A/N: I wrote this in like ten minutes. Pleasepleaseplease have mercy with reviews.


Fall

it's hard to think

I gasp and look around

and I am lost

my mind is foggy

I pitch forward

but stop

I want to call out to him

but I cannot talk

I am standing

on this building

such a sturdy thing

my vision swims

it is now blurry

I am crying

and I can not think

and finally

I am falling

it is rushing forward

a ground so cold

and inviting

but it is still

and cold and finally

I am falling

flying high

but I am so low now

falling


Please review. And a cookie to anyone who can guess what is...off about this poem. :)