This is my first real fanfic, so I'll take in compliments or criticism. It's going to be a cool story so enjoy. I'd like to thank Kaamen for making me have the urge to write fanfics. I got this idea from her if you want a character in my story message me the following:

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and what you may want his/her role in the story to be.

Let's begin!

Sakura POV

"Hey, Saki I'm throwing a party tonight wanna to come?" said Tenten through the phone.

"Yea I'll be there, what time is it?" said Sakura.

"At 9:00 p.m., see ya there." said Tenten and she ended the call. Now I have to pick what

I want to wear. Sakura rummaged through her closet looking for the sexiest casual clothing she had. She was 13 so it couldn't be to revealing.

Finally, she found the best outfit which consisted of a gray short sleeved shirt that stopped at mid belly and blue jean Capri. She pulled her long hair into a curly pony tail and looked herself up and down in the mirror. I look S.E.X.Y. She started singing Now I'm that Chick by Livvi Franc.

She looked at her clock DAMN it's 8:45. She ran out the house and told her parents bye. You guessed it she ran to the party. When she arrived at Tenten's the place was already full and it was just 9:00. As Sakura looked around she saw guys checking her out. She winked back. She walked in the house and started dancing the minute she entered to her song: Tic Toc by Ke$ha.

Wake up in the morning feeling like P Diddy

( Hey what's up girl?)

Grab my glasses I'm out the door I'm gonna hit this city

( Let's Go)

Before I leave, brush my teeth with a bottle of Jack

Cause when I leave for the night I ain't comin back

I'm talking pedicure on our toes, toes

Trying on all our clothes, clothes

Boys blowing up our phones, phones

Drop-Topping playing our favorite cd's

Pullin up to the parties

Trying to get a little bit tipsy

Don't stop make it pop DJ blow my speakers up

Tonight Ima fight til we see the sun light

Tik Tok on the clock

But the party don't stop, no

" Hey Saki you made it!" Tenten said hugging Sakura.

" Wouldn't miss it for the world!" said Sakura with a grin.

" I'm so glad your parents went out of town!" Sakura screeched.

" Yea me to!" Tenten yelled over the music.

" You serving alcohol like last time." said Sakura.

" Of course, see ya later Saki!" Tenten ran to go mingle with other people.

Another song came on Sakura liked. She started grinding with the closest guy not looking to see who it was.

Baby, I just wanna get your attention

I really wanna be all up in your head

Cause what I got you gone wanna get some, yea

But that's only if you ain't scared

Sasuke POV

Who does this chick think she is, but Sasuke didn't care once she started grinding on his dick. Yea you heard me the Sasuke Uchiha didn't care. Sasuke put his hands on the girl's hips and pulled her closer and grinded into her. He heard a moan escape her mouth. After

And I won't knock or ring no bells

You just poke that bottom up in the air

I'll get you hot, I know you so well

And when I'm walking all I wanna hear

"This chick really knows how to make a guy hard." Sasuke thought. We'll show her who's in charge. Sasuke turned Sakura around so she was facing him, but that plan backfired. She looked into his eyes and started grinding up and down Sasuke. He had no words to say, so he turned her around again and put his hands on her waist and grinded into her ass.

She let out a squeak of surprise. Sasuke smirked.

Is your Daddy's home, home for me

And I know you've been waiting for this lovin all day

You know your daddy's home (daddy's home)

And it's time to play ( so it's time to play)

So you ain't gotta give my lovin away

So all my ladies say ( hey hey hey daddy)

Hey Hey Hey Daddy

So all my ladies say ( hey hey hey daddy)

Hey Hey Hey Daddy

Sasuke felt sweat roll off both their bodies. He heard the girl singing to the lyrics. Sasuke got tired after a while and left.

Sakura POV

Whoever that guy was he sure can dance and get a girl wet. I'm going to get a drink. She walked over to the bar to see kids her own age serving the drinks. She asked for the strongest thing they got and that was Everclear which is grain alcohol.( A.K.A. strongest type of alcohol and only a small amount is needed before you crash) Sakura drunk a pints worth and sat their for a minute. I'm headed to Tenten's room me sleepy.

Sasuke POV

That chick drove me nuts I have to get a drink. Sasuke asked for Everclear not knowing what it was but he heard Itachi talking about it before. Sasuke drunk a pints worth also and was feeling woozy, so he headed for Tenten's bedroom. ( In this story Everclear makes a person's lust level increase)

He walked up the stairs and entered Tenten's room to see a girl half nude. All she was dressed was her shirt and panties. His dick throbbed inside his pants.

