I am completely rewriting this story because I did not like how I had written it the first time. So here we go the rewritten version and I should actually be updating this one because its been floating in my head for a couple years.
This is a SasuNaru don't like don't read
I hope you enjoy! Please leave a review :)
Thereis a world parallel to our own called Tenebris, here demons still walk among humans and some are even revered as gods.
Naruto looked out over the beautiful valley that he called home. The sun made the early morning dew shine like diamonds. The river cuts straight through the center of the valley providing water for the people who live there. A small village is nestled right by the river and these people looked to the fox and panther demons for guidance. To them, these demons were their gods. The villagers thought them to be peaceful because they were never attacked by other demons and believed that the reason for that peace was the bravery and unity of the fox and panther demons.
Unbeknownst to them the fox and panther demons were rivals and were always at war with each other. The only thing the two of them agree on are that the villagers need to be protected from the demons that would run through and destroy their little village.
Naruto was looking out for the villagers while waiting for his friend Sasuke. They often meet here in the early morning to watch the sun rise but this morning he was late and Naruto was becoming worried.
Naruto is the only son of Minato Uzumaki, the head of the Uzumaki clan. Naruto is a fox demon and has excessive strength and power. Sasuke is the youngest son of Fugaku Uchiha who is the head of his clan and Sasuke is just beginning his training to use the feared sharingan. These two friends were forced to keep their friendship hidden from their families because if their parents found out they would be banished to the human world where demons are meant to be hunted and destroyed.
Then Naruto saw Sasuke running to their meeting spot but he was being followed by some of his father's henchmen. The two of them began to run but then became trapped when the foxes found where Naruto had gone. Their two fathers came running up to the boys and their faces were filled with worry until they realized that Sasuke and Naruto were holding hands. They became enraged and agreed on something for the first time in their lives. They shouted simultaneously,
"SASUKE UCHIHA! You are a disappointment to the noble Uchiha clan, Sasuke. I no longer acknowledge you as a part of this noble family. From today on you are banished to the human world," said Fugaku Uchiha.
"Naruto, I can't believe you would associate yourself with this vermin. From this day on you are banished and will never be able to step foot in the demon world again," said Minato.
Then a pillar of light surrounded the two boys and they were sent to a forest. They looked around not knowing where they were but the two figured they were in the human world. Using their heightened sense of smell they were able to make out the smell of humans and started heading towards it. As time went on the two became weary since they hadn't been able to eat at all that day but they kept going until a large gate rose up from the trees. When the two reached it they collapsed and the two guards ran up to them.
Well I hope you liked it anyway please review even if it is constructive. I would not appreciate people telling me your story sucks so please don't say that unless you provide reasons for why it sucks or give me helpful criticism.
