Before I begin I just want to make sure you know that the concept of this book is one that booksfan110 originally wrote about. When I read it I wanted to write my own story based on their concept. I have gotten their permission, so once you have read this make sure you check out their page! This is only the first chapter.
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TRIS
I wake up with a jolt. I sit up strait and look around. I am confused; I am in a hospital room, there is strange man I don't recognise sitting next to me. He looks at me and starts to cry.
"Tris, you are OK how do you feel?" He asks me,
"I'm sorry I think you have the wrong room, my name is Beatrice Prior,"
"I know who you are Beatrice, don't you remember me?" He asks looking sad and just as confused as I am. Finally someone I recognise walks in. It's Caleb, but he is wearing blue, like he's in erudite.
"Caleb! Im glad you are here, but what on earth are you wearing? The choosing ceremony isn't till later today,"
They look at me like I'm crazy.
"Did you choose erudite! Did I miss my own choosing ceremony! Where is Mum?" I say tears in my eyes, something weird has gone on.
"Beatrice, what day is it today?" Strange man asks me,
"Today is the day of my choosing ceremony," I tell him honestly. This must upset him because it make him cry.
"I leave this to you Caleb, I'll send Natalie in. Be brave Beatrice," he says as he leaves. I look around. I'm in a hospital room, all the walls are candour white. There is a mirror on the far left wall, I ignore it I'm still abnegation, there is a light box displaying several scans of my brain and a shelf filled with tiny bottles of of colourful liquid, there is a tube entering my wrist obviously filled with one of these liquids. My mum walks in and rushes over to grabs my hands, which for her is an extreme display of affection,
"Beatrice, honey I'm so glad you are OK," she says and tears run down her rosy cheeks.
"Mum, I think that she was exposed to the memory serum in the chamber not the death one, she thinks it's the morning her choosing ceremony. She didn't know why I was in blue. Mum she has forgotten who Four is!" Caleb tells my mother. She looks at me with apologetic eyes and strokes my hair gently.
"Beatrice, sweetheart we will let you rest, I love you," She says and leaves with Caleb. There is a glass panel in the right wall revealing a small waiting room. Mum hugs strange man and the she and Caleb leave. Strange man sits down on one of the little chairs in the room. He rests his elbows of his knees and rests his head in his hands, I think he is crying. I don't know why, I have no idea who he is. I roll over and try to sleep.
Thanks again to booksfan110 for letting me use their idea!
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