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"So" she said in a hesitant voice, "this is it…." She stared at the large entrance to the village that seemed to be staring
back. The wind blew at her shoulder-length light purple hair. "For you Ronmaru…" she waited as if she was looking for
answer, "For you Gaara..." she looked down and stared at her feet. "I…" she stuttered "I… I…" her warm teardrops ran
down her face and fell to the ground before her feet. "I…miss you…both of you." She tried to stop the tears from escaping
but they were welling up.
"May I help you?" a village entrance guard asked.
"Hmm?" she looked at the man with a leaf headband she would be proud to wear. She noticed what a fool she was making
of her self and felt her cheeks burning up. "Sorry…" she muttered.
"It's fine." He said and smiled a sheepishly which made her smile.
"Is this the one?" someone whispered.
She turned around and saw a boy standing with the other guard. He had blonde, spiky hair and blue eyes; he also was
wearing a leaf headband.
He had the oddest clothes she had ever seen.
He was wearing an orange shirt with three-quarter length sleeves, and was that lipstick on his shoulder? He was also
wearing orange three-quarter length pants.
Ugh, that's so hideous, she thought.
"Don't ask me." The other guard said, annoyed with the boy.
The boy walked over and stood next to the guard.
"Is she?" he asked the guard in front of her.
This guard was also annoyed, "No Naruto" he huffed out "Ask HER"
"Oh" Naruto said, turning to me.
Naruto? That's his name? not the name I would have picked.
Naruto smiled a smile so big it looked like his mouth was going to fall off. "Hi! I'm Naruto!" he held out a hand waiting for
her to shake it.
She hesitantly held out her hand. "Um…I'm Katagi."
He had a firm hand shake. "SO IT IS YOU!" he yelled, "YES! FREE RAMEN FROM OLD MAN THIRD HERE I COME!"
Ramen, Katagi thought
"Well? C'mon!" he took my hand and pulled into the village.
New life…Here I come…