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CHARACTERS
- Corinne Intrepidus, a sixteen year old born to Candor, faction transferred to Dauntless. Sister of Christina Intrepidus. Daughter of Cameron and Caroline Intrepidus. She has shoulder-length black hair, dark, brown eyes, tanish-peach skin, and most likely would wear a T-shirt, a sweater, knee-high shorts, and tennis shoes.
- Millie Eaton, a sixteen year old born to Abnegation, but became Candor. Sister of Four, Tobias. Daughter of Marcus and Evelyn Eaton. She has waist length brown hair, dark eyes, and normal colored skin (haha). She would most likely be seen in a sweater, jeans, and boots.
- Dylan Ditectif, a sixteen year old born to Abnegation, faction transferred to Dauntless. Brother of Will Ditectif. Son of Jacob and Annabelle Ditectif. He has sandy-blond hair, spring green eyes with yellow flecks, freckles across his nose and cheek, peach skin, and would wear a grey T-shirt, a hoodie, cargo shorts, and tennis shoes anyday.
-Travis Ajutor Althetae,a sixteen year old born to Candor, faction transferred to Dauntless. Son of Susan and Alex Althetae. He has blonde hair, clear blue eyes, peach skin, and wears a white T-shirt, a black zipper sweater, jeans, and tennis shoes.
- Peter Hayes, an eighteen year old born to Amity, faction transferred to Dauntless, and faction transferred again to Erudite. Friends of Molly and Drew. Son of Brian and Karina Hayes. He has shiny brown hair, emerald green eyes, a peach complexion, and would wear a T-shirt, a black hoodie, uniform pants, and tennis shoes.
- Tris (Beatrice) Prior, an eighteen year old born to Abnegation, faction transferred to Dauntless. Sister of Caleb Prior. Daughter of Andrew and Natalie Prior. She has sandy-blonde hair and grey/blue eyes. She would most likely to be seen in a jacket, shirt, black skinny jeans, and sneakers.
- Four (Tobias) Eaton, a twenty year old born to Abnegation, faction transferred to Dauntless. Brother of Millie Eaton. Son of Marcus and Evelyn Johnson Eaton. He has messy, dark brown hair with, dark eyes (in the book, his eye color isn't mentioned). He is most likely to be seen in a leather jacket or hoodie, black jeans, and tennis shoes.
- Christina Intrepidus, an eighteen year old was born Candor, faction transferred to Dauntless. Older sister of Corinne Intrepidus. Daughter of Cameron and Caroline Intrepidus. She also has shoulder-length hair, chocolate brown eyes, and would wear a spaghetti strap shirt, sweatpants, and black shoes.
- Will Ditectif, an eighteen year old born from Erudite, transferred to Dauntless. Older brother of Dylan Ditectif. Son of Jacob and Annabelle Ditectif. He has shaggy blonde hair and green eyes. He is most likely to be seen in a black hoodie, jeans, and tennis shoes
Four
I stood at the Choosing Ceremony with Tris. We were now the official leaders of Dauntless Faction. We changed the initiation process, so it would be a little easier than what Eric set up. To be honest, I didn't know if my sister would be here. I don't even know how old she is, for a fact. When I was 17, I used to sneak Millie out of Abnegation and teach her to do all Dauntless stuff. Jump on a train, jump off a train, stuff like that. I hope she chooses Dauntless
" Welcome, sixteen year olds. Today, you choose the factions you truly belong in. You are going to choose the faction your Aptitude Test showed. Remember, once you choose the faction, it is permanent. Otherwise, factionless if you do not agree." Marcus said.
All sixteen year olds looked at each other, while we, the leaders or representatives of each faction, loudly cheered.
" Ok, first up, Corinne Intrepidus." Marcus said.
I immediately recognized her, the sister of Christina. Christina cheered for her sister, showing support. Interesting last name...
