I wrote this story for school and thought it wasn't bad so I put it up here, hope ya like it!
Leader
Swiftstar--long-haired white tom with blue eyes.
Deputy
Blackspots--large white tom with jet-black spots.
Medicine Cat
Herbpool--small gray she-cat with green eyes.
Warriors
Apprentices
(toms and she-cats without kits)
Graytail--white tom with a striped gray tail.
Apprentice: Reedpaw
Pebblefur--silver tabby she-cat with blue eyes.
Apprentice: Silverpaw
Fireclaw--ginger tom with green eyes.
Mate: Dawnlight
Apprentice: Icepaw
Nightstorm—a large black tom with gray-yellow eyes and an unusually long tail Mate: Heatherfur
(in-training to become a warrior)
Reedpaw-- A light gray tom with green eyes
Icepaw-- a long-furred she-cat with deep, icy blue eyes, her fur changes from gray to white depending on the weather
Silverpaw-- a silver she-cat with green eyes
Queens
(she-cats expecting or nursing kits)
Dawnlight--small sunset-orange tabby.
Mate: Fireclaw
Heatherfur--long-furred cream she-cat.
Mate: Nightstorm. former mate and Reedpaw and Silverpaw's father died in a snowstorm
Elders
(former warriors and queens, now retired)
Smallear--thin gray she-cat.
Patchfur--ginger and white tom.
Prologue
Silver moonlight shone down upon a small ball of fluffy gray fur. It was mewling and shivering, its small, pink nose turned blue and its paw pads turned a dark, purple-blue colour.
I padded through the thick snow; icy wind buffeted my face and stung my eyes. I was searching for some food for my clan, WindClan, at a time like this I wished I lived in ThunderClan, under their thick forest canopy, though it probably wouldn't be too much help.
"Ooh" I moaned, sniffling. I stretched my unusually long, thick tail to cover my face. My paws felt like solid ice.
Then I noticed it, a small bundle of pathetic gray fur.
"Ah! Holy StarClan!" I raced as fast as I could to the kitten and I carefully picked up the limp figure with my mouth. I started running to camp. I felt a small heart beating against its ribs. Maybe there was hope!
I entered camp and called
"Help! I have a kitten here! Help!" I felt dizzy and everything started spinning, I collapsed in the snow and everything fell dark.
I open my eyes to see I was in the warm nursery with the small kitten nestled at my side. I sigh with relief, she is alive!
"Thank StarClan" I sigh
"Thank me and the medicine cat as well" a soft voice teased. I turn to see a beautiful cream furred queen lying on her side with two kittens curled at her stomach, a light gray one and a silver one, they looked like they were weened, but the light gray one looked like it had seen a giant fox with huge teeth that could rip a cats head off, it was scared! A small, sunset orange tabby was asleep in the corner of the Nursery.
"Thank you?" I say with uncertainty, she laughed softly
"That kitten was alive and well when we found it next to you, we couldn't understand, though, it should have been long dead."
"I'm just glad she is alive" I sighed
"Is she yours?"
"No! I just found her in the snow..."
"Well, she is yours now!" The cream queen, Heatherfur, smiled.
"I guess she is... Icekit, my daughter, named because of her strange appearance in the snow"
"You'll be a fine Father" Heatherfur said
"Thank you, I'm sure you're a fine mother for your kits" Heatherfur smiled
"Bring her here, she needs milk" I nudged Icekit towards Heatherfur; she sniffed around and eventually found a place to suckle.
"I'm tired; I think I'll have a nap in the Warriors den, Good Night, Heatherfur"
"Good Night, Nightstorm. And good luck!"
Chapter 1
I walked into camp with my head, ears and tail down, because if I looked like this it might soften the blow my father is going to give me when he hears I pushed Reedpaw onto the thin ice and he fell through. Fresh snow lay on the ground, now you could hardly get into the warriors den because a two-tail-length high wall of snow was blocking the entrance.
"ICEPAW DID WHAT?!"
"Here it comes" I sighed. My father, a large, black tom with an unusually long tail, walked up to me.
"What do you have to say for yourself?" He demanded
"It was an accident-"
"Oh, sure it was!" he said sarcastically "Just like when you tripped Reedpaw into the dirt pile and when you knocked him out of a tree when he was chasing a squirrel that we had needed badly! Don't forget the time
you tricked him into running into a foxes den by telling him you saw a rabbit run in there! And that time he almost got hit by a Monster 'cos you told him a mouse was on the Thunderpath"
"At least I warned him a Monster was coming!" I said, trying to defend myself,
"Oh, yes, let us praise Icepaw, the hero who called to Reedpaw when the monster was a tail-length away from him!"
