Prologue
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This was rewritten btw. The first version was just ... meh.
He's entered an interrogation cell which seems normal on the outside. White walls, white lights, a two-way mirror on the wall and a reinforced metal table with two metal chairs on opposite sides. But a quick appliance of sage mode tells him it's anything but. The white walls are reinforced with seals as is the two-way mirror, two anbu agents have hidden themselves on the walls and on one of the chairs the woman who was being contained. Her hands as well as her feet are chained to the desk and floor and although her eyes are blindfolded her head seems to follow him as he sits on the remaining chair.
"Soooo…." He drawls "You wanted to see me?"
She stays silent.
He waits
A second later he opens his mouth.
"If you're going to stay silent can I just go? Because I've got a lot of things to do like go to Ichiraku's to get some ramen and…."
He ignores the chuckle that he heard through the small radio he was given.
"maybe meet Konohamaru and…"
"You said you would find peace." Her voice cuts in.
He stops rambling.
"Yeah I did. And I will"
"Peace through understanding isn't much of a goal nor is never giving up" she says
"It doesn't matter I'll find a way"
"That's still not a plan Uzumaki" Her voice is soft yet clear and it makes think that him think that she could have been an singer if she hadn't become what she was now.
He scoffs "And blowing up my home was?"
"Sacrifices are required to achieve goals and peace is a very big goal"
"Threating people isn't peace, that's fear" he replies
"Why wouldn't it be? There would be no more war. No more children learning to kill before ten and no more people like you"
The last one gets to him. "What's so wrong about being like me? I like being me"
Kakashi-sensei chuckles through the radio again.
Dammit that's getting itchy.
"You know what I mean Jinchuuriki"
"My name is Naruto" his answer is immediate. "And the fact that I'm a jinchuuriki won't stop me from being happy, nor will it stop me from achieving peace."
"Taki's second jinchuuriki started the second shinobi war just by being at the wrong place at the wrong time. Judging by your character I'm surprised you haven't started the fourth yet"
"Wait what?" He blurts out.
This time he can hear Sakura's sigh….. and his ear is getting really itchy.
"You don't read a lot of books do you? You should learn more history Uzumaki because unless someone does something drastic history always repeats. Something as naïve as 'understanding each other' won't do enough to achieve peace"
Kakashi-sensei's voice crackles through the speaker. "I doubt blowing up half of your former village would achieve peace either"
"It was... unplanned." She admits "It was just very personal for the both of us. I guess seeing familiar faces made us lose focus. I don't regret it however"
"You don't regret killing hundreds for your goals?" Kakashi-sensei asks.
"That's coming from the man nicknamed 'friend killer kakashi'"
The speaker stays silent and she continues turning her head towards him.
"Generation upon generations of people have tried to achieve peace through understanding. The god of shinobi - Hashirama Senju, Jirayia of the Sannin, the song bird of Kumo - Hibari Usagi, the gentle giant of Iwa - Yuuta Oki were all legends among their generation and all of them failed. Peace through understanding won't work"
Even blinded folded her gaze seems intimidating and he almost takes a step back but the more he stood his ground instead of feeling angry or despaired at the knews that several others had failed before him the more determined he felt. He stood up and slammed his palms on the metal desk.
"You're wrong. I know you're wrong. They might have failed before me but that doesn't mean their efforts were in vain. They died for their dreams, dreams that I've inherited and dreams that I'll fulfill. I'll stop the repetition of history and break the cycle of hatred. I'll give it my all and I'll never give up. I'll achieve peace my way
I'll prove you wrong"
He leans towards her and although she can't see it he gives her a determined grin.
"Believe it"
A twitch a lips is all he gets as a response.
"Naruto get out of there. The council's summoned you" Kakashi sensei's tells him through the radio.
He turns and starts to leave.
"Sometimes your best and never giving up isn't enough" she calls out behind.
"It doesn't matter I'll make it happen" he replies without looking back.
He reaches the door and Sakura's waiting for him giving him a smile, he grins and gives her a thumbs up. Nothing she can say will stop him now. Nothing she can say can shake his resol-
There a two meters away before she speaks.
"Your Uchiha friend by the way…"
He freezes and Sakura tenses next to him. He turns around slowly.
She's free. Her chains are unlocked and the anbu guards are pinned to the wall by her black chakra rods. She reaches up and pulls the blindfold away from her eyes and purple locked on to blue. None of them moves.
"He should have attacked the Gyuki in Kumo by now."
"You're lying! Sasuke-kun wouldn't do that!" Sakura exclaimed
He stares at the woman and dread starts to creep in to his heart. "What have you done?" He almost whispers.
"Nothing yet" she says
She gives him a small smile that's too sweet to be anything good "Remember what I said about Taki?"
A rasengan whirls to life in his hand and he lunges at her only to be smacked in the face by the iron door that suddenly swung shut. Sakura punches the door off its hinges barely a second later but by then it's too late.
The only sign that she had been there were a pair of empty cuffs and the bodies of the anbu guard.
Review pls. I need criticism to improve my writing. (Yes criticism I don't care what kind as long its acceptably constructive)
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This fanfic was created because there's not enough antagonist;OC fanfics and Pein in the manga is waaaaaaay to weak(to me at least).
I'm probably gonna give a lot of the S classes buffs(the sannin, hidan...) and nerfs(tobi/obito, kisame...) so warnings for whoever doesn't like balance patches.
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Canon plot is dead to me, very slightly inspired by Rotted Rowan (slightly because I was inspired to write because of it but theres no common plot points).
Uhhhhhh Enjoi and Enjoi.
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Again review pls. Tell me how to improve my writing .