GASP! A new story? That makes four! (see? i can count! im smart!)

again, co-written with Aqua :) check out her stories!
(mine are better tho :D )

One sunny mid-afternoon day, Angel and Total where sitting in Angels room playing with dollies.

'"And so this dolly is going to marry this dolly," said Angel, holding a hand out. She placed the two dolls together like they were hugging.

"Where should they have a wedding?" asked Total
"they can get married outside!" said Angel

"Hey! Angel, Total, where do you think you're going?" Max, the ever protective flock leader, asked.

"Don't worry Maxie, we're just going to go around the neighbourhood.' Angel said. Angel used her mind control powers on Max. "I mean, where do you think you are going without this money. Here. Take some." Max said, roboticly, holding out her wallet

"Thank you Max. We shall return soon. Please have dinner ready for us, we may be hungry after our adventure. But seriously, let Iggy cook. I do not wish to come home to a burning house." Total said

Angel and Total skipped away.

"ZOMG! Hi Angel do you want to go to the mall? ZOMG we totally should it would be soo much fun we could buy shoes and dresses and makeup and OMG we could meet cute boys an-"

"Sure Nudge." said Total. Because thats who it was who was talking. Nudge. No duh

Total are you thinking what I'm thinking? There are tons of people in the mall. We could get them to play with us! Maybe ring around the rosie! Said Angel, speaking telepathicly to Total.

Angel, Total, and Nudge flew the to the Hillcrest Mall. Nudge wanted to look at clothing, but Angel and Total refused. They agreed to go their seperate ways, and meet back at the mall entrance.

And so Angel and Total skipped away from Nudge, and into the middle of the mall.

"Hey Total, look! a candy store!"

"My my, so it would seem. Let's go in. I'm craving some pop rocks myself. Such a big explosion of taste. And those little coca cola gummies? They pack a nice punch." said Total

"Lets go get some!" said Angel.

When they got to the candy store, however, they saw…

S- MWA HA HA! A cliffhanger! Ya, i'm mean. watcha gonna do about it?

I- umm... nothing? We all know you are going to post another chapter soon

S- not true! i'm leaving for quebec on tuesday!

I- Are you leaving forever?

S- no.

I- darn.

S- what was that?

I- nothing... OH LOOK ITS A PARTY

A- SUPRISE! Catlyn, Iggy and I are throwing you a partY!

S- Why?

A- because...

A C S + I - I HAVE BEEN A FANFICTIONER FOR 20 DAYS! YAAAAY!

I- R&R kbye