OMG idea, we had to read The Declaration by Gemma Mally for our English set book and idea popped into mined. So... I had to write this story. Please if there is anybody out there who has read the book, please tell me. Our English teacher said she had to import it from Overseas.
( PS I normally skip all this so no hard felling if you do ;) just will help you under stand better)
Flying pigs and opera singing whales, The Phantom JZ
PLEASE READ FOR STORY OUT LINE!
This story is set in a dystopian future ( opposite of utopia) where all people had to sing a document called The Declaration, when singing the declaration you get to take Longivity witch makes you immortal, but the catch is you are not aloud to have children if you do you will be sent to prison and your child to a Surplus Hall ( eg. Grange Hall in the story) and your children will have to 'pay for your sins' by doing hard labour and getting beaten dali if stepping out of line or thinking out of the box. Having your own thoughts is a sin. A Surplus are children who's parent have broken the law and have 'no right to live'
Blurb:
My name is Hiccup. I'm a Surplus. I don't belong here. I've been sent to Grange Hall to pay for my sins, actually my parents sins. Why, because they had me.