"You don't have to be sarcastic! I was only having a little fun, besides, he is so weak! He deserved it!"
"Icepaw, elders den for the rest of the moon, now, before I make it 50 moons"
"but-"
"NOW!" He roared. I walked over to the Elders den grumbling. It's not that I hate Reedpaw or anything, I don't really want him to die, I just don't think an Apprentice like him deserves to be a Warrior; he is more like a Kittypet! The light gray tom was drying himself off in the apprentices den.
"Hey! Thanks to you I was punished! Mousebrain!" I called to him angrily, this was his entire fault! Reedpaw looked at me with scared eyes and turned away.
"Weak! Wont even defend himself to a she-cat!" I spat, ruffling my fur against the icy winds.
"So, Icepaw, I suppose Reedpaw pushed himself into the water in front of everyone?!" Silverpaw said, "Stop being such a piece of crowfood!"
"How dare you-"
"Icepaw, why aren't you in the elders den?" My father asked, stepping between me and Silverpaw,
"Right," I said, walking into the elders den.
Exhausted, I collapsed onto my nest in the Apprentices den. I had been helping the Elders all day and my limbs ached. I fell asleep instantly. Darkness engulfed me, I couldn't see a thing. Suddenly an image of a beautiful, green forest filled with flowers appeared in front of me. Then it showed a queen lying on the grass with a newborn suckling at her stomach, suddenly everything around the kitten froze and wind started howling. A snow storm started, The Queen yowled and looked at her little, fluffy white kitten, it started glowing a blinding white light. Voices started echoing everywhere,
"Ice will become fire and defrost the clan" an imposing voice said "Ice froze the clans"
Then I saw the kitten, it was alone in the snow storm, its mother abandoned it, it opened its eyes... it had deep, icy blue eyes...
"No... NO! Impossible!" I yowled and struggled to get away but I couldn't move. Suddenly darkness engulfed me and everything around me, I couldn't see once again. I started falling... Falling...
"Icepaw, Icepaw! Wake up!" I opened my eyes to see Reedpaw's green eyes staring worriedly at me, "you had a bad dream" He said softly
"I know I did, I'm the one who had it!" I said, pushing him away from me. I wonder if I should tell the Medicine cat of my dreams... I thought.
Graytail came to get Reedpaw and Silverpaw for training, I hissed at them angrily.
"I'm sorry you don't get to come to training today, Icepaw"
"Shut up! Mouse brain! I don't care!" I did care, actually, Fireclaw, my mentor, was really nice to me and I really enjoyed training. Even if I didn't ever become a Warrior, training with him was worth it. I curled up in a ball and put my fluffy tail over my face, my eyes filled with tears and I wept silently, so no one could hear. It wasn't just the training that I wept about, it was my father... He thought that I didn't know that I'm not his daughter but I over heard him and Swiftstar talking about it one day. My father tried to cover up the fact that I didn't look like him at all by saying I took after my mother, who died bravely fighting a fox, but I should have
had something in common with him, I have big blue eyes, he has small yellow-gray ones, I have a delicate frame, he has a big strong one, he has a long thin tail, I have a big fluffy one, he has a long muzzle and I have a small short one! The only thing we have in common is our short temper, but he is kind most of the time, but our short temper that makes us fight a lot.
Soon I drifted into a restless, dreamless sleep, probably the best sleep I had had in moons.
Reedpaw and Silverpaw padded to the Training Hill, a small hill that is great for training. Turning to Reedpaw, Silverpaw said:
"Why do you like her so much? She is always horrible to you"
"She has had a hard life. Every night you can hear her crying and I bet you think she doesn't know she was adopted, she does!"
"That's no reason to be mean!" Silverpaw protested
"Silverpaw! I like who I choose to like, stay out of it!" Reedpaw snapped, Silverpaw looked taken aback, Reedpaw never snapped at her before. She shrugged it off and went ahead to find her mentor. Reedpaw sighed and followed her.
not much of a prologue, but I was never good with those. review!! Please?! I want your opinion (and maybe some criticism)! Flames will be used to light my fire, yay!