Original name i know ;) so this is my first ever fanfic (so dont hate) the war never happened so a bunch of people are still alive. I would love to hear your suggestions to hear what you want. I am your ordinary teenage girl who has an eedy beedy obssesion with divergent... so hope you enjoy it!

Chapter 1

Tris' POV.

I am sitting waiting on the bench in the dauntless dining hall tuning out Eric as he is babbling on. When all of a sudden, the stats from initiation finally pop up. All I see is my name first on the list and the rest of the names are blurry. I look and see that Molly and Drew are now factionless so all my friends and I are Dauntless members!

All I see is Tobias running up to me and throwing me into a huge hug. I hug back and whisper to him, "did you know?"

He replies with, "nope confidential. Are you ready to show your friends?"

I nod and then we look each other for a second in the eyes and I can feel myself getting sucked in. Then he wraps his arms around my waist and our lips meet. We kiss for a while. I can sense that people are staring but I don't even care anymore. I wrap my short arms around his neck and continue to kiss him.

Then from across the hall I hear Eric shout, "Get a room!"

That breaks us apart and we stand beside each other hand in hand. Christina comes up behind me and is practically screaming, "Congratulations on first place but really? Four? Why didn't you tell me?"

Four interrupts and says, "I will leave you to explain, Tris I will meet you at the chasm at 8 then I will take you to Zeke's party to celebrate how awesome you did." And he kisses me on the cheek and I nod.

I am standing with Christina, Will, and Uriah. I tell them that it all started 2 days ago and not much else. Christina doesn't look convinced. Luckily Will and Uriah seem to be buying it.

She says, "Let's go get you all dulled up for your date."

I try to protest that this isn't a date, but Christina will not listen. When we reach the initiate dorms Christina checks to make sure there is no one in here which there isn't and we sit on my bed. Tonight is the last night I sleep here before I get my own apartment.

Christina starts, "I am a candor and I can tell a lie when I see one and I want girly Tris here."

"Ok ok," I start to explain. I tell her mostly everything. Like how it was Four that rescued me when Al, Drew, and Peter tried to kill me. I shiver at Al's name. I tell her about the Ferris wheel and our first kiss down in the chasm. I even briefly mention that I went in his fear landscape, that is sort of when we got together."

She is so thrilled. She pauses for a minute to let it all sink in. "Wait, you went in Four's historic four fear, fear landscape?!" I nod my head. Christina seems so shocked and she lets out an awww.

For a while longer we just keep chatting about everything.

When it reaches 7:00 Christina insists on getting me ready. I tune her out and just think about Tobias. She uses a curling wand and curls my hair so I have big bouncy curls. Then she goes in her humungous makeup bag and applies an assortment of powders and blush's and who knows what else on my face. Luckily, the finished product looks natural because Christina is so good at this.

She tells me to go get changed and she waits for me putting on her makeup. I grab the only dress I own; the one Christina forced me to buy 2 weeks ago. Then I add my black leather pumps. I look at myself in the mirror and I think I look not too bad.

I walk out and Christina looks satisfied. She has a date with Will then they are going to the party so I tell Christina I will see her there and head towards the chasm for my so called date with Tobias.

So I hope you liked it! Suggestions are ofcourse welcomed. I will try to get the next chapter up asap

byye

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FYI i am not that great of a writer I just love divergent so much I wanted somthing to do in my spare time and I find I really enjoy it!