What I Am
Author: emerald and onyx (fanfiction)/ depressedXOpixie (fictionpress)
Edited: 9/27/10
Original A/N: OMJ, I'm so freaking proud of myself, this is the second good story I've written and published!
Kay, so since I'm so proud of myself, if you read this, can you please review? I'm lazy, so I don't really feel like checking the traffic, so if you review I might not be sad and delete the story.
Domo arigato! (Thanks very much, yea, it's in Japanese, so?)
Alyson Curtis hurried through the halls of the high school, unaware of the eyes watching her from the shadows, hidden by the mass of students flowing through the halls. The bright crystal eyes followed her as she moved through the crowd, occasionally throwing a quick smile to someone calling her name.
Suddenly, her watcher turned his head in the other direction, towards a disturbance behind Alyson. A boy was shoving his way through the crowd, running to keep up, his round face red.
"Aly! Aly, wait up!" Ben yelled over the chatting of friends and protests of the people behind him, who had been roughly shoved aside.
Instead of waiting up, the observer saw Alyson speed up, ignoring the calls of others as she turned and shut the door of the janitor's closet behind her.
The boy standing in the shadows pushed himself away from the wall. Time to go work, he thought to himself, smiling and running his tongue along his teeth.
"Hey Ben, can I talk to you for a second…?"
CLIFFIE!
Okay, I'm afraid to end it there, even though it seems perfect… Anyway, review, tell me what you think, and when you review, can you tell me whether I should continue the chapter? Check back anyway, I update at weird moments, plus I might revise the chapter.
Edit: So I'm pretty sure I know where this is going now. So hopefully I'll have an update soon. It's probably not going to go the way I originally planned, but hopefully you'll stick with me! (and don't worry, soon you'll have an explanation to who the mysterious figure in the shadows is!)
~Depressed Pixie