Alright, so obviously I was getting nowhere with the other story. I wasn't really sure where I was going with it in the first place... anyways, long story short... I wrote the other one, wasn't exactly sure where I was going with it but had an idea... now I'm more sure where I wanna go with it... but not sure how this will go either considering I had a dream about ninja turtles... in fact, I guess its the dream that inspired me to rewrite this story and just make it better... anyways, here's the remix and I'm probably going to rename it as well... :) hope you enjoy..


She ran down the alleyway. She knew the men were closing in on her. She still couldn't believe that the man she had trusted all that time had turned on her... but really, what could she expect. She ran down the moonlit streets. She knew she was gaining ground between her and the two men, but she couldn't slow down. If she slowed, they would surely catch her. But she couldn't keep running either. she was getting tired, and needed to hide, and not outrun. She rounded a corner, and took a breather, hoping she had lost them. Suddenly, she heard the men stop in their tracks just down the street.

"Hey!" One shouted.

"What are you doing?" the other one shouted. She heard a struggle and the two men screamed.

She came out of the alleyway to see a figure with a hat on and a trench coat. The two men laid against the wall at his feet knocked out. She saw a pair of eyes glance at her from beneath the hat before turning and running.

"Hey, wait!" she called, chasing after him. At least, she was sure it was a him. he kept running. Before long he turned an alleyway just a few hundred yards in front of him. As she turned the corner, she heard a clank. As she got all the way though, there was nothing but a brick wall. The figure was gone.

"hello?" she called. There was no answer. There was nothing there he could be hiding behind or under. The wall was too high to jump, and there was nothing he could have climbed to get up the walls onto the roof. He just vanished. she looked down, wishing she could have thanked her rescuer. It was when she looked down that she saw something gleaming in the moonlight.

"A manhole?" she questioned out loud. Yeah, it was possible. Sewers were big here in New York. she opened the manhole, finding it easier to open then it should have been.

She swiftly took off the lid and climbed down, pulling the lid back over.


Raph walked down the sewer hall back to the lair. It wasn't too far from where he was. He was surprised the girl had kept up with him that far. but he had lost her in the dead end alley. That's what he thought, anyways, until he heard a loud clank behind him.

"Ah crap." he said, running down the sewer pipes towards the lair as fast as possible.

"Hello! Is anyone here?" He heard. He felt bad leaving her, but he had to work in concealment. Even if it meant leaving a little girl... lost and alone in the sewers.


she looked down both ends. She had no idea which way he could have gone, even if he had gone down the manhole in the first place. She picked a way that looked better and started walking down it.


raph ran into the lair breathing heavily.

"Raph, what's wrong?" Leo asked, seeing him first. Mikey looked up from his video game, pausing it. Donnie stopped working at the computer for the moment, pushing back his chair and looking at Raph.

"A girl... she followed me into the sewers."

"What?" Leo said astonished.

"why?" Donnie asked the question that was on all their minds.

"I saved her and I guess she just wanted to thank me. but I couldn't risk the safety of our family. Let her see what I really was. Trust me, if she had seen what I was, she wouldn't want to thank me..." he said.

"You did the right thing my son." Splinter said, coming out of the shadows. Raph wondered how long his father had been standing there.

"what should we do? I mean, she could be coming up that pipe any minute, nosey little brat." raph said, hoping she wouldn't find the lair.

"We go into complete lockdown." Leo said, answering for their father. Splinter nodded. "that would be best." he agreed.

"alright. Donnie. You go up the stairs. Make sure the lights are off up there and turn off that computer. Raph... you keep watch and let us know if you hear anything between now and the three minutes it will take us to turn everything off. I'll get the lights downstairs... Mikey..." he looked at Mikey who still had the controller still in his hands.

"Turn the game off..."

"but," Mikey started to protest, "I just got the high score and..."

"Now." leo argued...

"but..." Mikey stopped, realizing he had been beat.

"ah nuts!" he said, pressing the power button on the xbox and tv.


Ryan walked down the sewers. Her way was lighted every so often by a drain that had the moon shining through it.

"Hello! Is anyone here?" again, she was only answered by an echo of her own voice. She lowered her head in frustration as she came to a ledge. She crawled up on it, curling up and laying down. She silently cried, lost, alone, scared. Somehow feeling betrayed and more importantly, not sure what her next move would be and where she would go.


alright, y'all review... like I said, this is just the first chapter for the rewrite of My Little Girl. I got lost in that one and absolutely had to start over... so, let me know how you like this one... IceCreamPopStar especially... I hope you like it :)