Hello and thank you for taking a look at my Marmalade Boy story. This story takes place at the end of the last manga. The first page and a half is word for word and scene for scene with the Tokyo Pop manga. I tried to use the best descriptions I could to portray the pictures. I wanted to stay true to the story as best I could so I decided that fully using the words and scenes to set up the story was the best way. These scenes are all spoilers! If you haven't read volume number 8 you might want to before you read this story.

The idea for this fic is something I came up with on my own. I really enjoyed the anime but I loved the passion of the last volume of the manga. But I noticed a big flaw with my choice of theme. Once I had written it, I took a look at other fics to see if I could improve it. That is when I found out that several other people had already done this same story using scene for scene from the manga.

Since the parts I added are very different than theirs, I decided to post it after all. Please tell me what you think. I have completed the story and will post more chapters if it gets good reviews.

Marmalade Boy: Immoral Love

Chapter 1

The trip had been wonderful indeed. Kyusyu and all it's attractions had been the best moments Miki ever spent in her life. Yuu was thinking the very same thing. It was sad that it would all come to an end just as soon as they boarded the plane tomorrow morning.

Their last moments on their trip were spent at a coffee shop, just so they could drag out their time a little more. With the shop closing it was time to head back to the hotel, and soon after back home. Home, where they would live out the rest of their lives an arm's length away. Never being able to hold each other or touch each other again. It was the cruelest thing that fate had ever dealt them. Or dealt anyone for that matter.

Miki paused at her hotel room door. She was waiting expectantly for Yuu to enter his own room. He paused and looked at her. "What's wrong?" Yuu asked.

"N..No..Nothing!" Miki blurted out.

Yuu grinned at her and laughed. "Oh, I thought you lost your key or something. "I know you."

"How could you say that! I have the key in pocket." Miki couldn't hide that fact that she was a little annoyed.

"Why don't you go ahead and go in your room then." It was a statement more than a question. Yuu grinned at her again with that.

"After you…" Miki grinned back at him.

Suddenly the grins disappeared as if they both silently agreed to stop pretending. Yuu could see sadness and pain in Miki's eyes. And she could see the same in his. There was no need for words.

Then without warning, Miki's eyes began to well up with tears. She couldn't hold back any longer. She flung herself at her brother. His eyes went wide at the touch of her body pressed up against his. She sobbed against him, grasping at his shirt and holding tight. The sobs turned into a wail. Yuu could only look on with a tormented gaze.

Shutting his eyes tight he decided to take action. Taking a startled Miki by the arm he flung open the door to his room and pulled her along with him. The door slammed its self behind them and Yuu dropped the key on the floor. Yuu pulled Miki close to him in a passionate embrace and took her lips for himself. Her sobs died down within this long awaited embrace. Tears still gently flowed from her eyes.

Yuu gently pulled away from the embrace to look Miki in her tear-filled eyes. "Marry me." Yuu's face was serious as he spoke. His eyes were intense. Miki could feel the words as well as hear them. The look on her face was one of surprise, as well as happiness and sadness all at once. "Of course, not right now… As soon as I graduate and get a job!" Yuu continued with his plea to her.

Miki couldn't believe what she was hearing. Her face changed to the look of, grief-stricken. "Do you know….What you are talking about? The tears started to flow again as she used Yuu for balance as she found her way to the floor. "It's all wrong."

"It's not impossible." Yuu's voice picked up more passion as he continued to speak. "The family registry doesn't show that we are biologically related. We can still legally get married." Yuu was crouched on the floor in front of Miki holding on to her arms as she clutched at the chest of his shirt.

"But… we are….related by blood!" Miki finally managed to get the words out with a stressed cry.

"I DON'T CARE!" Yuu's voice cried out in the most passionate outburst of emotion she had ever seen from him. His eyes held conviction and passion. Never had she ever seen Yuu act like this before. He pulled himself away from her grip but continued to stay close to her gaze.

Miki's face held a look of surprise but her eyes held steady in their gaze. As if to silently say she understood. She let Yuu continue on with the passion that he had bottled up for so long.

"I can't stop loving you. I've made up my mind. I'd break any rules or moral code… just to be with you!" Yuu paused, the serious look was retained in his eyes. Miki returned his gaze through welled up tears that were no longer falling. He continued. "It's not going to be easy for either one of us. We can't have children and will always have a sense of guilt. We might end up living a guild-ridden life, loathing ourselves…. But I am ready for that. I will do anything to live the rest of my life with you. Can you …handle this with me? Miki?"

Miki felt a little choked up from all of her crying. She returned Yuu's serious gaze and prepared herself to respond to his words. "I will go through anything with you. Forever… with you!" Miki continued her sob as Yuu embraced her even tighter.

They stayed like that for quite a while. Just holding each other close and not letting go. Finally Yuu loosened his hold on her and arose from the floor. Extending his hand out for Miki's he pulled her up from the floor and wordlessly led her over to the bed. He sat down on the edge and guided her to sit next to him. Pulling her close to his own body.

Miki nuzzled her head up against his chest and closed her eyes as he gently caressed her. Suddenly he spoke up, breaking the long silence. "Miki" He paused and she pulled away from him slightly to look at his face. "I want to make love to you." His voice was gentler than she had ever heard it.

A startled gasp escaped Miki's lips, as her startled eyes looked Yuu in the face. On his face was a most serious look. Like he had never spoken such true words in his life. Miki could hear her own heart pounding in her ears. Or was that Yuu's heart? Her stomach did a flip-flop, she felt like she had just plummeted down the biggest hill of the roller coaster.

Yuu noticed that Miki's face was tinged with a pink flush and her eyes looked panicked. Gently he put a hand to her face and finally continued to speak. "But I know we have to wait. That's the down side to being responsible." Yuu paused for a second and drew in a breath. "If our situation were different, I couldn't stop from throwing responsibility out the window. But since we are blood related, we can't take a chance."

"Yuu…" Was the only word that Miki could utter. Her eyes shimmered with love and admiration. Yuu spoke to her with the strong resolve of a brother and the passion of a lover. The rest of the world may condemn them for their sin, but she didn't care. She could never love anyone as much as she loved him. Her heart fluttered at the though of the question left in her mind. When will the time come?

"We better get to bed. We have a long trip ahead of us tomorrow." Yuu smiled at Miki just like nothing had ever happened.

Miki was ripped from her thoughts and just nodded. "Ok." Was all she could manage, everything seemed kind of foggy right now.

Seeing that Miki was a little dazed Yuu helped her to her room. Her urged her to get dressed for bed and get some sleep. When she finally got her pajamas ready he felt he could leave her alone. "I love you Miki". He said as he gave her a kiss on the forehead. "Good night."

"Good night, Yuu. I love you." Miki seemed to come back to her senses as she looked up and smiled at him.

Yuu let himself out the door, closing it gently behind him. As he closed it he turned and leaned his back against it and sighed. "Miki." Letting out another deep breath Yuu returned to his room and followed his own advice. As he got ready for bed he just couldn't stop thinking about her. God, how he wished he could hold her all night long. That was an understatement, he wished he could hold her forever.