I'll let you first read the poem then later on I'll reveal what I was meaning to convey.
And it's a lyric poem so I was not that strict in the number of syllables or rhythmic pattern? J
Still not done with my latest story, Thief of Heart- sorry for not really finishing quickly what I started but I will someday soon. I just have to refresh some details to make it more realistic.
Disclaimer: I do not own Prince of Tennis ( how I wish but never, ouch!)
" My heart's lecture I must heed"
My feet shamble off the ground
As my eyes keep staring down
On my head I feel thorns of crown
Pushing me under until I drown.
Two gleaming eyes filled with tears
Rolling down with sharp fear
Song of his words I hear,
Hopelessly covering my ears.
I had him as an inspiration
In my life, the most wonderful creation
Dazzled by his light with a sensation
Of love that needs a cessation.
Every day I listen to his voice so sweet'
Every hour on him my eyes can't retreat
Every minute my nose senses his whiff
Every second his name I consciously breathe.
Someday these feelings must be concede
But from him I still need to recede
My heart's lecture I must heed
For in a moment, I might be deceived.
This is Sakuno trying to get over Ryoma but finds it difficult because she really doesn't decode whether she is willing to or not.
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