Normal POV

Sakura looked up from her position with lust filled eyes, so was Sasuke. He walked to her and that's how it began. Sasuke crawled on top of Sakura and kissed down her neck and back to her lips. Sakura felt on Sasuke's abs. She was getting wetter by the second and Sasuke was getting harder.

Sasuke's hand crawled under Sakura's shirt and kneaded her breast as she moaned he bucked his hips against hers. She squeaked and ran her hand down his abs and stopped at his zipper. She unzipped his zipper and grab his dick rubbing up and down it. Sasuke moaned out and she smiled.

Sasuke saw this look and pulled off his pants. The girl below him eyes got huge. She could see the erection in his pants but she wasn't done yet. She pulled her pants so Sasuke could see her wet panties. A song came on during this act Headboard by Hurricane Chris

Damn I can't believe it's bout morning

Ladies this is Mario, Yea

We be in the bed girl getting all wild

fucking like it's going out of style

You be like yea, yea

getting all loud fucking like we trying to have a child

Put you up against the headboard

Got your body swinging like ooh ,ooh, ooh

Baby grab the headboard make it go,

Make it go make it go ooh, ooh, ooh

Sasuke got turned on to the max after this sight. He instantly took his shirt off for her eyes to wander. After her eyes were lust filled again he took her shirt off. Sakura unclipped her bra so her size B breasts fell out. Sasuke loved this and took her breast in his mouth sucked them til her nipples were sore.

Sakura sat on Sasuke's hips and grinded into him until he orgasmed on his self. Sasuke was embarrassed about this so he slid her panties off and fingered her til her walls tightened around his finger and her orgasm came. His fingers inside her was killing her since she was a virgin.

Girl I want you to get on top of me and grind nasty til I feel body heat

I make your head hit the headboard til it squeak

I'll put it on ya have ya thinking bout me for a week

Sakura pushed down harder on his fingers so he'd go deeper. She was so horny and Sasuke knew it to, so he did the main event of the night. He took his pants and boxers off. Now both of them were completely nude. Sakura and Sasuke's eyes were glazed with lust. Out of the blue Sakura gave Sasuke a blowjob. Sasuke screamed at the top of his lungs. Sakura enjoyed his screams, but Sasuke did the worst thing you do to a girl who's a virgin.

Sasuke took his cock and slammed into Sakura with so much force. Sakura screamed in pain louder than any of their moans and screams. She cried and couldn't stop Sasuke from slamming into her. He didn't pay attention and she couldn't stop him because she didn't want to. The alcohol was really taking a toll on her. All of a sudden Sasuke stopped slamming into her. She wondered why, then she saw blood, her blood. The song that previously was playing ended and another began. Promise by Vanessa Hudgens.

What you think about this?

I been holding it in now I'm letting it flow.

What you think about this?

I'm gonna do my own thing yeah I'm flying solo so

Don't tell me how it's going to be.

On my own

And the thing of it is

There's nothing around here I'm going to miss

Cause you're holding me down

I just wanna fly

There comes a time when I gotta say goodbye

And I promise myself

I ain't nobody's I just wanna be free

And I promise myself

Even though it don't always come easy

Gonna learn from my pain

Never explain

Do it my way, that's what I say

Promise myself

I'm the only one who will believe me

She shook that out her head since Sasuke was still inside her she started riding him. Enjoying herself she leaned down and kissed him fully on the lips. He responded to the kiss but with more lust than Sakura. Sasuke started slamming himself into her even more and Sakura's stomach knotted and Sasuke's cock did. Sasuke gave it one more slam and both of them released themselves.

Sasuke spilled his seed into Sakura and Sakura's load came upon Sasuke's dick. Sasuke fell on the bed and Sakura cuddled next to him. He held her and waited for her to fall asleep then he fell asleep.

Next Morning

Sakura awoke in Tenten's bed and dressed herself. Without looking at the bed to see a sleep Sasuke. Sakura didn't remember a thing from last night except coming to the party. Sakura grabbed her head with both her hands. She had a killer migraine and hangover. Sakura left the room without a second glance.

Sasuke awoke in Tenten's bed not caring why he was in her bed. Sasuke only visited out of town. He didn't live in Amekagure. He lived in Konoha. He only came to this party because his friend Naruto said it was cool and he should go while he visited AME. Sasuke got dressed and exited the house heading back to his brother's house. What happens now?

I finished the first chapter to my first fanfic. Yea me! *claps hands like London Tipton* I'd really appreciate reviews and comments. I don't care if it's criticism just leave me something. So I can feel proud to read them. Thinking people cared enough to review.