My LAST CHALLENGE! This is very exciting for me, so please, enjoy my last work as an apprentice! Please note that this clan is a clan that speaks a different language, so if there are words you don't get... *Whispers* Read them backwards...

I am Snowpaw. My mentor's name is Icefire. We, in Nalceas, are generally pretty hard to understand. As in, our language.

"Wapwons! Emoc ereh!" Icefire called out. We understand the tongue of the other clans' but we, particularly, don't use it very often.

"Gnimoc!" I answered to her. "Erifeci! Let's speak in the 'native' tongue."

"Fine! I don't see why you are so obsesed in speaking in it! You should be talking like us, in YOUR tongue!" She answered. "Well, anyways, let's train." I obeyed, and did what she was saying.

"Attack me." She said, with her back turned away from me. I did, but my paws shuffled against the hard ground of the rock the training hollow. She heard, and lashed out at me before I could land the hit. She unsheathed her claws.

"Foxdung!" I cried out.

"How did you do that? You can't even land a hit on a warrior with their back turned?! I will have to tell StarraRivern about this, you pitiful excuse for a newborn kit. Come with me, and we shall go speak to her. " Icefire spat. "Mousebrain.."

I ran. I ran as fast as my legs could carry me. I couldn't get caught! I would be exiled!Of course, I was doing it for myself, anyways. I stopped at a large cave to sit down and rest. I couldn't go any longer. Before I knew it, everything went dark and I left, to a world I had never been to before...

"She did what?" StarraRivern asked.

"Yes, she couldn't even hit me with my back turned and guard down!" Icefire, the arrogant mentor replied. "I asked her to come with me, and she just ran off! I can't continue mentoring her! She always does something like this! Once she even ran to where the queens make their dirt!"

"She needs to learn though, she has potential for an excellent warrior," StarraRivern tried to reason.

"She has to learn, alright! She couldn't hurt a mouse! She never comes back with anything when she goes for a hunt, once she didn't even help when we were under attack!" Icefire argued.

"Maybe you are being too harsh on her, maybe she is scared that she will do something wrong."

"TOO HARSH!? YOU'RE SAYING, THAT I'M BEING, TOO HARSH ON THE TINY THING!?" Icefire thundered. "She can't do anything right!"

"I have had enough of this! Leave my den! Now!" StarraRivern hissed in warning. Icefire oblidged nervously, running out of the den, wondering why she was treated this horribly by both her leader and apprentice, and even the whole of her very clan. She also left StarraRivern wondering,

What would happen if she ra- No, no, that isn't possible. I shouldn't worry. Before Night fell.

How is the first chapter? Hope it is good!