This is my first, ever, fanfic, so I would really adore some comments and tips!

"Let us dance in graveyards and revel in our sins. The heavens don't want us and hells can't find us. So surrender your innocence me and enjoy this bedlam while we still can"

~GrimExpectations~

The overwhelming pain had taken it`s toll on Harry, So he had welcomed the darkness, sleep coming at him, covering him with its dark, soothing veil. He wanted nothing more but to let the numbness of sleep take over, not waking up, never facing what he knew was to come. Reality –

A stinging pain and throbbing in his ears, made him come to it. Slowly pulling his counscius, against his will, from the darkness, bringing himself back to his senses. As he came closer and closer to the surface of awareness, pain struck him. He realized the throbbing in his ears was his own heart thumping inside his chest, his muscles burned under his skin. The effort to lift his eyelids took well over 10 minutes. After a while he thought about giving up and once again giving in to the comforting darkness that was sleep. But no he must fight, he had to find out what had happened. He hoped the last days occasions were a sick, twisted dream, but in his heart, he knew. He had lost.

Once his eyelids fluttered open, he found himself staring into a dark red wallpaper, lying on his side on something cold and hard, he recogniced as marble. He slowly started testing his body, to see how much he could move without pain, none at all.

With a grim voice he muttered to himself " No surprise there…" he lifted his head from the ground, only to flinch to the pain his head was in, unnoticed before.

He pushed himself up off the floor, gritting his teeth at the pain causing him to feel nausea as he sat up. He instinctively put his right hand against his throbbing head, covering his scar with his hand as he looked around his surroundings.

He was obviously in a large room, elegantly decorated with its red tapestry. Gold and black curtains framed the two windows on the other side of the room. One of the walls had a fireplace in it, with two leather chairs on each side of it and a couch in front of the open fireplace. Everything was elegantly decorated and it had a luxourius look to it.

Slowly standing up, he swayed before leaning against the nearest wall, feeling the sickness creeping up inside him. He was tired, aching and confused. Where was he? Why was he here? Where was Voldermort? Before Harry could recover from his nausea a door opened, and a pale, tall, dark clothed wizard entered the room.

The sight of him alone made Harry grit his teeth, and growl deep inside his chest.

"ah, awake now are we Mr Potter?" Lucius Malfoy smiled, but it did not reach his eyes, he marched into the room and Harry was sure the room went smaller.

"w-where am I?" He was annoyed at himself, and at how his voice had failed him. Attempting to sound courageus, he only sounded like a small scared boy.

"you`re in no position to be asking questions" The man moved closer to harry, causing him to desperately feel for his wand, Lucius smiled " Looking for this, Mr Potter?" He saw Lucius hold his wand, waving it, taunting Him.

"Give it Back!" Harry lounged himself at the taller and more muscular man, who grabbed Harry and spun him around.

"tsk tsk tsk… Now now Potter, you have no use of your wand here." Lucius didn't move as Harry began trashing against him, kicking out where he could. Lucius merely took hold of Harrys wrists forcing them behind the young boys back.

Harry growled "Let me go! I swear I will fucking Kill you!" He yelled as he tried to shake the man off.

"And if I would, let you go, where would you go?..." At this Harry stopped trashing, Lucius bringing his free hand up to harrys throat, smiling to himself as he felt Harry stiffen in his gripp.

Harry opened his mouth, but was interrupted by Lucius

"Unfortunately enough, for you that is, you are dead to your friends. Yes Potter we have ensured a gripping story of your death " Lucius smiled at the confusion that traveled across the young boys face.

"What do you mean dead! Im here! They`ll find out! The order will-" He was cut off as he was whirled around, facing Lucius as he was then slammed into the wall.

"No Potter, I don't think so. You see we made sure Severus got convincing memories of you dying and the remains of you was taken to Dumbledore." Lucius put his hands on Harrys shoulders, painfully digging his nails into Harrys skin, yet Harry did not show any sign of pain.

"Why hasn't he killed me then? Voldermort not being as brave as he was made out to be huh?" Once again he was slammed against the wall, Lucius growling.

" The Dark Lord has other….uses… for you" Lucius look changed, and made Harry squirm uncomfortably, wondering what the new sparkle in the mans eyes meant, but not sure he wanted to know.

Lucius smirked, and trailed his thumb across Harrys jaw line, causing Harry to shake his head to get away from the man`s unnerving touches.

-SMACK-

Lucius had smacked the young boys cheek with the back of his hand, smirking as he saw Harrys eyes flash with anger, but before Harry could shout at him he was cut off.

"The Dark Lord has given me the pleasure – he put emphasis on the word – of keeping you Potter…"

Harry was startled, from the look in Malfoys face it wasn't a good thing and he didn't wait long until he kicked and clawed at the large Man. He had no intention of staying to find out what Lucius was so smug about. Harry Growled and put all his power in a kick into Malfoys private parts, causing the man to let him go, and groan loudly.

Taking his opportunity Harry raced for the door, feeling the door knob brush against the tip off his fingers, almost, almost there. He gripped the handle and burst the door open. But before he could take another step he felt a strong arm wrap around his waist and pull him off his feet into the rock hard chest of Lucius. He was dragged back into the room, and Lucius soon put one arm under Harrys chin, against his throat, choking him.

"You`re mine to do with as I please, and there`s no one to save you Potter" Lucius hissed into Harrys ear, then his eyelids fluttered as darkness took a hold of him once again.

So um I want comments and tips, do u want me to continue this or not?