooms.

Jenna: *ahem* 5 rooms.

Felix: Five?!? You are not thinking of sleeping with--

Isaac: *ahem*

Felix: Oh... Fine. You're 17. Just don't *wink, wink*

Felix: *whispers to Isaac* Don't you--

Isaac: Don't worry!

Felix: Yeah, I shouldn't.

Garet: Well, it's getting late. Let's sleep.

Mia: Yeah, let's.

~~~~~~~~~~Garet's Room~~~~~~~~~~

Garet: *snores*

~~~~~~~~~~In Mia's~~~~~~~~~~

Mia: *dreaming* No! Isaac... Jenna you--

GA: Um... I'll censor that part...

~~~~~~~~~~Ivan's~~~~~~~~~~

Ivan: *dreaming* Plasma! Take that...

~~~~~~~~~~Jenna and Isaac~~~~~~~~~~

Jenna: G'night, hon...

Isaac: Good night....

Jenna: Brr...

Isaac: Are you cold? Here, let's snuggle up closer.

Jenna: *smiles*

GA: Don't worry. Nothing happened.

~~~~~~~~~~Breakfast~~~~~~~~~~

Garet: *yawns* That was a good sleep.

Mia: Yeah.

Isaac & Jenna: Yup!

Jenna: Where's Felix?

Ivan: Jenna!

Jenna: That sounds like Ivan. *runs to Ivan's room* He ain't here. Maybe... *runs to Felix's room*

Ivan: Jenna: How do you wake up your brother?

Jenna: *grins* Bacon!

Felix: Five fried, extra crunchy...

Jenna: With eggs!

Felix: Huh? *awake* I'm awake, I'm awake! Where's the eggs?

Ivan: How interesting...

Jenna: There are other ways that are hilarious.

~~~~~~~~~~After Breakfast~~~~~~~~~~

Ivan: Aww, c'mon.... We didn't even eat.

~~~~~~~~~~The City For Ivan~~~~~~~~~~

GA: While Ivan was walking, he spots a girl, named Sheba, walking to the bookstore.

Ivan: Wow! Who is she...*walks to the bookstore*

Ivan: *walks up to Sheba* What's your name?

Sheba: The name's Sheba. And your's?

Ivan: I-I-I-I--

GA: IVAN! You buffoon!

Ivan: Ivan!

Sheba: Oh... By any chance, are wind adept?

Ivan: *whispers to GA* Am I a wind adept?

GA: Yah.

Ivan: Yes.

Sheba: What a coincidence! Me too!

Ivan: Cool.

Sheba: So what brings you here to Amora?

Ivan: It's a long story.

Sheba: I'm ready for a long story.

Ivan: *gulp* Okay...

Sheba: C'mon there's a fire place down the hall.

Ivan: (I wonder, is it a good idea to have a fire place in a book store?)

GA: Well... they start talking until a fire engulfs the whole bookstore...

Ivan: I knew it! Fire place + bookstore = disaster! Oh, Sheba? Are you all right?

Sheba: Yeah.

~~~~~~~~~~Jenna and Isaac... again~~~~~~~~~~

Isaac: Jenna, I love you.

Jenna: I love you, too.

~~~~~~~~~~Felix and Garet~~~~~~~~~~

Felix: When will I ever say I love you to some girl.

Garet: I hear you...

~~~~~~~~~~Mia~~~~~~~~~~

Mia: I always wanted a man. I strong, masculine, older man. Oh well...

~~~~~~~~~~Outro~~~~~~~~~~

GA: In that last part, it seemed that Mia just described Piers... Hmm...

Narrator: *stuffing mouth with donuts* Yuff. [He means "yup]

Flint: When do I get to show myself.

GA: Oh right, the Djinn. I include you in part 2... somewhere.

Flint: FEVER! I TOLD YOU HE'D INCLUDE US!!

Fever: Okay, okay! I'm wrong, not deaf.

Gust: Fizz, you owe me 10 bucks.

Fizz: Fine, fine, take, take.

GA: Umm... okay... ?

Bane: Could I end Part 1. PLEASSSSE!

GA: Go ahead.

Flint: Do you have any donuts here?

GA: Well, we did until Narrator ate all of them.

Fever: Do we have coffee?

Narrator: Dang, I need to use the bathroom. Too much coffee.

Gust: I predict he drank all that, too.

Bane: *ahem* THE END!!!

Fizz: No it's not. It's only part 1. I mean we don't even know what will happen to Ivan or Sheba...

Bane: Okay--

Fizz: ... or Jenna or Isaac--

Bane: Okay...

Fizz: Or Garet or Felix or--

Bane: OKAY ALREADY!

Bane: Let me rephrase myse--

Fizz: ...or Mia--

Bane: *glares*

Fizz: Ok, I'm done.

Bane: Anyways... THE END... OF PART 1!!