It was sickening. The pain that was flaming like fire through my whole was all i could hear and i somehow knew it was from my own mouth. I didnt know how long i had been like this, withering with fire inside me. I just wanted the pain to go away. Luckily my heart was in breaking point. 'Finally this suffering will end' but my thoughts weren't quite right.
Quietness. Birds singing in the trees. Wind playing with my hair and different smells crowded to my nose better than they ever had. Confusion. Peace. Happiness. All kinds of feelings were rushing through me and i hadn't yet even opened my eyes! I was afraid of what would have changed. I noticed too how my thoughts were different. I was like a superhuman. Horror. 'Why can i remember languages so well? How can i think like a smart-ass nerd? What am i?!' with those things in my mind, i decided to open my eyes. Slowly, with little movements, my eyelids went out of the way. I was in a forest. First of all; nothing could trespass without me knowing. Why? Because i could see everything, the particles that floated in air, every little detail was seen by me. It took awhile for me to get used to these superthings. I heard all kind of animals in the forest, just walking around or hunting. Which got a burning sensation to my throat. It felt horrible, like being without food for weeks, with a touch of soreness in throat. I didn't know, something just went off and i was running, as fast like some stupid formula. No, i went even faster. Towards a big BIG animal. A bear. 'Why arent i backing off?'. Jumping to a bear's hairy back wasnt my first thing on the list. But inside it, the blood smellt so good, so tasteful, that i had to have just a tiny, tiny little bite. From bear's neck. Ew!
Quietness. Birds singing in the trees. Wind playing with my hair and different smells crowded to my nose better than they ever had. Confusion. Peace. Happiness. All kinds of feelings were rushing through me and i hadn't yet even opened my eyes! I was afraid of what would have changed. I noticed too how my thoughts were different. I was like a superhuman. Horror. 'Why can i remember languages so well? How can i think like a smart-ass nerd? What am i?!' with those things in my mind, i decided to open my eyes. Slowly, with little movements, my eyelids went out of the way. I was in a forest. First of all; nothing could trespass without me knowing. Why? Because i could see everything, the particles that floated in air, every little detail was seen by me. It took awhile for me to get used to these superthings. I heard all kind of animals in the forest, just walking around or hunting. Which got a burning sensation to my throat. It felt horrible, like being without food for weeks, with a touch of soreness in throat. I didn't know, something just went off and i was running, as fast like some stupid formula. No, i went even faster. Towards a big BIG animal. A bear. 'Why arent i backing off?'. Jumping to a bear's hairy back wasnt my first thing on the list. But inside it, the blood smellt so good, so tasteful, that i had to have just a tiny, tiny little bite. From bear's neck. Ew!
Ahaha please, rewiew. I have to say, im not so pleased with this. My first story and i just want to know about your opinion, should i write about vampires :DD And yes, i will next time use more that one hour to the stories.