A/N: sorry this is my first story that i've written outside of school...i'm not the best writer ever...nor am i even a GOOD writer! But i was bored and after reading many twilight fanfics i decided to give it a go. lol. so it would be really great if you could please read this and let me know what you think of it. If i get even one person that thinks its alright and would like to see the end of it i will keep going, but if everyone hates it then i'm going to stop...obviously lol. i already hav the next chapter typed out and yes it is longer than this one... i guess you could call this the intro to the story lol. so remember review!!! flames are really welcome because if i were you i would want to flame me too lol. but nice commets are welcome even more...well...here goes...

XOXO Andy

The begining.

I sighed and stood up from the bench that I had been seated at. It was 1918 and I was terribly bored. It had been a while since I had last hunted, so I decided that I should probably go now. It would give me something to do at least.

So I went to the hospital that Carlisle, my 'dad' was currently working at to let him know that I was going out to hunt. Carlisle is not my real father, my real father died in 1846. Ten years before Carlisle changed me. My mother is also dead, she died at the same time as my father. They were both killed in a carriage accident. I was only 7 years old then and that left me in the care of my grandmother. Who then passed away 9 years later, leaving me totally alone.

Carlisle made one of the most difficult decisions in 1856. He took my humanity from me. He transformed me into a vampire. Although i would not have chosen this life i am grateful to Carlisle for saving me. Yes he did save me. I was dieing of an illness that no doctor had ever come across before.

As i entered the hospital i asked at the front desk where i could find Dr Carlisle. In the children's ward. I walked at human speed to the ward and entered the room. As i entered i caught the most delicious scent i have ever dreamed of! so delicious that it could only be human blood. I was a 'vegetarian' vampire, meaning i drank only animal blood. But the temptation of human blood was always there, although never anything close to this strong! My throat burned and my head swam. The scent was almost overwhelming me. Just one insignificant little human couldn't hurt, could it? NO! I must fight this. Carlisle would be terribly disappointed in me, and i in myself too. I can do this! Just hold your breath...

I thought all this through in less than a second. And then i saw the cause of this delicious scent. A boy of around my age, with tousled bronze hair and vivid green eyes. He was beautiful to human standard. And he was also in pain. I don't know why, but i suddenly felt the need to help this poor boy, even though he was putting me through pain because of his scent.

I walked over to him, and at that second he looked up at me and our eyes met. His opened wide with surprise at my beauty. His eyes were so beautiful and deep...Snap out of it Bella! I scolded myself before the boy could realise that i was gawking at him.

"Who are you?" the boy groaned in pain at the effort it took to force out these words.

"I'm Bella," I replied feeling the burn of my thirst as i took a breath.

"Please, don't leave me!" the boy moaned in pain again.

"Don't worry, I won't," I said softly.

Carlisle entered the room then. He motioned for me to step outside with him. I obeyed unthinkingly, forgetting my promise to the boy.

"Bella, I think that i should change young Edward. His parents have just died of the influenza and his mother asked me to save her son. It was her dieing wish and i do not think i can ignore that fact." Carlisle explained, trying to persuade himself more than me by the sound of his voice.

" Carlisle, it's ok. If you think that it's what his mother wants, then i cannot object," I reassured him. Feeling quite happy that he might be changed into what i am.

So the boy's name is Edward, i thought, i like that name...

"Thank you Bella, will you stay with him after i bite him?" Carlisle begged, i knew how he would have hated that Edward would have suffered alone.

"Of course i will."

They walked back into the children's ward once again, and over to were Edward lay.

"Mr Masen, I'm very sorry to do this to you, but i think it's what your mother would have wanted," Carlisle told Edward, sympathy dripping in his voice.

"What?" asked Edward confused and tired.

"I truly am sorry," was all that Carlisle said before he bite him.

As Carlisle bite him, Edwards blood spilled over just a tiny bit. But that was all that it took.

My throat burned, a growl built in my chest...

well? what did you think??? good bad horrible? review please!

XOXO Andy