Corinne grabbed the knife, cut her palm, and walked towards Candor, gritted her teeth, and instead quickly dashed to Dauntless. She squeezed her hand together and blood dropped onto the heated coals of the Dauntless. Our faction made a loud cheer. Corinne handed the knife to Marcus and ran towards us. One of our members, Dylan, grinned at Corinne. I'm having a weird feeling…
She ran towards Christina and they hugged for a second. Sisters reunited.
" Josh Flame."
Josh grabbed the knife and slit his palm with the knife. I saw his face grimace. His blood dropped towards Amity. He grinned at a girl with shoulder-length black hair. I believed her name was Ashlyn Kawaii.
" Millie Eaton…" Marcus's voice faltered. I hoped she chose Dauntless. Brother and sister back together once again. She glared at Marcus and snatched the knife away from him. She cut a cut on her palm and without a thought, dropped a drip of her blood into the Candor Glass. Marcus's smile faltered. My younger sister chose Candor.
Christina
It was the day of the Choosing Ceremony. I practically bouncing and anxious to see what my younger sister would choose. I lifted my chin and cheered as I heard my sister's name being called, "Corinne Intrepidus."
I was really hoping she would choose Dauntless. My heart dropped as I saw her walk towards Candor, but then her eyes averted to Dauntless and the next the thing you know, I see her crimson blood sizzle on the hard black coals.
She looked like a thousand pounds had dropped from her shoulders. She gave me one of her signature grins. I looked at other people's faces and they seemed pretty happy. I saw Dylan, a group member, grin wider than anyone.
I grinned inwardly. My sister had chosen Dauntless!
I tousled her hair and messed up her french braid on the top of her head, yet she still looked good. We looked alike, as in we had black hair that reached our shoulders and tan skin. But instead of fighting in a wild kind of way, she looked for strategies and weaknesses and gave punches and kicks whenever necessary as not to drain her energy, but her punches and kicks were heck powerful and hurt, a lot! It almost seemed like she could've joined Erudite anytime, but she fitted well with Dauntless too. I watched the other 16 year olds choose and soon, it was time for the first test of the Dauntless initiates!
Corinne
"Are you crazy?!" I yelled at my sister.
"Absolutely not! Otherwise, I wouldn't be in Dauntless, now, would I?" she replied.
" Ok! I'm Four. I'm your Training Instructor, along with Tris. Christina and Zeke are Dauntless-born initiate trainers. So, first things first. Get changed. In order to be a Dauntless, you must look like one. But, we must first get to Dauntless Compound. Jump onto that train." Four said.
" Are you crazy? What if we die?" A guy yelled.
" Are you going to shut up?" Tris asked and the guy quickly shrank back in fear.
" If you don't make it, jumping off the train, you are factionless, and, if you don't jump on the train, you still will be factionless." My sister noted.
Tris jogged to the train, grasped her hand around the outside bar, and swiftly swung herself into the cart.
" Who's first?" Zeke asked.
" Me." I said.
" Go than." My sister said and I started running. I was about an inch away. I swung my arm, but didn't feel anything in my hand. I reached my hand out and felt a cold metal. I swung myself on and felt a sting in my arm. I looked down at my left arm to see a bloody gash made by a sharp metal point coming from the metal bar. I swore under my breath and swung myself, quite painfully, into the car train. Several initiates followed soon after. When I saw Christina, I walked over to her and showed her my wound.
"Cheesus Crust!" Christina yelled.
I smiled, remembering the time my friend, Nicholas, has made up the words.
"What happened to you?!" she literally looked like the mad hatter. It almost looked like her hair was red and fiery.
I grinned and said, "My first trade mark from initiation! I got cut by a metal thingy, and look!" I said pointing to my scar, "It's my first battle scar! With a metal pole!" I said grinning.
She playfully slapped me in the arm, "Come on, Corinne. I'm serious. What happened?"
"I'm not kidding! I got cut by a pole! Imagine! A pole standing still can injure a wonderful Dauntless warrior who can move, like me!"
My sister rolled her eyes and went to talk with Tris, Four, and Will.
I turned around and almost collided with a Dauntless member.
"uh… hi," he said.
