This story, and those following it are under a total overhaul at this time.
I realize I made an error in posting this before I'd fully edited it, and now that I'm in a new state of disarray, I have elected to update and edit the living daylights out of this series.
Please be patient. It will be up soon. I'm hoping to re-post at least a chapter a day until I've got the whole series re-booted.
