This is my second fanfic. Remember, I am still a newbie if you have any ideas I'd read them.
Each of these stories are different from the others. Some of the characters might be doomed to existance. Like, a certain person from the Super Smash Brothers game. I will also make up different characters and maybe put some crossovers in the story. Maybe, just maybe I might put the people who are gone in my story into the next chapter. What do you think? Sound good or not?
The main characters in this story are Ness and Capt. Falcon.
Disclaimer- I do not own Super Smash Brothers or any of the characters, but the one's that I make up, are mine!
My name is Ness, as a little kid I was abandoned to fend for myself. Such harsh days, living off the trash in the garbage, and begging for money. Than one day he came. The person who would change my life entirely, Capt. Falcon. He gave me a place I could call home. He even gave me some work to do at his office in the police department. I felt like I could finally breathe, not having to worry about somebody mugging me, and stealing the clothes of my back.
All that happened when I was six, I have been with Capt. Falcon for two years now. Since I have turned eight, he has allowed me to come with him on his job. I ususally stayed at the police department, just hearing about everything on the radio.
I am pretty smart for my age. Capt. Falcon, was having trouble trying to figure out who the killer was once.
"Can I help?" I asked
"Do you think you can?"
I examined the evidence and all the suspects, where they were at time and who they were involved with.
"It's Mr. Bark, Mr. Bark's the killer."
"How would you know that?" asks Capt. Falcon
"Easy, Mr. Bark was involved with the victim." I stated. "He was married to her for five years until she got a divorce and stole everything he was worth. When everything he knew and loved was gone, he wanted revenge.
"That explains the motive."
"He planned it like a pro, placeing everything without the slightest trace of evidence, frameing others, and hiding everything. He stabbed her with the knife you found, and tried to hide it by slipping it off in someone else's coat."
"But wouldn't the person know if Mr. Bark put the knife in his pocket?"
"He anticipated this, he knew he couldn't do that. So he made a distraction so he could put the knife in their pocket. He used the victim as the distraction, when the person had taken their coat off, he slipped it in at that time. When you found the knife, it was in her husband's coat. correct?"
"Yes."
"Than he made everyone think that her husband killed her. He had the perfect reason to. They both were having trouble in their relationship, they were both depressed and--
"I see where you're going at. Nice job Ness, I never thought you had it in ya. How about you come with me on my next job?"
"Really!"
"You betcha."
And that started my first job of detective work.
End of Chapter.