"Um… hello?" I said, not sounding so sure.
"Well… see you around? I guess?" he said.
"Yeah… uh… sure…" I didn't sound sound so confident either…
As I peered out the train windows, I realized I had forgotten to ask for his name. I sighed and mentally said goodbye to my family and looked at the great stretch of land running by me, memorizing each and every detail, for I knew I wouldn't see the nature for some time.
Millie
" Hello new Candors! I am Jack Kang, your leader. This is our Initiation process: Today, you have a serum put into you. Also known as Truth Serum. The Truth Serum test will be at 9 PM, before that, you have free time, or you can visit family. Same rules apply for the rest of the factions. You will be doing it in front of everyone in Candor! We will also be choosing a Representative, since the rules have changed. I am the leader, you are the Representative. There are now meetings with other factions. The rules have changed, my Candors! Now, good day, and I wish you luck on your initiation." Jack said quickly, so no one can understand him.
We were escorted to our own dorm rooms. On the wall was a tech pad (designed by Erudite.) with words. It said:
Choose your wallpaper, carpet color, bed color, desk color, lamp color, and there is a closet with Candor clothes. Closet Inventory: Three black dresses, two white dresses, five black and white dresses, two black sweaters, two white sweaters, five pairs of black jeans, two pairs of black leggings, two pairs of white leggings, three black skirts, two white skirts, two pairs of white jeans, three pairs black boots, and two pairs of black formal shoes.
I clicked the NEXT button. I chose white walls with white carpet. My bed sheets were lavender, my lamp was yelled, and my desk was normal brown.
I clicked the DONE button and the pad disappeared.
I saw that in my room was a clothes washer and drier. I went into my closet, changed into a white cotton sweater (no buttons, just plain.), and tucked my sweater into a black skirt that reached to my knees, and black boots.
" Choose this as a signature style? Then no one else in Candor can take it. Everybody has a signature style." The pad said, appearing out of nowhere.
" No. Can you please pick something out for me?" I asked.
" Yes." The pad said and flew into the clothes. It came out in a minute with a white T-shirt, a knee high black skirt, a white sweater (button-up), white leggings, and formal shoes.
" Signature style?" The pad questioned.
" Um… something without a skirt. Sorry." I said.
It flew into the closet again and reappeared with black jeans, a black and white striped sweater (no button up. A normal, plain, cotton sweater.) with black combat boots.
" Yes." I said.
" Yay. Now. This outfit is canceled out so other people cannot use it." The pad said and disappeared again.
Dylan
During the Choosing Ceremony, I couldn't hold down my excitement for the new initiates for Dauntless. I was always curious about things. It just never seemed to stop. After a few names were called, there was an interesting name, "Corinne Intrepidus." Sure Christina's last name was also Intrepidus, me, being a 17 year old, found Corinne an unusual name of elegance and grace. I snickered and wondered what faction she would fit into. I was surprised she didn't even flinch when she cut her palm, since she looked like a girl who was fragile and had too much poise.
She walked towards the Candor Bowl. Typical for a girl like her. Then, I saw her eyes glance at charred black coals and she instantly darted to them and I heard her blood sizzle on them. I was shocked for a few seconds, but then grinned widely. This girl, was like her sister. She was not who I thought she was. Not Candor, not Amity, not Abnegation, and not Erudite, which would fit her well. She, was Dauntless.
Travis
I stood in the training room, practicing my punching. I still couldn't move that bag!
" It's been a year and I can't move this thing!" I yelled in frustration and kicked it.
" Arg!" I screamed as I heard a small crack in one of my toes.
" Don't kick the bag with your toes, idiot. Kick it with the flat of your foot." I heard a voice say. I immediately whipped my head back.
" What's a Lie Detector doing here?" I asked.
" I went to go see my brother. What's a idiot doing here alone?" She asked.
" Practicing." I said.
" Try stretching before you punch it. It helps a lot more." She said and was about to walk away, but I interrupted her by asking," What's your name?"
" Millie." She said.
" Travis." I say and she walked away.
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