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"No, you know what we are castle, we are over!" Kate's voice was low and threating, her eyes were unblinking as she stared at castle, which was standing in the middle of her loft, mirroring her expressions and body language. Their standoff lasted for what seemed as eternity before castle gave up and walk swiftly passed Beckett to exit through the door. And soon Kate was left standing alone, still staring at the space were castle had been, it did even go through her mind that she should have run after him and finally tell him her feelings, but she was too stubborn. She slowly, after calming down after a few minutes, moved to the couch to continue her work on her mother's case. The next day, Beckett started her as usual but everyone else noticed that she seemed distracted, in-between her work and daydreaming. She didn't even notice the car that followed her to work, or even that it was still there when she had finished and driven home. She barely noticed the man almost follow her to the Chinese takeout restaurant several hours later. And the window that was open when she got back, however she noticed the group of men waiting for her in her loft, as they crept up behind her. Beckett turned suddenly, kicking the first man in the stomach making the man fold in two and back off. She then threw a punch at the second man's face before she hit violently in the head by the third man. Kate stagger backwards and before she could compose herself the second and the third man were upon her, knocking her to the ground before turning her onto her stomach and holding her hands and feet still. The first man staggered over to the restrained Beckett with a grin on his face, which was the last thing Kate saw before she felt a needle in her back and her world went black.
When Kate came to, she tried to move her right hand up behind her back but her left hand her raisin with the right, confirming her theory that they had stolen her police cuffs and had cuffed her hand behind her back. As she cast her eyes down she noticed that her feet wear not tied to the chair she was sitting in. as she gazed around the small room she saw chains hooked onto the wall, she knew that she would most likely be moved to those chains as soon as her captures realised that she was awake. Kate's whole body ached as she tried to stand on her own for the first time since her capture, as soon as she placed all her weight on her legs, her knees buckled and she fell back into the chair. Her next attempt was more successful as she was able to stand on her own, as she attempted to take a step she noted that the drugs she had been given had made her legs heavy and that her walking the few steps needed to get to the door would take more time the she had expected. After 5 minutes of slow and sluggish steps she was relieved to finally make it to the door, however she knew that it was locked and she had decided on a plan where she would wait behind the door for her captures to walking and then she would strike them and run as fast as she could to the exit. The only flor in her plan she came to realise was that she would have to kick the attacks as she was unable to use her hand which were still cuffed behind her back, Kate's solution was simple, since they were all guys she would just have to aim for their soft spot. Her plan was not as good as she thought, as soon as the three men entered she kicked to first man but before she had any other chance to kick again the other men had semi-automatic machine guns aimed at her chest. As much as she wanted to leave this place, she knew she could leave in a body bag. Kate couldn't do that to her father, she knew he would not be able to cope with her death as well as her mother's. she also though about her friends and how she could not cause them that much pain, and Kate also though about Castle, and how if she died now, he would never know she felt the same way as he did. So Kate froze, surrendering to her attacks, the second man, who was clearly the leader, nodded toward Kate then whispered in the third man's ear. The third man placed his gun behind his back before walking over to Kate, he suddenly punch Kate's stomach as hard as he could. The blow made Kate fall to her knee, winded, the third man then kicked her stomach violently again. This blow made Kate collapse to the ground, her stomach and ribs overwhelming her minds with pain. The man now grapped her right arm before pulling it in such a way that he dislocated it, Beckett screamed as the pain became too much to mask. Her mind was a blur as the pain was all she could feel, finally the third man deliver a hard blow to Beckett's head, relieving her of her pain as darkness consumed her.
Beckett's mind was a blur with pain and confusion, as soon as she opened her eyes; they were overwhelmed with bright light making it painful to keep her eyes open. Very slowly Kate opened her eyes again allowing them time to adjust to the light the shone in her face. Beckett squinted around and saw the chair that she had been originally sitting in in the middle of the room and then Beckett gazed up seeing that she was now connected to the wall by the chains she had seen earlier. She made the mistake of moving her arms to see how tight the chains wear and pain shot through her right arm as she pulled on her dislocated shoulder, making her moan in pain. After her moan, Kate continued looking around the room when suddenly the door open, reviling the three men. The first and the third man were holding a large bag each, the sight of these bags gave Kate goose bumps and made her minds slightly wonder about what they contained. As her mind wondered back to the current problem, she was on her knees, chained to the wall with a dislocated shoulder, a concussion and properly several cracked if not broken ribs and at the mercy of her captures.
She was jolted from her thoughts by the second man speaking, "Nice of you to finally let me talk instead of attacking my men. Are you feeling more cooptative after you little nap? Now Kate, I bet you want to know why I have brought you here? And maybe you want to know where you are and what my name is? Well detective, you may call me Zeus, as for my brothers you may call them bear and wolf." Beckett smiled she could help but say "so you the king of gods and you brothers are only dirty animals?" As soon as she finish she regretted it, wolf looked across to Zeus who nodded before moving to in front of Beckett's face, he smiled evilly before kicking Kate in the stomach on top of her already bruised and broken rib cause Kate to yelp in pain before folding in half as much as she could muster without pulling on her shoulder. "As you can see detective, you should choose your words carefully before you speak as there can be consequent and don't thing that I kill hesitate to kill you but you should know if I have to, I will make it very slow and painful. And to answer your question on why you are here, well I am simple going to test whether you are worthy of Richard Castle, as he is such a great man." He smiled as he mentioned Castle's name, Beckett's heart twinged as castle was mentioned, she loved him but she was never going to admit it to castle let alone Zeus or his brothers. Zeus continued to speak "to show that you are worthy of Richard Castle, you will have to pass multiple test that will put you against various elements, if you fail a test it will result in your demise. Now we shall leave to sleep and prepare for you first test, I suggest you get as much sleep as you can, the first test is quite difficult." Zeus finished by smiling at Kate before turning and leaving through the door, closely followed by bear and wolf leaving Kate alone in the small room to worry about what the first test could possibly be.
Beckett did not sleep well after she was left alone, she had moved to back against the wall so her arm were able to rest in front of her. The pain and the worry she was feeling turned her dreams into nightmares were she woke up screaming or crying for 5 hours. After her failed attempts of getting some rest, her minds retreated into a state in-between dreaming and consciousness, which lasted only 1 hour as then bear entered the room with a needle and a joyful smile on his face. A shiver when down Kate's back as she saw the needle, her mind screamed at her to move away from bear and she followed by trying to move to the back of the room, she immediately regrated her actions as the slight movement had pulled on her right shoulder and her ribs. Beckett let out a small yelp before bear reached her, his smile grow as he punched he in the face making her fall backwards and slam her head on the concrete. Bear then kicked her head again rendering Kate unconscious before bear even stabbed the needle into her neck.
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