I decide to redo these chapters and start over with Hoenn Adventures with our five main characters of Max, Molly, Tory, Kathryn, and Aubrey.

Disclaimer: I don't own Pokemon in anyway because I am too young to create something as amazing as this series! If I did then I would probably be sitting pretty right now.


"The match may begin!"

{A battle begins between a Ralts and a Makuhita in Fortree City}

"Go Shu, use Psychic!"

A Ralts jumped into the air and fired a psychic beam at the opposing Makuhita which was hurled into the air.

"Makuhita use Arm Thrust!"

Then Makuhita hurls towards Ralts ready to hit its target.

"Shu dodge then use Confusion!"

Ralts dodges Makuhita's attack and jumps to the side. Ralts uses Confusion on Makuhita afterwards.

Makuhita is hit straight on making it hit the hard ground, knocking it unconscious.

"Makuhita is unable to battle, Ralts and Max are the winners!" declared the referee.

A cheer erupted from the surrounding crowd at the Ref's statement.

Max Maple smiled in satisfaction and ran up to hug his Ralts in triumph before returning it to its Poké Ball.

Since he had turned ten Max's first priority had been to visit the woods near Sootopolis City and find the Ralts he had promised would be his future battling partner back when he was seven.

With new hope in his eyes and his Pokémon at his side he knew he could accomplish anything. He is on his way to meet two old friends of his from South City.

Now he was traveling from Petalburg City to Lilycove City. In the past several years since his adventures with May, Ash, and Brock he has been studying nonstop getting ready for the day when he would be able to become a pokemon trainer.

Max was now in Fortree City a little ways from Lilycove City where he would be taking a express rail going to LaRousse City and South City.

He was going to meet up with Aubrey and Kathryn in South City then Tory and Ash in LaRousse City.

After the match he and his pokemon ate lunch. He now had his male Ralts (named Shuichi, nickname Shu), a male Marshstomp (named Poseidon), a male Poochyena (named Hades), and a male Shuppet (named Shin) on his team.

"Guys as soon as we're done we are going to go to the pokemon center okay?" said Max.

The pokemon cheered and continued to eat.

Just like Max said they headed to the Pokemon Center.

"Hello," Nurse Joy said as he walked into the building.

"Good afternoon Nurse Joy," Max began, "My name is Max. I was wondering if I could get a room for the night and my Pokémon checked out?"

"Sure thing Max," Nurse Joy replied, "Just one moment."

She brings out a tray so he can place his Pokéballs on it and handed over a room key.

"I will get started on checking out your Pokémon and your room number is 110," Nurse Joy said before walking away to a health personnel only room.

He goes to make a call to Audrey and Kathryn.

He put in their phone number and dialed. He waited a couple minutes before they finally answered and came on screen.

"Hi Max!" said Aubrey and Kathryn said at the same time and waved.

"Hey girls, I just wanted to tell you I will be there in South City tomorrow morning," said Max.

"Okay be careful," Kathryn began,"There have been strange things happening in the forest of Fortree City." said Kathryn

"I will see you two tomorrow, bye!" said Max as he waved.

"Bye Max!" said the girls.

Max went back to his room. Max fell asleep to get a good night rest for tomorrow. He knew it was going to be a long day... But he hoped it would be a good one as well.


Okay guys see you next time for the next chapter of Hoenn Adventures. Please review and tell me your thoughts about the story so far. Thank you and see you guys next chapter.