First fanfic so try to review and help us along the way........ Yes, Us. I'm
writing thisd story with another person from school....
Chap 1: The Meeting
Electra, forgotten knight of the cloth of Panthera, ran down the stairs and into the vast gardens of the Kido mansion, searching for the princess Sienna. The goddess looked up from her book as Electra charged in, already in her cloth and mask.
"We have found him my lady," she said without preamble. "He is waiting for you in the parlor." Lady Sienna leapt to her feet, following her young guardian to the parlor where the young man awaited them.
The man was sitting in the chair in the corner of the room. He had dark blue short hair, and light blue eyes. He was silent as the two ladies entered.
"Welcome young knight, to our humble estate," said Lady Sienna, trying to be calm. "I'm lady Sienna, the goddess of Athena, and hope that you would accept an invite to stay here tonight."
"mumbling under his breathewhatever," he muttered slightly. He didn't care, he just wanted to get this over with.
"Speak UP when you are addressing Lady Sienna!" Electra was outraged. '(thinking) the nerve.....' Her voice pierced the air like a missile seeking its target.
The man blushed slightly so that the Princess nor Electra could see. Again he muttered something, but this time it was more understandable. Still, Electra was not amused, her blood boiling under her skin. She was about to hit him so hard in the worst possible place, but Lady Sienna stopped her with a short and defiant glare.
"My name is Poseidonius." The man said almost abruptly after seeing Electra's face about to explode in rage. "I'm sorry that I have been disrespectful to you my Lady, it's just I a bit shy (and scared) of you two." He finished, looking down. "I also don't understand why that you need me here."
"Do you not own the cloth of Delphinus?" Lady Sienna questioned him. The young man nodded, still looking towards the ground. "Then you should know the answer to your last question," she said calmly. "Aphrodite's wrath has been incurred. There is a great war now brewing between myself and that witch, Aphrodite, and so, I wish to bolster our ranks as much as possible." She said, taking a deep breathe. "I have my Gold Knights, Bronze Knights, and only a few of the Silver Knights on my side. I would strongly thank you for helping me." Finishing, she was looking at him, as if to see his answer in his head.
"WHAT DO YOU MEAN?!" He yelled. Electra quickly stood, ready for action. Lady Sienna sat her down before Electra could do any damage. "What is the Gold/Silver/Bronze/WHATEVER! Why do you want me to help you, if you have your knight things? How come you didn't ask the rest of my clan? They have the same power that I have. Why ME?" He said, staring at the two women sitting in front of him. "What does any of this mess gotta do with me. I don't care what happens to you and Aphrodite, OK?!" He ended, face red and eyes bulging. Electra, again, was at her feet, clenching her fists and gritting her teeth.
Lady Sienna sighed. "Gold Knights control the cloths of the zodiac and are the most powerful. Silver Knights are the second strongest. Bronze Knights, on the other hand, are the third strongest and some what weak. Any ways, if you possess the cloth of Delphinus, you are certainly needed in this war, and are definitely a Knight." She sighed once again, seeing that he still clearly didn't understand a word that she had said. "And as I am Athena, Aphrodite is my enemy in the Pantheon. That's all that you need to know about her for now."
Electra, still standing, was worrying about the way this child had just yelled at her Princess like that. 'thinking THE NERVE!'
Chap 1: The Meeting
Electra, forgotten knight of the cloth of Panthera, ran down the stairs and into the vast gardens of the Kido mansion, searching for the princess Sienna. The goddess looked up from her book as Electra charged in, already in her cloth and mask.
"We have found him my lady," she said without preamble. "He is waiting for you in the parlor." Lady Sienna leapt to her feet, following her young guardian to the parlor where the young man awaited them.
The man was sitting in the chair in the corner of the room. He had dark blue short hair, and light blue eyes. He was silent as the two ladies entered.
"Welcome young knight, to our humble estate," said Lady Sienna, trying to be calm. "I'm lady Sienna, the goddess of Athena, and hope that you would accept an invite to stay here tonight."
"mumbling under his breathewhatever," he muttered slightly. He didn't care, he just wanted to get this over with.
"Speak UP when you are addressing Lady Sienna!" Electra was outraged. '(thinking) the nerve.....' Her voice pierced the air like a missile seeking its target.
The man blushed slightly so that the Princess nor Electra could see. Again he muttered something, but this time it was more understandable. Still, Electra was not amused, her blood boiling under her skin. She was about to hit him so hard in the worst possible place, but Lady Sienna stopped her with a short and defiant glare.
"My name is Poseidonius." The man said almost abruptly after seeing Electra's face about to explode in rage. "I'm sorry that I have been disrespectful to you my Lady, it's just I a bit shy (and scared) of you two." He finished, looking down. "I also don't understand why that you need me here."
"Do you not own the cloth of Delphinus?" Lady Sienna questioned him. The young man nodded, still looking towards the ground. "Then you should know the answer to your last question," she said calmly. "Aphrodite's wrath has been incurred. There is a great war now brewing between myself and that witch, Aphrodite, and so, I wish to bolster our ranks as much as possible." She said, taking a deep breathe. "I have my Gold Knights, Bronze Knights, and only a few of the Silver Knights on my side. I would strongly thank you for helping me." Finishing, she was looking at him, as if to see his answer in his head.
"WHAT DO YOU MEAN?!" He yelled. Electra quickly stood, ready for action. Lady Sienna sat her down before Electra could do any damage. "What is the Gold/Silver/Bronze/WHATEVER! Why do you want me to help you, if you have your knight things? How come you didn't ask the rest of my clan? They have the same power that I have. Why ME?" He said, staring at the two women sitting in front of him. "What does any of this mess gotta do with me. I don't care what happens to you and Aphrodite, OK?!" He ended, face red and eyes bulging. Electra, again, was at her feet, clenching her fists and gritting her teeth.
Lady Sienna sighed. "Gold Knights control the cloths of the zodiac and are the most powerful. Silver Knights are the second strongest. Bronze Knights, on the other hand, are the third strongest and some what weak. Any ways, if you possess the cloth of Delphinus, you are certainly needed in this war, and are definitely a Knight." She sighed once again, seeing that he still clearly didn't understand a word that she had said. "And as I am Athena, Aphrodite is my enemy in the Pantheon. That's all that you need to know about her for now."
Electra, still standing, was worrying about the way this child had just yelled at her Princess like that. 'thinking THE NERVE!'