Hi, this is my first fic ever so please tell me what you think of it… please go easy on me

Hi, this is my first fic ever so please tell me what you think of it… please go easy on me. But still, a bit of criticism would be wise.

And if you would want some idea's to be put in the story, please PM me so the readers won't know it.

DEMON – demonic voice, summons, etc

FLASHBACK – letters, flashbacks

THOUGHTS – thoughts (example:hahahaha)

JUTSU'S –obviously jutsu's (example : KAGE MANE NO JUTSU)

YELL – obvious as well

Normal – this as well

DISCLAIMER: How about that, anyone would not be stupid enough to think I own this.

SUMMARY: Uzumaki Naruto has been adopted by Kakashi, apparently he's discovered his God Daughter is still alive.

C H 1 – P R O L O G U E

October 10, Night of Kyuubi attack, several war cries of Konoha Shinobi can be heard throughout the battlefield as they try to hold back the nine-tailed Kitsune. It is rumored that with one flick of its tail, it could crush mountains and sending tidal waved rushing to the shores.

"HOLD IT BACK TILL YONDAIME COMES"

"WE MUST NOT LET IT THROUGH KONOHA BORDERS"

Kyuubi roared, flicking its tails, mercilessly slaughtering everyone in its wake. Blood and dismembered body parts are scattered throughout the battlefield as Konoha was sent to the bring of extinction.

I-N T-H-E H-O-K-A-G-E T-O-W-E-R:

Namikaze Minato (A.K.A Kazama Arashi, Yondaime and yellow flash) had just finished his preparation for its seals… the whole room is filled up with several kanji signs; over the floor and the walls, all meeting up at the navel of a new born baby – forming a spiral.

Sarutobi (Sandaime Hokage) had just stared in amazement of mastery of sealing, the complexity of the seals formed, before breaking the silence.

"Minato-kun, are you sure this will work."

"Actually, I pretty much don't know myself either" looks down. "But it's the best chance we have, my daughter will live a harsh life from now on. I know you would try to stop me! But as I promised, I will protect the village with my life"

Sandaime, no longer trusting his mouth, just nodded slowly; realizing that he had just sent him to his death sentence by giving him the title Hokage.

"Right then, I have prepared everything. Scrolls are in your desk, my mansion, and my portraits… my only wish is for her to be treated as a hero" Minato afterwards disappeared in a flash of yellow light.

B-A-C-K I-N T-H-E B-A-T-T-L-E-F-I-E-L-D:

A Flash of yellow light was seen

"KUCHEYO SENO JUTSU" smoke covered the clearing,

The cloud of smoke slowly dissipated showing a blond haired man wearing a white hokage robe, cradling a baby on his left arm, on top of the legendary boss toad summon, GAMABUNTA.

"IT'S THE YONDAIME"

"FALL BACK"

"Minato, for what reason do you ca.." he was cut of at the sight of the enraged kitsune.

"Gamabunta-sama, I need you to hold it back while I prepare the sealing" with a sad look "this maybe our last battle"

"So your gonna do it then… I would be honored to have this last fight with you"

Gamabunta charged to the Kitsune, unsheathing its katana to strike the fox, however it took only one tail to block the attack. The frog boss was quickly being quickly overpowered.

"Minato, are you done yet"

"No, Not yet"

"MORTALS, DO YOU THINK YOU CAN DEFEAT ME. THE LORD OF ALL BIJUU'S, STRONGEST OF ALL NINE" Kyuubi roared as he wraps its tails around the frog boss

"SHIKI FUUJIN" The Death God (Shinigami) appeared behind Yondaime's back.

The Kyuubi, now trying to escape the shinigami's wrath, stood in failure as he was now under its mercy. Kyuubi's souls was now being torn apart from its body to the seal, leaving only a cold body which quickly disappeared in thin air. However, the death god needs 2 sacrifices. Minato's body started to get cold as the shinigami starts to literally devour his soul, looking at his daughter for the last time before falling from 4 stories in the air.

Gamabunta's link in this world weakened and disappeared in a puff of smoke. He was disappointed to not be able to catch the lifeless body as to pay his last respects; Minato is a hero, he knew what it takes to be a good leader.

T-I-M-E S-K-I-P

The reinstated hokage has just taken care of the child and was ready to make his announcement to the public. He walks out the tower to face the crowd.

"Today, the Yondaime has sacrificed his life to defeat the beast." He looks at the crown with happy and sorrow in his face. He took a deep breath "however, he was not able to kill the beast… no man can, so he did the next best thing. He sealed it in a human body, a baby to be exact" he says as he lifted Natsumi in the air.

"DEMON"

"HELL SPAWN"

"KILL IT"

"WE MUST NOT LET THE INCARNATION HAVE TIME TO STRIKE"

Hokage glared at them, releasing some KI (Killing Intent) to silence them before walking back to his office.

I-N H-I-S O-F-F-I-C-E

Sarutobi, in his disappointment, was forced to put Natsumi in an advanced henge sustained by the Kyuubi's chakra and will only be dispelled when she decides to or till she's able to defend herself. In which will be supported by fake identity papers under the name of Uzumaki Naruto as well as a law to ensure secrecy of her identity.

Afterwards, he sent him (since she's in henge) to the orphanage. In his office he looks at the mountain of paperwork in front of him, while mumbling something about "Minato", "Punishment for his failure".

Hahaha, Sorry bout that. Hope you like it

I will update mostly everyweek, I will always find time for my readers

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