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'Get up you worthless piece of fox dung!' Swiftnose said to her apprentince, Rosepaw got up, 'You don't desirve to have the best warrior in the whole clan to become your mentor! You where the reason your mother died, and your father!' She hissed at her, Rosepaw shrunk down, her mother, Grassfern had died when she gave birth to her and her siblings, Pinepaw, Dandelionpaw, Stonepaw, Irispaw, Flowerpaw, Mudpaw, Gorgepaw, Wolfpaw and Gasppaw, Her father had commited Suicide, she and her siblings where alone now, and Rosepaw unfortunately got Swiftnose to be her mentor, when she was a kit she sneaked out of camp and saw Swiftnose kill the former deputy just to become deputy but Brownsong became deputy instead, she started to have flashbacks.
Flashback:
Rosekit and her sister Iriskit ran out of the camp, 'Hey catch!' She yelled to Iriskit, after a long time they got bored, 'Hey lets check out the tall pine!' Iriskit said to Rosekit, Rosekit nodded they ran to the tall pine, suddenly they heard a scream, 'Quickly come on!' Rosekit came climbing the tree, from where she was standing she saw that Swiftnose, a loyal warrior had ripped the throat off Troutstripe, the deputy at the time, also their mothers sister. Swiftnose noticed the kits, 'If you breath a word about this you will end up like her!' Swiftnose hissed, Rosekit suddenly became scared of her. Suddenly the branch underneath her snapped and she landed onto the ground with a tud and placed out!
When she finally woke up she was in the med cat den, 'Are you okay?' Asked Mallowpool, the med cat at the time, and the time now, 'I'm fine, I hope' She said.
End of flashback:
Rosepaw shook her body, 'Why won't I tell Poolstar that Swiftnose killed Troutstream,' She thought.'Let all those to come under hgh rock for a clan meeting!' Poolstar called out, all the cats came under the clan, 'I have found four kittypets on our territory! They want to join the clan!' Poolstar said to the clan, 'Do you four kittypets really want to join?' She asked them, 'Yes!' They said, 'Well then I give you your apprentince names you will now be known as until you get your warrior names will be-' Poolstar said, just cut of one of the kittypets, 'Wait! We were born with these names! Can we please keep them?' One of the Kittypets, who was known as Agnetha said, 'Fine you can! You will be known as Agnetha, Bjorn, Benny and Anni-Frid! Agnetha your mentor shall be me! Bjorn your mentor shall be Brownsong, Benny your mentor shall be Eaglesky and Anni-Frid your mentor shall be Berryfeather! Meeting dismissed!' Poolstar said walking away, 'How come they have the friendly cats as their mentors?' Rosepaw thought, 'That's it! The only way not to be killed by Swiftnose is to kill her myself,' She thought, 'Can I have a chat with you?' She asked Swiftnose, Swiftnose gave her a quick nod, they walked over into a dark forest, 'This is it!' She thought, she jumped onto Swiftnose and scratched her, Swiftnose was bigger and stronger but Rosepaw was more cunning, she waited for Swiftnose to make a mistake and she pushed her into a deep river where Swiftnose drowned, 'At least we'll all be safe now.' Rosepaw thought walking back to camp.
Irispaw's POV!
I walked over to the fresh kill pile just to get myself something to eat, I noticed Rosepaw running towards me, 'What happened?' I asked, 'Keep this a secret, I killed Swiftnose, she would distory the clan if I let her live. 'Oh, we should tell Poolstar that Swiftnose killed Troutstripe.' I said walking to the leaders den, 'Poolstar!' I called out to her, 'What is it?' She asked, 'Remember Troutstripe? Well she wasn't killed by a fox, Swiftnose killed her, don't worry, we sorted Swiftnose out,' I said. Poolstar nodded and walked away, at least we were safe.
Did I do a good job? I hope it wins me a point!