(Kagome) Damn! That stupid Inuyasha! He thinks he can just order every one around, well he's not going to tell me what to do!
*Flash back*
(Inuyasha) Hey! Kagome, i need to talk to you. What is it Inuyasha? I want you to give me the jewel shards, to tell you the truth you really suck at keeping them safe, i mean they almost got stollen again in our last battle with that stupid spider demon. Inuyasha! SIT! how dare you say that to me, I'm trying my best ok! I'm not a demon that has like a million powers gosh, besides that demon was REALLY scary looking, it looking like it got burned to death, then got ran over by a car! So when it tried to take the jewel shards i freaked out and couldn't move at all! UMMM Kagome, what is it! What the hell is a car? Ugh never mind that, i refuse to give you the Jewel shards!
Kagome left Inuyasha, when Inuyasha was still inside the ground from that SIT! command. Kagome! Where the hell are you going!? I'm going back home you jerk! Dammit Kagome get back her know!
*End of flash back*
Ugh! Can he NOT insult someone for once in his life! Ugh finally I'm at the well, what is that? Is that another well? Hmmm, i think I'll go check it out, then go home. What the hell? It's shining, and it looks like it could be a rainbow, just in well form? I think I'll jump in it, i kinda wish someone was here with me though... as soon as i jumped in, i heard another voice, i sighed in relief, but all i saw was golden eyes, and sliver/whitish hair, Inuyasha?! Inuyasha?! Is that you?
Oh shit! Those golden eyes looked like they were about to pierce through my heart, that is defiantly not Inuyasha. It was pitch black in the well, I couldn't see anything, all i knew was that i landed on solid ground, who was the human or demon that was in the dark, is it going to kill me?
ok so this is my first story, and I'm not the best writer, but if you have a recommendation of something that i should put in the story, please tell, thanks! oh and tell me out of 1-10 how bad or good the first chapter was. :)