Station Square High
Hi! I am back! I am trying to improve my story for a while. I hope I can improve my writing with all my best. Enjoy my story. :)
Her jade eyes were wide as she was in shock. She couldn't believe it.
She will going to her new school. That was the boarding school.
She will stay there until she graduated that mean 3 years of boarding school.
"I don't want to go there, mother! What about my school?" She said.
"Oh, Amy! I am so sorry but you must go to Station Square. I think this school would be better for you since you have lots of bullying at last school. You can visit us only Halloween, Christmas, Easter and finally but not last, summer." Her mother said.
Her mother was a cerulean hedgehog. She wears light purple dress with her yellow shoes. Her eyes colour is jade.
"Okay, mother." Amy said.
Amy was a pink hedgehog. She wear red dress with her red and white shoes. She got a ticker train for the larger famous city in Mobius, Station Square.
"I am going to bed so I can wake up in early morning. Good night, mother and father." Amy said
"Good night, Amy." Her father said.
Her father was magnolia hedgehog. He wears dark blue shirt and black jean with his red shoes. His eye colour is hazel.
"See you tomorrow, Amy." Her mother said.
Amy went to her bedroom and changed her clother to PJ. Her PJ was light pink onesie. Her bedroom was pink wall and her queen size bed was pink, her favourite colour.
She was on her bed to ready for her sleep and said to herself, "Tomorrow will be a long and boring day at Station Square high...Boarding school." Her jade eyes were closed.
Tomorrow will be a long, boring day in boarding school, Station Square High.
So what are you all think of these? And how is my improvement writing now? Okay, see you all next chapter.